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Posted: 19 years ago
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you better cont and thanks for contneing for me!!! 😳 😳 that was sgreat part! cont soon!
whats wrong wid kripa!?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey that was a brilliant part....i loved it....i cant believe this is ur first fanfic..it doesnt seem it..its seems like you have so much experience. Its brilliant, i hope u continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hmm continue soon. what's she hiding? can't wait to find out. it's awesome!

shaheera
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: muqualp

you better cont and thanks for contneing for me!!! 😳 😳 that was sgreat part! cont soon!
whats wrong wid kripa!?


aww thanks muqu. i'll continue tomorrow. lol u r the one who told me to continue today 😆 had to continue 😉 😊.


Originally posted by: Pooja922

hey that was a brilliant part....i loved it....i cant believe this is ur first fanfic..it doesnt seem it..its seems like you have so much experience. Its brilliant, i hope u continue soon 😛



lol thanks for the wonderful comment, lol i still dont feel like fanfic is going good but i will continue tomorrow. thanks again 😊

Originally posted by: Shahrambaa

hmm continue soon. what's she hiding? can't wait to find out. it's awesome!

shaheera



u'll find out whts shez hiding soon. thanks for the comments😊

Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was g8 loved it but wat was in the envolop??? 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks

Originally posted by: kyph05

that was g8 loved it but wat was in the envolop??? 😃


kashish wait kar lo naa u'll find out i told u i have whole fanfic writen😆.. it might suck afterwards in a few parts🤢... but i hope it doesnt and that u like it😊

-Ruby
PS- everyone next part tomorrow for sure.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was GREAT ruby!! i just read all 4 pgs of it and it was really good!.. it really doesn't look like ur wrting for the first time 😉.. anywas can't wait for the next part!..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: DeepaliC

That was GREAT ruby!! i just read all 4 pgs of it and it was really good!.. it really doesn't look like ur wrting for the first time 😉.. anywas can't wait for the next part!..


hehe thanks deepa. finally u decide to show up😆. thanks for the comments will write tomorrow 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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This part specially updated for Kashish 😆 .. she slapped Simone for me 😆.. anyways hope u like it herez the new part
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Recap
Kripa quickly hid the reports in her bag. And stuck her tounge out at Angad 😆
Kripa – Thinking Angad everyone has someone but not me. I'm all alone. one too far away bhaiya, 2 best friends who out of both don't even know ....

Part 3

As Kripa was lost in her own thoughts Angad started to speed up the car.

K – Angad slow DOWN!
A – First Appologize AND promise you are going to have lunch with me
K – OMG!! Om baba u winn! I am sorry
A – AND?
K – AND I'll meet u in resturant for lunch
A – That's like a good girl

They reached school. As the both went in

PA – Kripa Sharma if you are in school come to the student services. That's Kripa sharma to student services

Kripa quickly ran to Guidance

L – Kripa, Mr.Walter
K – Thanks and she quickly ran into the room

W – so Kripa how are you today?
K – good...
W – and the report...?
Kripa just broke down, unable to say anything

Sitting in class Angad felt like something was wrong. As if someone really close to his heart was hurt. He shut his eyes and saw Kripa's face.... full of tears, red eyes from crying and pain writen all over it. Then the next thing he was the Medical Report envelope he saw in the morning.

P – Mr. Angad I know you have no intrest in Science but can you please just pretend to pay attention
Angad got up and quickly ran out of class

P – Josh, now where are you....

They were both out of sight now.

P – OK! Now back to class... Diversity.
[ I know angad you love her, But Kripa made me promise not to tell you.]

J – you man whats up??
A – dude.. nothing. I just feel like someone close to my heaert is HURT!
J – KON?! Kripa.. hehhe
A – Yea man and sheesh stop laughing shez a nice person.

Josh decided to leave as Angad walked into Student services.

A – Mrs.M , wherez Kripa? WHERE IS SHE?
M – Angad koh.. shez with.. Mr.

Just then Kripa came out crying, but she spotted Angad and quickly dried out her tears.
A – Kripa.....?
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what is kripa hidding? why was she in Guidance? what is angad going to do now...?
tc,
Ruby
- do comment, like it so far??? 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was g8 awwww taht was wonderful as always thx for specail updated it forr meee thx for making meee feel specail thx alottt ur a wonderful friend thx alott

lvu
kashish 😃 😃
Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago

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