KahaniYehPyarKi -my ff ~ Last Part pg 28!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its my first time ever that im writing a fanfic. its KYPH. hope u like it



Characters:

Khana's

Angad ' in highschool senior 18 yrs old

Kartick ' 25 working in fam business in Indonesia married to Misty

Misty ' Kartick's wife. 25 yrs old. Pritvi's older sister

Aliya ' 20 years old. Angad's. In England studying. In love and engaged with Pritvi

Sharma's

Kripa ' 18 years old. Highschool student. Best friends with Pritvi and Angad. Paresnts died 3 years ago in a car accident, the reason why Kripa doesn't like to drive.

Somesh ' Kripa's older brother, mentor, friend, parent, guide, EVERYTHING. Working with his family business. Can do anything for kripa.

Dadi ' takes care of kripa when Somesh is out. But right now she is gone with somesh.

BOSE's

Pritvi ' 20 years old. Kripa's and Angad's best friend. Engaged and in love with Alyia. Also in england for studying.

Misty ' Pritvi's older sis. The intro above in Khana family

INTRODUCTION

As long as they could remember, they had been best friens. Esspecially Angad and Kripa, being in same calsses as long as they go back, but always pretended not to know each other in school. Even though it was like that, they still cared for each other, sat beside each other in class and knew everything about each other. Never was there an event [outside or inside school] when they didn't go together. Or a school day without the other. But changes were starting to occur, how? Why??

So it's a story of 3 friends. So much of surrounding around 2, Angad and Kripa. It's their story.


So......

- There is no enemy but there is pain

- There is no fighting but there is crying

- There is no hatred but there is seperation

- Still no anger but there is breaking




Why and How is that?? Well keep reading.



hope u like it, do leave comments. how does the intro look? I'll post 3 or 4 promos soon😊

take care,

Ruby

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ruby interesting cont soon
luvin da intro šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PROMO 1

- wke up loser
- bhai let me sleep
- LOSER! broz out he told me to wake u up
- the girl gets off the bed reallly embarrased "YOU! I'll get you"
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PROMO 2

Angad - man nothing i just feel like something is wrong, like someone i love is HURT!
Person - hahahah kon Kripa?


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after
you see kripa running out of some office crying but she wipes her tears off seeing Angad
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wht is kripa hiding? why did Angad feel like that? who is the 3rd person? keep reading 😊
Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounds interesting plzz cont soon ruby 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg that g8 loved the intro post the first part sooonn can't wait and ruby that a g8 intro and interesting continue sooonnn can't waittt 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 intro n equally fab promos!! cont. soon!! i wanna read this!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww thanks guys for wonderful comments. *HUG* to all. I'll continue soon i promise.
thanks again sooo much, im doing this first time so if it goes a bit up and down hope u guys dont mind 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's very interesting...i loved the promos...pleae continue with your part 😊
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aww guys thanks for everyonez wonderful comment herez the first part, reallly hope u like u.


Part 1


Somebody [a girl] is sleeping, with a blanket on her face. Alarm clock goes off, but she turns it off and sleeps again.

After a while a young dashing guy enters the room. It's Angad. He looks at the girl and blushes. But then he pulls her blanket off. It's kripa sleeping.
A -wake up already
K- yawn bhai let me sleep
A- :loser Somesh is out, he called me to wake you up.

Kripa gets off the bed and sees angad and is really embarrased.
K – YOU! I'll get you!

She runs after him. But suddenly she felt the pain in her side of stomach. She held her stomach really tight and sat down. Nobody knew what was wrong with her. So she painfully, tears rolling down her eyes, hand on her stomach walked to the washroom.

Angad returns back in room
A- kripz, school... lets gooo!
K- angu u go I'll meet u there
After sying that tears started coming down even more. The hand on her stomach looked as though her nails were dug in.
A- (rt out the washroom door) Motti, I will never go alone and anyways you've been coming alone WALKING! Or not coming at all for the longest time. Now quickly COME!!!
K- acha jee mere boss. Ruko!

Now a smile appered on her face. She was ready in blue jeans and a pink top. She took some medications while angad waited sitting on her bed. Suddenly he saw an envelope sitting by the pillow. He went towards it and picked it up. On it it said "Medical Report". Just when he was about to take it out, when his hand still inside the envolope, kripa came out, she saw what angad had in his hand so she ....
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wht did she do?
whts the report about?
wht happens next well keep reading
tc,
Ruby

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