KahaniYehPyarKi -my ff ~ Last Part pg 28! - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pooja922



ruby why are you being silly? u r doing a fantastic job ok? im sure that those who read ur fanfic really appreciate you writing it...so dont think u arent doing a good job....cuz i love it and im sure the others do tooo.....samji!😡😉

lol ab pooja ki daant par gahi hai, continue karna hi parey ga😆 ... and yes ma'am samhaj leya😳 no more complaining warna im going to get yelled at by more people😳😆

note to rubina (ruby) - pooja is scary 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey cont sooon!! i lub ur fan-fic 😛 i hope kripa is not dying or anything
himani
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ruby89

lol ab pooja ki daant par gahi hai, continue karna hi parey ga😆 ... and yes ma'am samhaj leya😳 no more complaining warna im going to get yelled at by more people😳😆

note to rubina (ruby) - pooja is scary 😆



jee haann!!! no more complaining and now u have to continue!😉😆.....and hey im not scary!!!😭😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Sour Skittles

hey cont sooon!! i lub ur fan-fic 😛 i hope kripa is not dying or anything
himani



thanks himani. no no no jst keep reading... the mail character dies the story ends, hai naa?😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruby89



thanks himani. no no no jst keep reading... the mail character dies the story ends, hai naa?😆



haha good one ruby!!!😆😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ruby89



lol thanks. hehehe i had to dedicated it for u, after all the reminders i gave u😆



lol 😆😆😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ruby89

guys one more thing... im sorry 😳 . First time writing it and I think im not doing so well. But I'll try really hard to make it good i Promise 😳 😳 😳

hope u liked the last part,

-Ruby



ruby again 😳 plzzzz don't say that ur ff is going great ur ff is different which makes it specail for meee and all off uss 😳 ur ff us going g8 love itt noee hurry upp and post the next part sooonnn!!!!!!! varnaa 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48

heyy guys m back lol yup new part... hmm this one goes to Pooja 😆 for helping me with the fanfic, thanks hun.

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Recap
A – Mrs.M , wherez Kripa? WHERE IS SHE?
M – Angad koh.. shez with.. Mr.

Just then Kripa came out crying, but she spotted Angad and quickly dried out her tears.
A – Kripa.....?

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Part 4

A - Kripa whts wrong?
K - angad nothing....
Angad's hands were now on Kripa's cheek. which sent Kripa chills to her spine.
Now Angad just held Kripa's hand and started to drag her to outside.
Kripa struggling to walk - Angad?
A - yea?
K - what r u doing?
A - remember lunch...?
K - in a low voice - Oh yeah lets go

After lunch Angad took Kripa to her house.
K - thanks Angad, so I'll see you tomorrow, k byez
Kripa quickly ran inside without waiting for Angad's reply. she went straight towards kitchen and drank water to help herself from crying. Just as she turned around.
S- BOO!
K - AHHHH!!!!
S - hahaha got you, baby sis
K - Somesh bhai, quickly huged him and tears started to form in her eyes
S - Kripaa chalo, he took her in her room made her sit down
S - kya hua? what did the doctors say? what is making you so upset?
K - bhai... woh.. slowly she started telling him

On the other hand you see Angad driving in anger.. he looks at the passenger seat.. OH CRAP! Kripa's bad shez going to kill me i better go give it to her. He turn the car around and goes towards back to Kripa's house.

Back in Kripa's room, kripa is sitting in Somesh's lap, she head on his chest, crying.
*Flashback*
In a doctor's cabin, layed the helples Kripa.
K - Doctor?
D - hmm?
K - what happen?
D - I'm doctor Simone.
K - interupted *yelling* I DONT CARE! JUST TELL ME!
D - see kripa with new technology we can cure you... the thing is.... Maybe we should call someone from your house to be here.
K - NO! just tell me and STOP with the nonsense.
D - walks up to Kripa, holding her shoulder, Kripa you have cancer. Its first stage and good that we found it, it can be removed form an opperation
Those words rang in Kripa's head like bells.
D - Kripa?
K - hmm?
D - i warned you 6 months ago
K - yea well I... *crying* ok what is the next plan?
D - opperation and as soon as possible, I'll call you and let you know when
K - I'll be in touch im going now.
Kripa ran out of the hospital as though she was running for the first time.
*Flashback ends*
K - bhai that was yesterday... I don't know what to do... SHe gets up off the bed going towards the door walking backwards...
K - bhai i have cancer *crying*
S - Kripa.... he turns towards the door.
S - ANGAD?!
Kripa quickly turned and saw Angad standing there.... tears rolling down his face. He droped the bag on the floor.
K - Angad.... *Crying*

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what is angad gonig to do?? why did Kripa hide this? will kripa be ok? keep reading to find out

tc,

Ruby

ps - do comment😊

Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
awwwwwww ruby .....what a brilliant part yaar.....i loved it ...and u have to continue soon.. 😛 😛 let's see how kripa consoles angad
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
fab part!!!!! omg....awwww angu!!! bechari kripa!

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