Arshi SS: You're My Rajkumar (Part 6 - Pg 28) - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...Khushi's innocense is clearly reflected.Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Very nice update! :D

I like how Khushi is just as idealistic as show Khushi, and Arnav is, well stone-hearted, yes, but in his own non-deliberate way. They can learn from each other, and complement one another beautifully.. but i sense theit egos are going to come in at some point. Which would definitely make for a fun read.. hehe :P

Write on, Arina! I think you're a very good storyteller. You have the concept set very clearly in your mind, which makes for very smooth, effortless reading! Kudos!


Ps. You may have had a little misunderstanding regarding yr comment on my FF.. I did reply. You're one of my fav commenters ever, so i wd never ever ignore any of yr comments :))


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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wat a cool update...
n very true ans by Khushi
brilliant one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Hmm...like the way these two can carry a discussion!! Nicely written!!

Update again soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh dat was great conversation between dem!
Update soon
it was good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loving this story... looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice that she told it to his face now let's see what he does about it 😉

Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute story! excited to read on(:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a very meaningful conversation the two shared. Cant wait for the next update! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice :D
continue soon 🤗

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