TaaRey FF: Can Vengence Turn Into Love

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Man!sha

@_LostSoul_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Awesome yaar.

Kya concept hai.Brilliantly written

Waiting for your next update.

Edited by maneesha_sanker - 13 years ago

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priya

@lovelypriya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

osam osam n osam fatima loved it very much it was osam n different n u r amazing what a mouse the way nilesh said jeery sone de was osam n it was superub i liked it very much thanks 4 the osam ff fatima really thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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SanelyInsane

@SanelyInsane

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

omg fatima...what an update...this was the best..👏..especially the mouse waala scene🤣
and rey grabbing taani's hand coz of mouse's fear...aaawww soo cute

Edited by pixi26angel - 13 years ago

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Suhaima Kazi

@.wanderlust.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Loved it Fattz , Update Soon 👍🏼

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marina

@Loveurlife1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

edited my comment on page 12 :)

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Tia3303

@Tia3303

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

OMG this is so funny 🤣
Amazing update 😃

It's amazing how Tanni has become such good friends with the others.I loved the part when Rey caught Tanni by the arm because he was afraid of the mouse 😆

Awesome job 👍🏼

Waiting eagerly for your next update 😉

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SharafTasnim

@SharafTasnim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

awesomeee this one's full of fun!! vicky sweating!Rey havin an ugly nose! :D :D REY havin thoughts about Taani seein her in nighty!:* nd d last scene was awesomee !!awww !! this is gettin far more interesting =) lookin forward .. you're really a genius & makin things upto expectations ! =)) update soon =)

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desigirl_VD

@desigirl_VD

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

unres

OMG THE LAST PART WITH THE MOUSE 🤣 reminded me of channing tatum and amanda bynes with the tarantula 🤣 and how i wanted to be in channing tatum's arms instead 😆

LOVED it fati esp the bonding moments btwn sharey and vicky and taani so cute

update soon!!

Edited by desigirlx5 - 13 years ago

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ABCDesiGirl93

@ABCDesiGirl93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

girl u write good! haha thnks for the pm!

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SanelyInsane

@SanelyInsane

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

omg fatima...the best episode so far...👏...especially the whole mouse waala scene and then rey grabbing taani's hand out of the fear of the mouse...awww...that was so cute...rather the cutest scene ever...rey is sooo cute☺️...wish the cvs show sth like this scene in the show as well to get back the fun and frolic back in the show

Edited by pixi26angel - 13 years ago