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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#441

2 updates,

Yay!

I'm so happy!

Chapter 6:

It was cute, and adorable and everything else a young innocent love is! the way khushi went tot ake care of him, her calling him baby, and the teasing!

His realization that she was so natural in his house!

Brought a smile to my face, and I read the part 3 times! 😊

Thank you for the update and PM!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

And now chapter 7:

His family arrived! Heheheheh!

It was sweet to see the natural way they all gelled with khushi! And khushi being khushi, laughing at "chhote"! 😆

But the phone call to her dad, Shyamu at work right? 😡

People are such jealous jerks! Shyamu! 😡

This happened to my sister, she was on her third date and a jealous jerk called my dad and said the same thing! Needless to say, the sense of betrayal and humiliation fueled my dad's anger! it wasn't pretty for a few years! Only silver lining is that love survived and my sister is happily married to her now hubby! And Dad loves my jeeju!

But Shyamu oh Shyamu, you have really done a disgusting thing!

Sorry for the rant, it brought back memories of that time in our house!

This is why I love your stories, they touch my heart and bring out feelings that I had even forgotten I had!

Thank you!

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Ultimatewishes

@UltimateWishes

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Wow 2 updates :) Thankyou :)

Beautifullly Written ...i was laughing so much when they were caught :)

*Chotte* ...LOL

:) many thankss

update soon ( ~ :!!

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Oh I love this playful arnav! Loved both chapters...I sense khushi is in trouble ...theheheh but I m sure arnav and khushi will handle it very well.

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Aww so cute how Khushi instantly came over and made soup for Arnav! She's so sweet!

Love them being all lovey dovey towards each other, im always smiling so hard whenever I read those parts!

Also love how Khushi ended up meeting Arnav's family and them liking her instantly. But how could they not! Everyone loves Khushi, she's awesome :')

Im pretty sure that phone call was from stupid Shyam, grrr >:( always trying to interfere with Arnav and Khushi's lives

Awesome chapters!! Update soon!!

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

That was so adorable!

This whole story has such a realistic touch to it that it makes this all the more enjoyable to read :)

Thank you for the double chapter!

Do continue soon :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

wow back and with double updates
could things get any better no
awww baby was ill huh
and chotte bechare was the brunt of his di and khushis joke right
man they are so cute together
wish she hadnt lied to her father though like that
she should have toold him she was going to take care of a friend of hers who happened to be a dude
am sure he wouldnt have minded
am with shashi am afraid why lie when your parents seem to be easy going why worry them more
aww she really took good care of him right
cheers for pm

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

glad to see two chapters at once. makes up a bit for the wait.

loved the update but am so glad that you made fun of the "chotte"

surprised at shashi's reaction since the updates did not indicate that she lied to go meet arnav.

also who is the character who called. my guess probably shyam but how would he know where she is? and what she told her father?

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

lovely..:):)Khushi rushed 2 him on his juz 1 call..well..he did dt 4 her..i mean she loved bein i rain..lolguys r too much somtimes..dey wer cot lolthank gog door band tha..:P:Pelse tohehem eehem hoo jaata inka.haahahseems Arnav's family likes Khushi..bt..wt nw?i mean Khushi's fthr.?d col ?

who cold?

d suspisn?wt wud happn nw.?he's strict acc.2 Khushi..i hope nuthin goes wrong.:)dooo pm me wen u update more..😛😛😛thnxxx 4 postin 2 chapters..:D😊😊😊