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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Certain updates give you a smile from the start to to the end and this was one of them...

Loved the way she called Arnav as baby...I was blushing...

She going to take care of her baby,her sudden meeting with his family,their lunch together and the continuous laughter...loved it to the core...

Khushi is genuine and so simple...No wonder Arnav has fallen for her...

.I can understand her father's state,his daughter lied to him and has broken his trust so it is natural for him to get angry...I'm just scared as to what is going to happen now..

The phone call was done by Shyam right?

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

I 've read all the chps in 1 go & I have to admit-
ITS AMAZING😳
&I am loving this Doc.Arnav☺️

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

ALL READERS

Please read -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3255941/sharing-without-asking-plagiarism-note-pg8

AngelTeen

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Inaya Haya

@lilmzsunshine

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Oh, I like this new twist, with Shashi and the 'mysterious' caller.

I'm so glad you didn't make Anjali or Nani the kharoos type.

Eager to read more ...

-S

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Great chapter - have read this from the beginning and love it! Shyam is wonderfully creepy - seriously do some men like this just NEED their object of desire to be unwilling??

Arnav is wonderful and his relationship with Khushi is proceeding very nicely! Wonder who did call Khushi's father - Shyam I guess? Strange thing is this actually happened with me ie my mum received a call like this...I just remember her freaking out a lot and me being shouted at!

Sorry to hear about the posting of your works elsewhere without your knowledge. Beats me how shameless people are. You wouldn't take someone's food that's sitting there on a table without that person's permission would you? Same rules apply: if it's not yours ask before you attempt to take/share whatever...geez! Just cos it's the Internet doesn't mean basic manners don't apply...😡

Bim

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

both the parts were full of different emotions,

And am really glad that you updated two parts together.

Wish you all the best with your exams,

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

It makes you go all tingly and smile broadly and then grin and smile more and then frown a little.

Shashi does seem right as a father but is it not too soon to be judgmental?

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Awww she called him 'baby'! I was blushing too!! 😳

Oops Babuji will be hurt with her unintentional lie. I wonder who called?!! 🤔

I love the fact that she met the family. How welcoming they are.

Thank you for giving us 2 updates! :)