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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

dkj

Arnav and as a serious, eyebrows scrunched waala Doctor, saving Khushi from the evil clutches of Shyam, oh boy, complete swoon. :p

That part where he reassures her, dressing up her wounds, and then that talk of rain, it was just so sweet, beautiful.And that line about Khushi being beautiful, but not in your face, some wonderful writing there. Loved the OS.

A special mention for the fact that you chose the concept of the leech of a Doctor that Shyam was here, because in reality you DO find people like that. So great thinking!

P.S. Would you kill me if I asked you continue this? Its just that it has so much potential :)

P.P.S Hot doctors are a myth. Universal fact, I think. Maybe except Armaan. And now Arnav.

Beautiful OS Rae!:)

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

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Started with a shudder and ended with a smile :)

This is what this show does to you. You see ArHi in every situation - hospital bhi nahi chhoda!!

But I have to say this, maybe it is because you wrote this but I actually kept picturing Armaan in the OS :)

And surprisingly, I didnt mind it :D:D

Rae, going to the hospital anytime soon? ;)

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natalie12

@natalie12

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

soo lovely.wish this was an ff or something

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30
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Started with a shudder and ended with a smile :)

This is what this show does to you. You see ArHi in every situation - hospital bhi nahi chhoda!!

But I have to say this, maybe it is because you wrote this but I actually kept picturing Armaan in the OS :)

And surprisingly, I didnt mind it :D:D

Rae, going to the hospital anytime soon? ;)

Dr. Armaan? Me likey! He is the one who got my expectations all high about the looks of doctors. :p

And no hot doctors at the hospital, man! Sigh. :p

Thank You though! :)

Glad you liked it.

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

res :( One scrap wouldn't have hurt!

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Arnav Singh Raizada is a doctor ☺️ *dies* You know that I love doctors, don't you?

OMG! I'm in love! Dr.Arnav Singh Raizada is my man ☺️ Okay now I won't get over the fact that Arnav was portrayed as a doc in an OS by my favorite writer.

Khushi sounds like a fun person. Awww she got hurt but hey she got to see & befriend a hot doc. All the hurt was worth it! 😆 She was quite similar to our very own khushi in the show. Lively, funny, shy, always spreading happiness & adorable! I liked the way she yelled at Shyam. Also I loved her bonding with Arnav.

Shyam is such a disgusting person. He was taking advantage of a patient? Really? I want to kick him! 😡 BTW on a serious note I'd like to say two words about doctors: After studying shitload of coursebooks doctors are devoid of all the leacherpan that once resided in their souls! Sad but true! *sigh*

An awesome Os. And this would be one of my favorite OS from now on, you know the reason very well ;)

Keep writing! 🤗

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyrains
dkj

Arnav and as a serious, eyebrows scrunched waala Doctor, saving Khushi from the evil clutches of Shyam, oh boy, complete swoon. :p

That part where he reassures her, dressing up her wounds, and then that talk of rain, it was just so sweet, beautiful.And that line about Khushi being beautiful, but not in your face, some wonderful writing there. Loved the OS.

A special mention for the fact that you chose the concept of the leech of a Doctor that Shyam was here, because in reality you DO find people like that. So great thinking!

P.S. Would you kill me if I asked you continue this? Its just that it has so much potential :)

P.P.S Hot doctors are a myth. Universal fact, I think. Maybe except Armaan. And now Arnav.

Beautiful OS Rae!:)

Think about me sitting there imagining Arnav as hot doctor...just think! Doctors soch rahen honge pagal ho gayyee hai! Lol!!

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked it!

And about continuing it...matt bol yaar! Ideas toh hain but...lets see...

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...
res :( One scrap wouldn't have hurt!

Edit:

Arnav Singh Raizada is a doctor ☺️ *dies* You know that I love doctors, don't you?
OMG! I'm in love! Dr.Arnav Singh Raizada is my man ☺️ Okay now I won't get over the fact that Arnav was portrayed as a doc in an OS by my favorite writer.

Khushi sounds like a fun person. Awww she got hurt but hey she got to see & befriend a hot doc. All the hurt was worth it! 😆 She was quite similar to our very own khushi in the show. Lively, funny, shy, always spreading happiness & adorable! I liked the way she yelled at Shyam. Also I loved her bonding with Arnav.

Shyam is such a disgusting person. He was taking advantage of a patient? Really? I want to kick him! 😡 BTW on a serious note I'd like to say two words about doctors: After studying shitload of coursebooks doctors are devoid of all the leacherpan that once resided in their souls! Sad but true! *sigh*

An awesome Os. And this would be one of my favorite OS from now on, you know the reason very well ;)

Keep writing! 🤗

Awww! I didnt know you were online and I havent sent out the PMs for this yet but sorry!

And I know you like ...Doctors... (the username is a bit of a giveaway :p) and I am your favourite author?! *Blushes*

Thank You so much! I am glad you liked this! :)

And there are some doctors who are still leechad...I guess padhai se zyaada leechadpann pe dhyaan diya hoga. :p

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

Arnav would make a lovely plastic surgeon... just like in Mils and Boon ...hmmm let me fream about him in this avatar today!!!!

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

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Dancing in the Rain😍

Hot Doctor?😍

Wounds and Arnav Singh Raizada?😍

Ok now enough of dreaming 😆

Rae honestly! This was the best AU OS I have ever read!The fact that it has a doctor[My dad is one and maybe I'm going to become one too :P] AND it has Arnav Singh Raizada got me :D The way your words flow is just so flawless!Hot doctors are a myth?hmph.Doctors are a myth in India nowdays😳

PS- Lol And I knew Doc aka Alanki would be very happy on this one ;)

Edited by Risha_ipkknd - 13 years ago