~ One Fine Day ~ ArHi SS IMP NOTE Pg 88

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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Amazing update...
Awww...my Dr.Arnav is back...*blushes* ...i missed him :(...
He is so so cute...:) I loved the way he admires Khushi and his famous scowling at his Di is adorable...
Khushi is so cute in this ff...i miss her blushing in the serial these days...
Heck i miss my Arshi only in the serial these days...
I liked the way she entered his house as if she owns it...her concern for Arnav was heart warming...
Loved the joke regarding Chotte...:)
Oops...Khushi darling you are in deep trouble when you go home...

Rae i am glad you updated two parts...try and update soon because i love this SS...:)

Waise i too forgot What does Khushi do in your ff ?

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

So cute!!!
I just loved every aspect if this, especially chotte.

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nj.123

@nj.123

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

That must have been Shyam...seriously he needs to get a life😡

Loved the update and how she's gelled so well with his family.😃

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

i tell you this story always remind me of dil mil gaye...

and the leads.. they are always the one of dmg..

sorry for that..

coming to the update.. one word BRILLIANT..

your surprise was wonderful but i still wanted to read more..

uuhhuu...

the chemistry..the love.. everything is o beautiful..

till date the story was dream like-- not much of mirch masala..

shashi uncle-- ask him to take a chill pill... arnav is good

man..your daughter will be happy with him..

i am sure the call was made by shyam the creep...

good that arnav's family already know about their relationship..

elder's can handle shashi and garima...

that chote part.. it was hillarious.. you completely cracked me

up..hahaha...

loved the dear... and yeah thanks for sending the pm individually

though i already read it before getting it..

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Lucky us 2 updates and both of them great... Khushi came to look after an ill Arnav was sweet but lying to her dad was wrong... I completely understand the hurt and anger of her dad since there was no need for lying and I bet the well wisher of Mr Gupta was none other than Mr Jha... I think he wants Arnav to proper beat the crap out of him then he will learn his lesson properly.

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fafizz

@fafizz

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

hey! im new to IF . just read ur work and it is beautifully written. u r a brilliant writer. looking forward to read more from u.

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Good to read it after so many days! And two updates together. Wowsers.

The doctor with the flu, the caring girlfriend. Cah-ute. I also have flu, does that count of me having the sexy doctor? Or maybe a caring chef whom I could watch make soup for me? Does it, does it?

Shashi Gupta and the stranger. Who was it? Problem in paradise! Shucks. I hope the air between them gets cleared out soon!

Loved the romance, the welcoming family.

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

whoa..!! 2 updates..
dats awesome..
brilliant 1s.,
loved it..
ll b waiting for d next part..
carry on..
thanxx for d pm.

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fafizz

@fafizz

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

angelTeen can u plz give me a link where i can read more work of urs? and plz add me to ur buddy list. thank u!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

She came over.. Well, well when he sneezed in the phone, that was so so obvious wasnt it?? 😆 And Khushi met his family.. Now, thats really something.. Whats up with Shashi and Garima now?? 🤔