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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

woah!! read this in one go!!

and amazing is not the word!!

please update further!

-P

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

Where is Dr.Arnav? I want an update blessed with his sexiness!

Where are you?

Long time No update! *Puppy Dog eyes*

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Ahh they finally kissed<33 Arnav is such a cutie loved how he totally made the kiss into a scientific reference 😆

If only a guy like Arnav existed in real life...

update soon!!!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my other work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my other work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

Res for 6

--Edited--

Why does this story always make blush and giggle as if I am reading a love story for the first time?

The doctor has become the patient now I see :-P

Smart boy. He knew Khushi will be worried for him the moment he sneezes and true to his trust she did and came directly to him :-) On a side note he did sonething that she liked falling ill in return. Kitna achcha hai ye hot and sexy banda ;-)

Khushi's caring mode is a treat to watch for us and for him. He wanted to tell her where is what. Badmaash just wanted to spend time with her. My mom says if you have a good friendship with the kitchen you would instantly know where is what :-)

If Arnav didnt have cold I could really very well imagine what all he would have done to her ;-)

You cruel girl. You meano. You tadpaaoing female is the comment you would have gotten if the next chapter wasn't right above this comment :-D

One kiss to ArHi for the double appearance and one to you for the double update :-) :-*

Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

res :O

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I'm not late. Now Rae won't be mad at me 😆

Okay it was shocking to see that you are updating two chapters. That's a nice surprise.

Loved both the chapters.

Mera Dr.Arnav is back ☺️ Awww 'baby' ko cold ho gaya. Like their sneezing convo :P & khushi's concern. Ahann! Arnav's reaction to the new endearment was fantastic.

I loved the way khushi entered his house as if she owns it & hayye she made soup for him. This is so cute.

Raizadas are the best! I knew they'll mingle with khushi in a heartbeat. Chotte thing was really funny. I'm also laughing at it :P

Anjali is adorable.

Who's that guy? The one who called Babuji *suspicious*

Oh I hope Babuji will listen to khushi.

Brilliant update Rae!

Edited by ...Doctor... - 12 years ago

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Res for 7

send me a scrap the moment you update or else sit and stare at my two reses :-D

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Khushi is Khushi. She will never think even once before doing anything and she came face to face with the Raizadas.

Also I forgot to mention in the previous comment that she wasnt ashamed of not being able to own clothes that she liked since she couldnt afford it :-)

Chotay :-D Poor Arnav kitna embarrassed ho gaya :-D

I knew the Raizadas will like her instantly and she them. Table ke niche hand clasping haaye ;-)

Rae ArHi ko thoda sukoon do. These gossiping people. Who is this J fellow doing chugli of Khushi?

I can understand how bad Shashi must be feeling but ek baar hamare hottie baby ko dekh lo then sab thik ho jaayega, hai na?

Where is chapter 8 ha?

Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 12 years ago

#399

Doctor ;)

I love the fact how relate-able this story is. The silent hurt faced by the father at facing unintentional dishonesty from his daughter. Then the sudden meeting-the-guys family, followed by awkwardness, then laughter, then fuzzy teasing, it is all so adorable.

And Khushi's simplicity never fails to make me smile. Her character is so genuine, so 'real', you can 'feel' with the character,

And then Arnav and Khushi are so cute--goes without saying though. That part about the 'baby' was so ...I was blushing too.

Thank you for this story <3

Edited by mistyrains - 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#400

Res - I missed doing this!

2 chapters? 2 chapters? Happy Dussehra indeed. The "good" updates have won over the "bad" breaks :) Jai Sri Rae! (wink!)

And so adorable both chapters. I love this normal, more relatable relationship (yes that's a phrase thank you very much) between our favorite couple.

And Khushi's laughter at "Chhote" - of course she laughed. Anyone would. In fact I was surprised Khushi of the show didn't laugh at that address for her Laad Governor!

But Shyam that snake. That pest actually. Snake is too refined.

Sigh, I see a troubled father and that is never a good sign, is it?

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago