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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Oh you did convert this into an SS. I apologize for late comments, had seen your PM but never got around reading it, until today.

I must say the SS story is developing beautifully...the slow realization of feelings, the first date was just brilliant, the conversation easily flowing, the laughs and the tinkles, finally the kiss on the palm..everything written very beautifully.

Shyam is a douche isn't he? I hate him already... And I am so glad, Arnav

Kicked his ass, and he got a suspension too..yay yay!

I can't wait for these two to kiss, make out, lol no I mean I can't wait for the to go ahead in this. These two are adorable, and I wanna see them happy.

Thanks for the PM..loving the story!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

NOTE

A major bullshit has happened. I overwrote on the word document which had One Fine Day and saved that and as a result lost my OFD data which included half of the next chapter! GAH! So pissed off right now!

I shall try and wrap my head around it and write the next chapter afresh...hopefully we shall have an update today. Sigh.

Thank You for the wonderful response and sorry for the delay.

AngelTeen

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Leachad Shyam & his soulmate ☺️

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Dr.Arnav ☺️ Do this fast:

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my other work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

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I'm first! Say Yay!

Edit:

You could have named the chapter as 'A Kiss' Itna bada description 😳

I loved it, no prizes for guessing that :P

Firstly, there was nobody else except Arhi *Dhinka chika dhinka chika..err* Sorry!

Secondly, I loved the way Arnav caressed her picture on his phone. Really romantic. I feel like pulling his cheeks. I'm glad he was concentrating on khushi rather than the conference coz if a doctor concentrates on anything else apart from studies then that doctor loves that other thing truly *nerd alert*

Thirdly, I love romantic movies & I'm glad khushi chose a romantic movie. PS I love you..hmm..Barun Sobti where are you?

Fourthly, LOL at khushi's father, he scares off cute & handsome boys 😆 No wonder Arnav is scared of him.

Fifthly, I loved their movie date especially khushi's reactions. But the best part came after the movie. Hayee! They kiss ☺️ Now don't hit me for saying this but the part where Arnav tells khushi that he's gonna kiss her & all was really funny. It was like he was giving instructions to a 5 year old *shuts up*

Sixthly, I hope they'll KISS more often now

P.S.- This comment shows that I'm crazy so ignore my crazziness & bhavnao ko samjho!

P.P.S- I didn't comment about the cute ass thing, that doesn't mean that I didn't read it :P

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Me :)

--Edited--

My heart is going all Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak after reading this update. Let me calm down my heart first. I will come back to re-edit this post 😳

--Re-Edit---

My heart is still racing while I type this update. Rae you sound very romantic, especially the way you set up your scenes. I am sure your guy is going to be a lucky one 😊

No better way to torture a guy than make hi watch a romantic movie. But I am sure Arnav enjoyed himself because he got to spend some time with her.

Arnav is afraid of her father 😆 How typical! 😆

Wow and the kiss! 😳

I really loved it that he first told her what he is going to do, making any girl weak in her knees and then asked her permission. That ok? meant a lot to me and Khushi.

You made the kiss so desirable - hence my racing heart. Sigh. My my what was that scientific term for kissing! Mujhe to samajh mei hi nahi aaya until I read the last part 😆

All in all a heart racing update 😊

Edited by lazyleaves - 13 years ago

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

I read the sub-heading :

The anatomical juxtaposition of two orbicularis oris muscles in a state of contraction

And I was like whether it would be a kiss or a whistle. Of course, the second option HIGHLY UNLIKELY. Rather outta this world. 😆

P.S. I love you! What a bang on preference. God knows how many times I've cried after seeing that movie. *sigh* Gerry <3

"I am going to kiss you now and this will be the most perfect first kiss ever shared by two people and it will only be the beginning to the most perfect kisses ever shared by two people...okay?"

How can I ever, ever, forget this line! The truly heart winning statement and Doctor!! You. ish. so. naughty.

A really heart warming update.