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nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

"I am going to kiss you now and this will be the most perfect first kiss ever shared by two people and it will only be the beginning to the most perfect kisses ever shared by two people...okay?"

OMG! What a brilliant chapter. That single dialogue took my heart away. Dr. Raizada had me grinning and blushing like an idiot throughout the chapter. You have a knack of writing stunning romantic scenes, Rae! :)

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Kshweta

@Kshweta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

nice update, like this sweet ff

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

awww awww awww that was so cute dear & the def. of kiss is just mindblowing..
thanx 4 d pm.. 😊

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

aww dat was amazing..
gr8 work..
loved it..
thanxx for d pm.

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#325

The kiss was just Magical *Sigh*

Wow! The way you described the kiss was just beautiful.I loved how Arnav felt khushi's taste was natural and like the first dew of rain.Beautifully written! 😊

"It indeed was the most perfect anatomical juxtaposition of two orbicularis oris muscles in a state of contraction."

Seriously? 🤣 Man! First i read it as Orbicularis Occuli and i was damn confused why is he saying it as Occuli then later i realized that it was Oris!

Loved it Rae! Beautiful update

PS: I love PS I love you ❤️

Edited by GayuArnav - 13 years ago

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Hey!

This was truely a beautiful chapter. Arnav being the most perfect gentleman a lady could wish for 😉 and Khushi, well Khushi being herself. No facades. No pretences. Nothing of that sort. Such an adorable couple 😃.

PM me please when the next chapter is uploaded 😊. Thanks!

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Aashifa

@curledup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Considering you are kinda passed at me I decided to comment early so I don't pee you off any further. :/ A heart warming update, their relationship has moved even further into commitment which is lovely to read. I love the progress and the trust they share very cute and adorable and then lastly the kiss shared and Arnaavs scientific version of it was just *sigh* I wish me an arnav. A lovely chapter Rae

Edited by curledup - 13 years ago