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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

two beautifully written pieces... the first one has arnav using his common sense [something missing in the show!] ... his jealousy, fear and love for khushi shone through... the second one is an agonising portrayal of his pain and helplessness, dare I even say, utter defeat

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Tamanna Morshed Shamim

@Tamannaus

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Wow!! I love them all. 👏brilliantly done Krani. ❤️Please PM, would love to read more...

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

All the drabbles are absolutely amazing. Loved them Waiting to read more. I have send you buddy request. Please accept it and pm me when you update next.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Very beautiful OSes all of them.

All of them represent the real emotions and the feelings that I would like to see in them. Sadly the show isnt doing it at all for me.

I am glad I got to read such a beautiful interpretation of the rasams, and everything else.

Thanks V for the PM.

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

luv ur works

thanks for pm

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Hey there K!

V recommended this thread to me- and I must say, than God V got around to do that! Because I sure was missing out on some Fabulous Writing!

Beautiful Works Hon! And Amazingly written. The emotions, the descriptions, everything... I could literally see it all playing out in front of my eyes.

Great Work. And Keep it up! If you are sending out PM's for the drabbles here- do send one to me too yeah?

Cheers! (And loads of Love and Hugs!)

G <3

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

so far I love this 4th the best - really well written - love the dialoguse as well - so real well done

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Hiii
Beautiful writing
Loved them
Sweet story's
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Pls do pm me when u update
Thanks

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

loved these 2 - I had silently predicted taht it was Khushi that got hurt like your OS - & was fully expceting that & so it was if you read my mind - reallyggod - the second one ws brillant when she says to DM that she take his pain & return the happiness

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kalikijen

@kalikijen

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

WOW!!!!! Just read all your drabbles ine one go... loved them all... especiallt arnav singing...awww he sung infront of the whole family... ;)
pls do pm me when you update next

Edited by kalikijen - 13 years ago