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Vee

@reflorated

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

I'm speechless, K. I'm speechless.

Is there any way I can pitch this across to the CV's? Anybody reading this... please let me know! I MEAN IT!!!This was such a beautiful thing!the first one. Shyam... that chootiyaa! I SWEAR M-Effing ASSHOLE!! Excuse my langueage, wont you?and the second one... find the screenplay writers Email ID and send it across.!!!

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Farah

@farah53

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

1st one: I,personally, would've loved it,if something like this happened in the show too!!

2nd one: I thought there was nothing redeeming about this current situation on the show..You just proved me wrong...& I am delighted!!😃I hope the CVs too turn this gloomy track around by using it for strengthening the camaraderie between ArShi!!!😉

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809768

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Wow- that was amazing- both of them!
The first one was so beautiful- you could feel for that man and his pain!
He realises it was Shyam, doesn't he; and resolves to make him pay!
How i wish this realisation would dawn upon him in the show! :)

The second one was splendid as well- loved the way you decided to use this tragic incident as a cataylst for them coming closer, and not the other way around!
Arnav, with his hands joined together in front of the idol of Devi Mayyain- something you don't get to see often!

Edited by ClumsyLilGirl - 13 years ago

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Preeti

@preetihere

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Seeking Support was really touching...will u continue a lil more on that? I had tears reading that :(

The Fourth Man was quite scary ...
i like all ur Drabbles ..they seem so sensible - an alternate where things seem better than what is presented!

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

You need to become part of the IPK writing team because this is a 100 times better than the crap that is being dished out to us. Absolutely loved The Fourth Man. In fact, I had imagined something similar in my mind when the scene with Shyam spreading the glass shards was shown. I guess all of us did but the CV's love to rain on our parade, don't they? Great work Krani. :D

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

You should have seen the happy dance I just did!!
You know I just LOVE your writing. It's so well thought out and the emotions that are in each piece are just overwhelming!!
1st One: I honestly thought that Khushi was going to get hurt in the show, but that didn't happen. I really liked how Anav was just standing there watching Khushi finally living her dreams.
2nd One: I hope the follow your lead and use this opporuniyy to make their relationship stronger!
Love you and ALL of your work!!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

the "like" needs to change to "LOVE" seriously as always well written and heart wrenching. Love it!

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Krani you are back & I love the way you have done it. Love the drabble idea 👍🏼

The first drabble was superb ... absolutely loved the episodes where Arnav had stood up for his wife and you wrote out the scene with the right touch of drama & emotions of Khushi & Arnav.

The second one was really cute ... Arnav ji singing, LOL no wonder Khushi dropped the thaal 😆

Khushi giving Arnav what he has been wanting since Diwali was superb ... finally something that Arnav ji would treasure totally 😉

Am not sure if you sent out the PM's for the drabble thread & so hope that I was not missed out. I do read, enjoy & comment dammit ... err albeit a bit late 😛

Would love to read a fun drabble with the entire family & them teasing Khushi & Arnav ... what can I say am a sucker for such scenes 😃

PS -- Please update Arranged Marriage soon Krani ... waiting rather impatiently 😆

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Both of them have rendered me speechless, the first a little more than the second. The line where he thinks that he could stare at her, all he wanted, after all she would become his wife in a few more days. That line had me scared, don't know why. But I loved the way you have described all the emotions flitting through Arnav's face when he saw Shyam, heard Khushi's scream. Terrific.

And the second one beautifully showed the vulnerable, helpless side of Arnav, as Anjali's brother, standing at a point in life, where he's unable to do anything. And I like how there is no incredulity shown by Khushi, no questions, just a silent show of support. Amazing work Krani :)