Drabble Central (collection of short OS's)Pg21 NEW - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Thanks a lot V for recommending the link.. I am toh having so much fun reading..

The Lunch Ordeal

wow that was awesome.. I saw wish arnav does that in the serial.. not just angry glares but say something that would shut her up as well as her pull her hand down..

Nahi Nahi

That was fabulous.. Naughty Arnav.. poor khushi.."nahin nahin, kabhi nahin, mein hoon bekarar'


Lost and Found

Thank god.. in the serial i was so disappointed that Arnav being the smart one didn't see Shyam cut the camera right under his nose.. how vigilant is he?

Returning the favour

Wow.. this favor is definitely something I would love to see... so many missed kisses.. beautifully written.. enjoyed her sneaking in and getting caught.. did she forget that he also senses her presence like her..

The Fourth Man


This OS is like something I would want to see but didn't.. and you fulfilled my dreams.. your arnav is so in the character.. he knows what is going around him..

Seeking support

Beautiful beautifully written..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Loved The Lunch ordeal, Returning the favor and The Fourth Man. Wish we could have seen similar scenes on the show...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Loved all the new Drabbles!
I loved How khushi sneaked into RM to kiss him.And the kiss was Magical So beautiful.I just had goosebumps!
The second was just Amazing! How awesome it would have been if Arnav was this Intelligent! There is still hope that he might connect the dots and find its the Creep! 😡

And the third one though Arnav dint pray in front of the GOD Cvs surely did utilize the situation to show Arhi's trust!
Loved all the 3 drabbles! Just loved it Dammit!
K This is for you 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
This was so cute!! I love drabbles!! And this was just too damn cute! :) I wanna hug Arnav and Khushi! : )
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
I love the way you perceive the acts, wish some of them were actually what you wrote than the ones on the show...ATB for the future
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Nice stories.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
I loved the first drabble loved how he was consistent in standing up for her abd the way he did it was brilliant.
The second drabble was real sweet loved the thought of Arnav singing
The third drabble i really wished this would have happened in the show or does happen when the whole Shyam thing blows up and Arnav gets his revenge on him
The fourth drabble was so beautiful loved it their conversation over the phone was brilliant
The fifth drabble was brilliant love when Arnav is that aware especially when it comes to Khushi
The last dribble was real beautiful loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
I loved the idea of drabble.each of those are short but if smethng lyk dat wud hv happnd shw wud hav changd.
Loved each f them.
But lost and found is smethn i really wantd and u said it vl. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Great OS !!! Lovely works
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just want to say one thing - Mr Shyam pls start digging your own grave n then lie down in it.

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