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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

All of these stories are amazing and I read them all in one go when I discovered them today. I can't pick just one but they all show the progress in A&K's relationship. Great job.

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

KISSES : amazing !! It was so beautiful !! it felt like a poetry smooth n flowing !! :)

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Risha J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Very beautifully written. You described their emotions perfectly, especially the way Khushi stood by Arnav and supported him.

My request then, write something cute... Maybe something that features children, if you know what I mean. :)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

i love the drabbles...really nice...keep it up..😊

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masam

@masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

That was a thriller of emotions!
Enraptured, how you've described his strength. The mighty seeking promise from his little waif. Splendid!

As he looked down at her, the anger slowly dissipating, the question arose in those eyes asking her to let him lose control and throw Shyam out of the house, seeking permission to give into the anger, but she shook her head, her eyes holding his, her hand trailing down to rest against his chest – against his thumping heart, feeling the rhythmic beat under the palm of her hand.

THAT had me.
A great musing!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Loved it was beautifully written especially how Khushi supported Arnav and how he looked at her for comfort and suport

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

"Promose"...

very well written! I could almost hear his voice and his defeat... I could feel for her!

Lovedit!

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Beautifully written Rani.

The scene was so easily imaginable just because of the way u had written it.

The way Khushi has always been able to stop Arnav from getting angry with just a touch, the way these two can communicate with just a glance...

but that , "promise?" asked by Arnav takes the prize.

It was just a simple word but then it was Arnav asking, saying this and here lies the greatest trust that Khushi can ever get from him, him unburdening his problems on her shoulder.

Simply loved it!!!!

Kudos swtheart...👏 👏 👏