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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

'Returning the favour' was so good...Khushi has forgotten that he can sense her as she can sense him, whenever they are near each other.
Loved the way Arnav changed her chaste kiss to something they both wanted but had resisted for so long now.

Edited by swati-89 - 13 years ago

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

I finished watching yesterday's episode once again and then i read ur version of it and it seemed to just naturally flow from where it was left off in the episode. Liked it very much.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

hey dear

omg, wow, that was so so beautifully written👏

u created such a magical, passionate atmosphere...(sigh)

lovedd it

simply amazing⭐️

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

You have recreated the magic...

I do not care whether their marriage was consummated or not. for me, it was love at its most beautiful, passionate avatar.

Thanks darling..

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Updated on 18 :)

I know I have not un-res-ed my comments on Caught yet. I will do so soon

Sorry :)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

There are very, very few people on IF whose writing comes straight from the heart, you know , like its not forced, just a natural spill of words, that always manage to touch your heart. You happen to be one of them, and I will say it again, the effortless way of your writing is something you should be proud of. This OS had me feeling all tingly, warm inside. Does that make any sense? 😆

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Tara

@Hollagurl

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Wow!!! That was breathtaking!! If I was shocked while watching the episode last night, then tonight my heart felt like it was going to pop out as I was reading your OS. Every detail was so exquisite and just so beautiful, that I only wish it had been longer. I especially loved the parts when his lips covered the tears that she had shed, it really shows that any pain that she has to go through, he'll go through with her, and I found that symbolism to be quite enthralling. Once again Rani, your ability to create such beautiful pieces of writing has left me absolutely amazed...excuse me while I go back and read that again.

~Tara

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

that was utterly beautiful! more than doing it justice! love the part where he is filled with tears as well! beautiful beautiful beautiful!

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

love this idea... and loved the scenes!

arnav standing up to khushi was fab and so was he singing :)))

finally he found the camera... there are so many things still need to be unfolded! the innumerable cameras, shyams copy of arnavs will, anjalis series of accidents, shashis attempted murder, shyam copying the key to arnavs safe and what not!!! can u write some where shyam is not the only brainy one in the house??!!!