Drabble Central (collection of short OS's)Pg21 NEW - Page 17

Created

Last reply

Replies

189

Views

63.1k

Users

110

Likes

1.7k

Frequent Posters

207shikha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
i highly admired it.!

aww..it was so painful yet beautiful.!
ITS_LEENA thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
loved it, well written, especially his inner turmoil and how he relentedthanksfor pm
ShiningStar18 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely work!
very well written dear.
Loved reading it 👍🏼
bridgeofdreams thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Just readtwo of the drabble index!
Nahi Nahi and Kisses; they're really amazing. The way Arnav teased Khushi- Poor Khushi!
And for the first time he let her see his tears! and he expressed his love gently again!!
Thanks Krani for the Awesome Updates😊
ipkknd_gbdfan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Krani

Nahi Nahi..



Tonight is our suhaag raat the words rang through her mind, as she distractedly ran her hand through the lentils on a steel plate, trying to find the dirt in it.
"Nahi, nahi. Abhi nahi. Thoda karo inte-zaaar" Anjali sang under her breath, as her hands moved the knitting needles around, knitting a pair of socks for her child.
Khushi stopped going through the lentils, as her ears perked up, her face drained of colour, and the dhak dhak returned.
"Nahi, nahi, kabhi nahin, mein hoon bekaraar"
Khushi's eyes widened further, as the colour rushed to her cheeks, the steel plate clattered to the floor, the dry lentils flying everywhere, as the knitting needles stopped and everyone in the living room looked between the person who had just sang, and to the white-faced Khushi.
"Khushi?" Payal asked hesitantly, her eyes warily looking at the mess created on the floor.
"Chote?" Anjali asked bewildered, a smile playing on her lips as she looked at her brother, who had his laptop in front of him, his mouth curling up into a smirk. "Did you just sing?"
Arnav's eyes met Khushi's, and his smirk deepened before he looked at his sister, and looked back at his laptop, refusing to answer. His hand covered his mouth, the elbow resting on the armrest, as he tried hiding his smile.
"U-uh. I-I'll...I..." Khushi stuttered as she got up, her clammy hands gripping the sides of her suit, "I'll just clean this.." Khushi rushed out.
"Hariprakash!" Arnav called out, his amused eyes meeting Khushi's, "Hariprakash will clean it, you sit down."
Khushi averted her gaze, and sat down, her heart rate accelerating, as she tried taking a few deep breaths to calm her heart.
"Chote, you sing really well. Why haven't I heard you sing before?' Anjali asked, a small smile playing on her lips, as she concentrated on knitting the sock. Arnav looked at Khushi, his eyes boring into hers, warmth spreading in the pit of her stomach, as her cheeks flushed a deeper red, and he said,
"I guess today's just a special day, Di"

Dhak Dhak Dhak Dhak


AMAZING! I could actually imagine the reaction :D

And I have been at Arnav's spot - when I did sing and my family members did drop everything they were working on. (In my case, I wasn't excited about a suhag raat - instead, I had gotten my first client and my first pay check - $400!!! But I didn't do anything to hide the smile, like arnav did, and my constant happy face - even while sleeping - did scare my parents to no extent.)
Aashmin thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
I read all of them in one go...i wonder y dint v gt 2 those beautiful moments in the show...
jojo21 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
I greatly enjoyed your drabble central, they are great additions to the episodes they are related to. Thanks for sharing.
aarrsshhii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
This is jst awesome... so mny good os's.. u r too good krani..
aarrsshhii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
D shortest one wd d cutest one... arnav singing d song.. :-)
SSB28 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
The Lunch Ordeal ---------- This is the ASR with whom we all fell in love 😊
Edited by SSB28 - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary · 5 months ago

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/5175

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 4 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Priyogita · 1 years ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".