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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#591

Earlier I thought that she was bluffing but she is indeed serious and I can understand her dilemma. Reading so far I have a feeling we will get a very filmy "ye shaadi nahi ho sakti" types ending

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#592

What is stopping Arnav from marrying Khushi? Why is he so scared of /against marriage?

Loved the way he fulfills her desires by getting her jalebis with exactly three coils and gotewali saree...

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Sindhu

@dhulanya

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#593

really loved it...

plzzz let thm together...

love to read more...

thnks for d pm...

sry i cnt guess d climax...

but i think thy must b together...

loved it...

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#594

There's such a lovely quality to your work. It's optimistic and intense, but not dark. I like that.

And, your own heart and humour shines through the words. I like the line that he was looking at her as though she was a math question. The touches about how she liked jalebi with three circles--that precision reveals Khushi's character--and his supplying the jalebis exactly how she specified shows his devotion. You show us who they are. Brilliant!

Khushi's heart is breaking--but, of course, all will be well.

It will, won't it?

Maya

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farha

@farha5556

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#595

loved the update,continue soon,i read the whole part again and again so i think so i think kushi will scrifice her love for her parents and move on or she will go back to arnav for be with him for how long as he wishes.continue soon.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#596

I'm catching up with urs, Ain't I a good girl now?

This is interesting. They are deeply in love but yet cannot be bonded in marriage.

I'm totally feeling hurt for Kushi. That cannot be a simple decision to choose parents over her love. That too when that love was reciprocated.

Arnav from other side, his thoughts are too strong to go in and do a marriage. But he is too damaged already by keeping himself away from Kushi.

I cant detect the spoiler. U have written the last 4 paras cleverly, if one phrase says they will be together the next says no marriage!

Good one, Zehra!

Thanks for the pm

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Mrs.Beckham Sobti

@.shinchan.

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#597

awww poor khushi...

Arnav aisa kyu h??hahahha

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#598

Loved khushi side of things .. <3 .. I would try and find the clue in the other 4 parts but im really lazy right now haha ..!

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pmohini1

@pmohini1

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#599

i've been hooked on to this ss since it was an os and i think the sentence is...

"She was his from the day he had set his eyes on her and nobody takes anything away from Arnav Singh Raizada that which he really wants"

i am be wrong cuz im not that smart...

DO CONTINUE! ;)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#600

Loved the update, Zehra.. The way Khushis point of view was explained.. Absolutely wonderful.. Lemme read the parts again and see if I can decode it.. 😎 Inbestigation kareka padi😈😆