Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 - Page 5

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

ahhh aaa i just love the name sabse pehle n awesome start
loved it :)

thanks dear... 😊

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

congrats for the new ff..

baap re itna gusa...

he is really an angry man...

but a great warrior..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

thanks sweetie... will cont soon 😊

Originally posted by: Bells.E.cullen

wow... kya intro tha veer ka... MINDBLOWING...
entry bhi bdi happening thi...
lov der frndshp alot...
dying 2 read more plz plz plz pm me...

thanks for the comments sweetie...😊

Originally posted by: tejjo

sry di 4 being late

lovely n awesome part
so our veer is warrior
hmmm...wow di thrilling story
maza ayega...superb concept
n mindblowing description

ud soon
will waiting desperately
luv u

thanks darling... will update soon... luv u 🤗

Originally posted by: disha15

Another RT-MC ff by you! 😃 Mere to bhaag khul gaye 🤣

The title gives the entire warrior waala feeling.Mujhe toh Prithvi ke din yaad aa gaye 😍

Love the concept! <3 Update karo jaldi! 😃 and oh oh btw,ladki ko lao na jaldi 😳

hey sweetie... thanks for the comments...will update soon 😳 (this blush is a reply for your blush)...😉

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Wow! Another RTM ff..😛

I luv d starting of ur ff..

Veer..hmm.. tough but honest person.. I want to see d charater sketches of Veer & all his frnds.. plz giv d nxt update soon..

thanks a lot dear... will update soon...😊

Originally posted by: ashu1909

beautiful start of veer his name justify all.superb writing dhanvi do continue soon and thanks for pm

thanks a lot dear...will cont soon...😊

Originally posted by: sparksfly

wow di RTMC ff!!!! 🥳

d name itself sounds SO gr8!! 😃

d concept is superb!!

ekdum Prithvi wali feel aa rahi hai...full on royal...powrful...wow...wali!!😍 ⭐️⭐️

in dis angry...no nonsense...way Rajat seems 2 hawwtt...😍

luv it!! ab kuch Mugs ke baare mein bhi...😆

luv u di...🤗

hey sweetie... thanks for the wonderful comments... you will get to know in the coming updates...luv you 🤗

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great start

thanks dear 😊

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Originally posted by: pranita1202

superb fantastic

fantabulous

love it love it

i guess i don't have 2 tell u r superb writer

yeh toh sabko pata hai

so the physics joke was awesome i told my sis she agrees,she too hates physics

me too lucky to avoid the subject coz i did diploma n then doing degree

so all u gals rashu n other 12th passout or currently studying good luck wid physics (ofcourse some people might love physics , but none of my cousinns n friends do😆)

so veer in the gang . but u know even i was reading in my mind i was saying prithvi insttead of veer irrespective of the title

guess i got a sort of deja vu of tum mere ho

though in tum mere ho prithvi was a good boy n no family issues but he was fighter too

but in here he is i guess more dark i guess . so there will b more depth in the character

so it wil take lot of effort 4 mugdha to break through shell to make her place in his heart

or other way round he will lose himself in her. but she wil be scared 2 his violent personality

but after she will b attracted 2 him wen she wil realize he fights 4 the weak people n 4 justice

sooppper excited

P.S- can this ff or ss B official or unofficial TUM MERE HO- 2

thanks a lot for the lovely comments sweetie... 😊... well the title won't suit...as Tum mere ho had a completely different concept altogether... but i am sure you will love this one as tum mere ho...