Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47

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Shraddhamurat

@Shraddhamurat

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Veer stands for injustice thats really cool nd nice 😊

now and then he enters into a fi8 against injustice.

The man harassing a gal iz such a coward
well veer taught hm a nice lesson

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disha

@disha15

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

reserved :)

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Tell me something,is there any genre in writing that you're not good at? 😆 you've mastered everything!romance mein toh aap bhai kamaal ho hi(tum mero ho bein its brand ambassador) and horror (now with shikar 😳.romance+horror-deadly combo!) and now action also! 😃 bas ab comedy baaki hai 😛(btw many ppl have been telling me that they want an RT-MC comedy ff.start kardo na woh bhi 😳 )

This update was fully action-packed(ofcourse u already know that,you only wrote it afterall! 🤣 ) I loved Veer's character! He is so righteous!You've done a great job in showcasing his characteristics.

Super update!Btw ahem,humaari heroine kab aayegi? 😛 or wait,was that girl in the market her only? 😲

Edited by disha15 - 13 years ago

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

wow great update..m feeling like watching a film

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Swati Agrawal

@swati_prithvi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

wow nice ud.. full of aggression...fight..anger.. Veer fights against injustice.. well this make him different.. he is strong..brave..fearless.. & gud frm hrt...😛

bt he doesn't wanna show d soft part of his heart to any1..

got punishmnt of purchasing vegetables... ha ha ha...😆😆

thn agn he saved a gal..

gud..Veer is gr8..

luvd d ud..

waiting for d nxt part..😊

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Vry dishum dishum update di

kya ff h
rt is angry young man just like my aarav

awesome part tha di
first action scene is my fav...i visualise that scene...vikram enemy of veer huh!
Veer ke samne koi kuch nhi h

awww so sweet our veer fight 4 injustice n helped everyone

mera action hero h veer toh

wow punishment v mast h vegetables lana h market se

wo bhi girls colg ke pass se

omg usi hostel me mugs v hogi

kitna maza ayega jb veer roj fight karega
or roj usse punishment milegi
roj wo market jayega
roj mugs se milega
roj romance hoga or roj mugs pyaar se uski injury par ointment lagayegi

oh god mene kitna kuch imagine v kar liye

di u know na me a crazy fan of urs n rtmc

di market wali ladki mugs h na
chalo first meeting hone wali h rt mc ki

im waiting di
jaldi ud dena

wait hota nhi h mujhse

luv u

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

oh what a nice great part di...
veer is in his full too tashan...professor k wajah se vikram bach gaya...otherwise we will able to see super dangerous fight...dhishum dhishum
n wah re what a punishment...but the girl whom he saved is his heroine or some random girl ?
update soon
luv u :-)

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

res will edit 2omorow

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u noe di.. wat ma cousins say..

if u r mad at some one due to sm reason..

to it to fullest...

wat wrding dey use is- pitoo pitoo...AAPNE BAAP KA MAAL SAMJHKER PITOO...!!'''

(consider the man u beating - a property of your father...)

amzing know..

so here to , i ws cheering veer wid dis.. AUR MAARO AUR MAARO. AAPNE BAAP KA MAAL SAMJHKE MAARO..

haq se maare, lath(leg) se maaro.. punch se maaro, chate se maaro..

aapne baap ka maal samjhke maaro...

lovely dhisum dhisum update.. i lov all dis stuff...

but why did it end..

god dese tearchers hav such a bad timing..

local h sab k sab...

aieee...vikram... beta yeh aatitude kisse dekha rahe ho..

humare veer perr koi farak nhi padta..

u r flop in frnt him...

lovely update di.. loved it..

is it our mugzz...

but di, i dnt want mugz LIKE TOUCH ME NOT...

i want me equal dashing n smashing as veer.. TAKKER ki bandi honi chahiye.. plz...

ud soon di..

lov u..

maaro maaro, apne baap ka maal samjhker maaro

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Thanx for giving fab update... But i m waiting 4 d entry of beautiful nd fragile love of strong nd aggresive Veer's life...

Plz ud soon

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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

wow super mast update hai yaar...
god lv veer alot...
yaar humari heroine kb aayegi...?????
kya market wali ldki hi humari heroine hai...???
plz plz update asap...