Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
superb fantastic
fantabulous
love it love it

i guess i don't have 2 tell u r superb writer
yeh toh sabko pata hai

so the physics joke was awesome i told my sis she agrees,she too hates physics

me too lucky to avoid the subject coz i did diploma n then doing degree

so all u gals rashu n other 12th passout or currently studying good luck wid physics (ofcourse some people might love physics , but none of my cousinns n friends do😆)


so veer in the gang . but u know even i was reading in my mind i was saying prithvi insttead of veer irrespective of the title

guess i got a sort of deja vu of tum mere ho
though in tum mere ho prithvi was a good boy n no family issues but he was fighter too

but in here he is i guess more dark i guess . so there will b more depth in the character

so it wil take lot of effort 4 mugdha to break through shell to make her place in his heart

or other way round he will lose himself in her. but she wil be scared 2 his violent personality

but after she will b attracted 2 him wen she wil realize he fights 4 the weak people n 4 justice


sooppper excited

P.S- can this ff or ss B official or unofficial TUM MERE HO- 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
thanks a lot for starting a new rtmc ff dhanvi dii...
n sorry for late commenting...
bt awesome start...
luved it...aapne veer ka jo charater describe kiya hai rajat ko bilkul suit karta hai...eagerly waiting for the nxt chapter
ud soon nd plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: pranita1202



so all u gals rashu n other 12th passout or currently studying good luck wid physics (ofcourse some people might love physics , but none of my cousinns n friends do😆)... i m sooper adjusted to n okey wid logics.. physics has logic.. but chemistry dnt..


so veer in the gang . but u know even i was reading in my mind i was saying prithvi insttead of veer irrespective of the title... yes.. tum mere ho prithvi.. me too missed him here.

guess i got a sort of deja vu of tum mere ho.. me too.😭


P.S- can this ff or ss B official or unofficial TUM MERE HO- 2 ... yes.. tum mere ho two.. plz dhanvi di... i m missing tum mere ho vry much...



me in bolds.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Interesting concept...would love to read it further..
PM me when u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
i love your start. i love veer which is very stroge i m also read your previous storys. i love your all storys and also your writing style it is amazing. now i am wating for your next update becouse i am very excited for this story.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
i want update

i want update

i want update

i want update

i want update

i want update

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: apurva100

Awsome concept
update soon and PM me

Thanks ...will update soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: maria_awan

Really nice dhanvi veer is acute but a handsome warrior update soon and do pm me , back to u after long time missed u. With love maria

hey Maria...its so good to see your comment...missed you...🤗 ...i will update soon...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridzzi

intresting...Nice concept...
oh so veer is like angry young man...n entry with a chain...super dhansu...n about physics...well itni bhi buri ni hoti...liked the bond b/w the buddies...
eager to know about his heroine...what's her name?
continue soon
luv u...

hey sweetie😊...thanks for the comments...you will get to know in the coming updates...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kareena1994

Wow interesting concept.

thanks dear 😊

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