Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 - Page 27

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Freethinker thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

well like i had said it before, unexpected things happen
veer was smiling, he was being sweet n nice to arti, his caring for her,
and moreover arti being sensible for the first time from the begining

really i hv never imagined that a person like veer n an idiot like arti could define love like this or they actually understand the meaning of love
update soon
luv u :-)

hi Radhika
Thanks for your lovely comments...
yes you are right, but when love happens..then you start describing everything.
:) will update soon
lov u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love is blissful...love is eternal...and love is YOU...!

By far the most sweet and touching update Of Veer-The Warrior...not to forget..real as well!

Dhanvi...The way you described Love through Veer and Aarti's point of view..It touched me at every corner of my heart...! I believe the same..!!
Thank you so much for this update!
Really touched..!!!

A girl..who knew nothing but immaturity and a guy who was everything except humble...having conversation like this with all their heart is such a treasure!

Loved it totally...totally...totally...!!

Love
Apoorva!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Love is blissful...love is eternal...and love is YOU...!


By far the most sweet and touching update Of Veer-The Warrior...not to forget..real as well!

Dhanvi...The way you described Love through Veer and Aarti's point of view..It touched me at every corner of my heart...! I believe the same..!!
Thank you so much for this update!
Really touched..!!!

A girl..who knew nothing but immaturity and a guy who was everything except humble...having conversation like this with all their heart is such a treasure!

Loved it totally...totally...totally...!!

Love
Apoorva!

Thanks a lot for the beautiful comments... :)
Edited by Freethinker - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohhh god finaly di u give updates...
after so many days...😲
now i m again read ur fantastic updates
its so long that i was wating for ur updates but now finaly i got...
its all r amazing...👏
and arti and veer ohhh my god arti doing too much😳😳😳😳 with veer and i like that all too much things...its luvly hope veer should understand everything and we got luvly luvly scean😳😳😳😳 of arti and veer...😳
thank u...di😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
just read the beautiful story. loved it to the core. I can very well relate to Aarti's charecte :P
please update soon..
Do pm me 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Dhanvi How have you been?
Really missing your writing...
Read Tum Mere Ho for the fifth time afain and Shijar and Veet as well.
That's thr craze you develop...the reader never gets bored.

Come back super soon please. Everybody's waitig.

Love
apoorva 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

will update shortly :)



Waiting eagerly for d same dii..U stopped it at such a beautiful point..!!😊
Moreover I simply loved d conversation b/w them in part 15..it was just WOW..cant tell U how many times I read it..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 16

Before he could look up and ask something she entangled her arms around his shoulder "I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul." She whispered and buried her face between his neck and shoulder.


He took a deep breath and tightly hold her in his arms.

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Next Day

It was early morning when Veer woke up and saw Aarti sleeping next to him with her head on his shoulder. He glanced around, they were sitting in the gymnasium and any minute boys will come in for practice. He quickly wake up Aarti

"Aarti wake up" he said while patting her cheeks..

Aarti was lazy but when she opened her eyes she smiled at him .. "I was with you the whole night?"

Veer asked her to leave right now and he will come later

She nodded and was about to leave when he hold her hand ... she was surprised "Veer... how come you.." before she could complete

"I hope no one will get to know about our relationship, I have trusted you" he said...

She closed her eyes "I promise, until you don't want, I will keep it a secret"

She left while he watched her from behind...

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After some time ...

All the students started coming in the college...Veer started his exercising...

Nakul entered slowly "wow Veer... you are again so early.."

"Yes and you are late as usual" he retorted...

Sameer was still sending a nice message to Sheetal when Nakul saw him "oh here comes our lover boy"

Sameer frowned... "Stop it ..."

Uday followed Sameer ... "then what's wrong... we all know what you are thinking these days"

Sameer smiled "concentrate on your exercise" he said while lifting the dumbbells

Veer looked angry ... He was still thinking about his initial relationship with Aarti... he never wanted to involve himself, he knew his life was full of danger.. but then he did something wrong with her and for that reason he could not leave it..

Uday glanced around when his eyes fell on Veer's angry expression "Veer is exercising more today and that too in full anger"

Veer did not find it funny...

Nakul saw him "are you thinking about Aarti?"

Veer was now angry ... he threw the weights and walked towards him "What on the earth makes you think like that?"

Nakul was scared... "Well I was just joking"

Veer came closer "you know I don't like these jokes.."

Sameer saw Veer aggressive "Veer come lets go to the canteen.."

Veer walked angrily...

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In the canteen

Veer was sitting with Sameer when Nakul came towards him "Veer ... I will never joke with you"

Veer nodded his head "no ... you can joke... but never take any girls name with me. I don't like it."

Nakul smiled "I will make sure"

Both happily started talking... but Veer was still thinking about Aarti...he would never want her to fall into any trouble because of him..

After few minutes he saw her walking with friends... she ignored him this time...

Sameer was quite surprised at her reaction "well she use to be after Veer and today she did not even look at him..."

Arjun came towards the table "its good... girls are useless anyway... If they ignore you, that means you are lucky.."

He opened the soft drink and gulped down his throat..

Veer glanced at her once... she looked pretty...for the first time he looked at her clothes... her blue top and white skirt made her look so beautiful. For the first time he felt she was beautiful. He quickly looked at his friends "now let's go.. And attend classes."

All the boys left for the classes...

Aarti slowly turned and looked behind...

Sheetal was confused "why didn't you look at him?"

"him... who?"she exclaimed...

"are you alright Aarti?"sheetal queried

"ofcourse"said Aarti...

"you didn't look at Veer today...?"sheetal asked

"Well forget about him, I think it was my infatuation" Aarti replied

Sheetal wasn't convinced but then ignored and walked towards the library...

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It was during late afternoon when Vikram and his gang had another fight with the outside boys...

Veer and Sameer saw them "we should help Vikram" said Veer

Sameer astonishingly looked at Veer who was ready to help his enemy "come on Veer... how can we help Vikram?"

With a raised brow he looked at Sameer "he is an enemy but here someone from outside has entered his college and beating his college mates... and he cannot see this.."

Veer ran towards the gang and one by one beat them all. Vikram saw this ...

After some time.. boys fled away... "Thanks Veer" Vikram said...

Veer walked away without saying anything...

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Aarti was still painting her nails...

"are you not done yet?" Kavita asked..

"it takes time..." Aarti replied...

Kavita was wondering why she doesn't mention anything about Veer now...

Then she thought something "Aarti I think you are on the right track now"

"Track?" asked Aarti

"Cause you use to talk, think only about Veer... and forgot yourself... but now I am happy to see my old friend back." Kavita said smilingly... "these boys are bad... they make you go mad"

arti listened to her friends long stories about boys and their bad habits.. "Kavita...lets not talk about boys... please"

Kavita picked up her books and started studying...

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It was late evening... little dark outside...

Aarti was standing near the canteen, then looked at her watch... one by one all the students were leaving... she saw him coming towards the canteen... she quickly left and walked towards the other side of the road...

She made sure no one saw her when she was leaving the college... she knew she only has this half an hour to talk to him... she knew he was so busy all day and on top of that he had some fight with the outsider boys... she looked at the small lake that was little visible from the distance... she thought about her life with her... then the biggest lie that she created to make him fall for her... she hoped one day he will love her so much that this lie will not matter at all.

"hi"

She heard him behind her... her heart jumped several beats..

She turned around... "hi"

Veer was standing at a little distance...

"so.. how's everything.." he asked

She smiled "good, everything is always good with me..."

"why did you wanted to meet here?" he asked

she stepped closer "you don't know?"

"no" he said firmly

She touched his hand with hers... making him feel nervous...

"so that I can see you, feel you and breathe you" she said softly...

Veer failed to understand what she had said... instead he was thinking about the boys who came inside the college campus and who were those guys and why Vikram was fighting with them.

"Your hands are so hard and strong..." she said...

He quickly pulled his hands away...

"we must leave Aarti..."he said...

"this place is not safe." He added..

Aarti smiled a little "ok"

She started walking and saw him walking behind her. He made sure she safely went inside her hostel...

Next Day

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Aarti was still sleeping... Kirti asked her to wake up

Then slowly touched her forhead "you have fever"

Aarti slowly opened her eyes.. "I am alright... let me get ready"

"no you are not going anywhere" Kirti ordered her sister who was down with fever...

She gave her some tablets and went to college.. "call me if you need help" Kirti said and walked outside...

Aarti again closed her eyes and slept... the tablets made her sleepy...

After few hours..

Veer had seen all her friends but she was missing from the crowd... where was she.. did something happen to her...

His thoughts did not let him stay in peace... he was thinking a way to check where was she...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wow finally u update ... Very nice yaar 😃
Last part so nice he actually miss her want to see her onces

So sweet ...!
Bt what yaar is mood pe koi rokata hai bhala ...😔
Give ud soon ...
Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay Veer updated.
*dances all around the room*

The conversation from the previous part is still fresh in my mind. And added to this Veer's gesture in the morning..that trust which he has given her..is such a big thing for any relationship.

But what would happen when he'll get to know the truth of that night?
I hope he gets to hear it from Arti itself or it'll be a big mess.

Veer does have a soft corner for her I hope that affection develops into love.

Veer helping Vikram is quite a thing.
But who were those people? Has it got to do something with Vikram's girl? Or is it something else?
Aww so finally our angry youngan has started missing his girl haan?
That's so sweet!

Will be waiting for the next part...

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