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noclapsplease

@noclapsplease

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

aww *rheumy eyes* that was too emotional yet brilliant.. 😃
arhi's daughter's part was really cute. Arnav is fantastic as a Dad.. 😳
how he misses khushi..
"yes it is impossible to seek you khushi " 😭 😭
great work keep writing 👍🏼

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closet

@closet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

That was really beautiful... something about it touched my heart. The sound of the payal was from his pocket and he was chasing it all the time... painfully beautiful.

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Areeba

@Areebaa

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awww. It mnz he was dreaming? Ohh Gosh

I can't watch this on-screen 😭

But it was beautifully written !! 👏

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

It was beautiful, Zehra.. The last para got tears in my eyes.. 🥺 "Its impossible to seek you, Khushi" 😒🥺

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-SI-

@-SI-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow, loved the OS but what happened to Kushi...pls don't tell me she is dead or something...!!

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Archu

@cocoatree

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

its nice os zehra🤗

Loved ur work !!😊

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nermic

@nermic

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Shocked and sad at the end! Great work but would never want to see anything like that on the show. Too touching!

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monalisa1234

@monalisa1234

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

I ended up crying... Wish you could do something else other than showing her dead..

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

wow an emotional one from u.. Loved it how khushi was remembering her childhood. Really when arnav was hearing the payal's sound I was sure tht the payal was in his pocket and thought khushi has slipped it in his pocket. I did not see this coming khushi being not thr..Do continue soon..
Waiting for ur update on LATE.. <3