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@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Aww! I had tears in my eyes at the end f it! U captured d emotions so well! Hats off!
cheers for d pm :)

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@pepples_joy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

No... You can't do this...😭😭😭

Khushi is dead...!! And Arnav is just talking to no one... NOOO...!!!!!!

Please...!!!! I burst into tears after reading it...

Happy endings please dear... We all love Arshi... No sad endings please...!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved your OS... It moved us a lot...😊😛 *Sniffles sniffles*😭

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awww...thanks a ton for the dedication Dear...
And again you managed to surprise me and leave me in awe with the beauty in your writing...
This OS was so sad yet so beautiful...I absolutely love the title...
It sort of contained a hidden meaning...it was just 'Hide' but not 'Hide and Seek'...the last line deciphered the hidden meaning behind the title...'Yes, it is impossible to seek you Khushi.'
Left me in tears Zehra...
The entire concept...the way you flawlessly captured all the emotions...it was simply Brilliant!
Loved it...
Thanks for the PM and for the dedication...

And Happy Friendship's Day...

Manal <3

Edited by -Manal.A- - 12 years ago

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Cruel... cruel... absolutely cruel... I knew as soon as Khushi hid that Arnav is never going to find her...this piece of writing literally brought tears in my eyes... wonderfully written but I wish I hadn't read it😭

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Orion_N

@Orion_N

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow... never expected that ending... made tears come to my eyes... love how you used a simple game to say so much and display so much emotion :D TFS

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abby2181

@abby2181

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Thought it would be light and humourous but it ended up being a tear jerker😭.

You write beautifully.

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Thank U , Thank U, Thank U & Infinity times Thank U🤗
I am honoured, thnk U😊

Rola dia,Yar😭
Sooo beautifully written😍
I cant never imagine the state Of Arnav without Khushi- that would b devastating for him😔
Aww,I loved the Pool scene yaar, tears r rolling down😭
It was fantastic as well as sad
Aww, Arshi's daughter!!😍
I liked her style of questioning
The last line yaar made me cry
Then I when saw my name, I was sooo happy 😊

This will encourage me giving more & more long comments😉
thnx Zehra- for making me cry & happy in a same OS😃
& The update of SS'Late'- I want it tonight not tommorow😃
Thnx 4 the PM😃

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mcguiness

@mcguiness

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awesome OS but very sad. Please Lazyleaves turn it into a happy OS. I cannot bear Arhi separated.

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

wow this was so beautiful. at first i thought arnav will panic that khushi left him and then shout at her and then she will come to him and assure him she will not leave him. but then as i read ahead i realised that khushi is no more. aww it is so sad but loved it.