ArHi OS: Hide*Re-posted*

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

I m speechless as usual, with ur brilliant writing skills and intriguing concept..

But this really made me sad..

Separations are always bad..and haunt us for a lifetime..😭

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Venilla

@Shivanee31

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Awesome...You always amaze me with your work. You write so well.

Coming back to the OS...I loved the pool scene. It was so cute and very romantic in its own way. The last part actually brought tears to my eyes. I don't know why I feel that Khushi is no more and that this was just a Arnav's illusion..

Thanks for the PM.

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M.A. for IF

@EvilMindedMe

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Okay! I have had it enough! *melodramatic way*😡

Tell me in how much are you willing to sell! I'm ready to buy your brilliance at OS writing!

'Hide' is an amazing piece of work.

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dimple288

@dimple288

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

omg... this was sooo sad... heart wrenching.. and an unexpected ending as ever...

u made me cry... usually, when i read some of ur os where khushi will be no more, it makes me feel that i have lost someone very close ... it gives a lot of pain..

it was worded beautifully. great work zehra.

thanx for the pm.

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Sad yet beautiful !

Surprising to see that he was thinking about Khushi.

Amazing OS!

Awesome work dear

Loved it :')

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

It was beauriful but tragic! Looks like he has a daughter who looks and acts like Khushi! :)

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OLGNES

@OLGNES

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

awww... beautifully written...
like it!!!
awesome!!!!!!!!
nice!!!!!!!!
it means is khushi dead???

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Awesome OS !! Loved reading it !😃

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boreddamsel

@boreddamsel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Why, Zehra? Why?

Why do you make me cry?? 😭

hehe.. and it rhymes too.. perfect..

it was beautiful.. as always..

I knew she might have died.. the moment you talked about hide and seek... sigh! I know I hate these OSs in which Khushi is dead.. but at the same time love them because of the way you write.. how you wont reveal the suspense until the ending!

Thanks for the pm!