Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted] - Page 19

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Chapter ' 21

I am going to apply to any college/school in this world, that will accept an old student (don't ask me my age, bad manners) for an advanced course in philosophy, I am a major at it already. The "KARMA" theory is now set in stone.

Again Arnav is reminded about "Shavathalam"; this in itself an indication of things to come. I went back to read the chapter where Shankar looks towards Kashi and asks if it is Lakshmi, he said so as he saw a lot of Lakshmi in Kashi, now if it restricted to physicality or goes beyond that, is to be read. Arnav saw Lakshmi in her beautiful best and acknowledged, she was more beautiful than Kashi. Shankar seeing Kashi as Lakshmi and Arnav seeing Lakshmi and do you all see the same? I want to believe there is a strong connection, Kashi to be found beside Lakshmi's body and bitten by Shivan, chain reaction.

Now, now Arnav be nice to the lady the choice of words is a tad unpleasant and certainly not flattering ' witch, sorceress and what all. She may just be your Lakshmi, so tread carefully dude, very carefully. She always is coming to your rescue, pond, Shivan and now the nightmare. Show some gratitude, other than the kissing kind.

Another reference to Gone with the Wind ' Papa O'Hara after his wife's death (Shankar ' Lakshmi)

Chapter - 22

I too am curious to know about this desire, will tell you why ' she hates him and has made it apparent in every interaction and conversation and comes back to him, we will forget the reason for a while; let's stick to her coming back. She has a strong desire to share details with him and is curious to know he views; it is implied and never stated her need to know his views.

He is a man and would want a nubile and beautiful girl like Kashi to desire him, even if he understands that she is confident her body will not betray her (it did this time, girl you clearly were not startled, nah') curious to see someone like her respond to him.

Kashi suffers from what I call acute myopia, not of the eye but of the mind. How is Arnav anyway responsible for the purchase of the neighboring land? For a person who believes in everything that her land has to offer Shivan, 700 years of history, ghosts and all, she finds it difficult that the neighbors may have wanted to let go of the land which had taken it all from them. Does she fail to realize that her family may follow suit, they too are without a male heir. Pay attention to Arnav's words Kashi, he is mercenary but he too has seen his bit in his life, you know that now.

The bite mark, is this a marking of good things to come?

D ' Sorry I did not comment earlier not doing so makes me feel bad and I owe it to the story, you as the author can take a grain of credit for a good job. I am a giving all the credit to KH only.

Originally posted by: mechantefille

Whattt? So he's essentially their neighbour? The ghost story thing soundds fishy to me - No wonder she hates him... he bought the house and now he's after theirs - will Aman fall for Pallavi.

This is a plea, to all readers and I do so only to do justice to the story and the author. I may be out of line here, please bear with me.

Scanning through the words does not do justice to fiction nor reading the last chapter in a novel to know who killed the dog/cat/man/woman whoever. The story is like a journey and every aspect of it is important. So read the story with attention, you owe it to yourself; you are investing time while doing so. Get the names of the characters right, go back to see if you missed something and if there is something that is missing, it may be intentional and the next update may just reveal the very thing you wanted to know. Another thing try and avoid dictating terms for the progress of the story, it is all decided and no Devi does not suffer from 'God complex' she told me so herself, how you ask, in my dreams.

Enjoy reading it enriches you, we all agree, if the glasses we wear to thicken, there is always LASIK (just take my case, it helped me and burned a hole in my pocket while doing to)