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abayance

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Posted: 13 years ago

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NK - the ray of hope...looking forward to next update. 😃

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richa1792

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanu3108
nice updates ...

though i dont watch the show .. but I loved ur writings...

good going girl ..

continue soon

love

Sana

aww..thank you so so much!!! i am glad u like it!

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richa1792

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: abayance
NK - the ray of hope...looking forward to next update. 😃

thank you for reading.! and yeah..presently nk is the only rayu of hope they have got!😉

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Part 4:-

Khushi had been walking without knowing where her feet were taking her.

Now as she sat on the dingy bed of her cheap room in a hotel, she felt a wave of hopelessness wash over her.

What was she supposed to do?

She had always been surrounded by people she loved. Being alone was not something she was accustomed to. It reminded her of that horrible period in her life when her parents had died in that horrible car accident.

She had felt alone then, so alone and so scared. She was lost. That was until Amma and Babuji had adopted her and brought her home. Even now remembering about that fateful night made her shudder.

With a bolt she realised that what she had felt then was nowhere close to what she was feeling right now.

Did she love him this much then?

That the loss of her parents paled in comparision to losing him.

Losing him?

Did she really ever have him, for her to lose him?

There were moments when she had felt that maybe he too...

NO!!! This was not healthy damn it!!!!! She could not go on thinking about him like this. It would only shatter her already broken heart into a million more pieces.

And she did not have it in her to pick up the pieces again. Arnav had branded her. Branded her in such an intense manner that he had ruined her for anyone else. Not that she was interested in anyone else. Hell!! She couldn't even look at other men without noticing that they did not have the most beautiful and intense brown eyes, that their hair did not curl slightly just at the nape near the collar, that their voice did not hold that seductive husky tone...

And what was she doing? Hadn't she decided a moment ago that she would not think of him?

She had to move on. She would find a way to fall out of love with him. All her life she had lived for everyone around her. But now, she was going to start living for herself.

Her and her devi maiyya was all she needed. And if her heart screamed at her at her obvious and blatant lie, well, she was just going to ignore it.

IN RM:

NK watched as Arnav was still not aware of anything as he gazed into nothingness.

Trying to think a way to reach him, he suddenly smiled.

Ofcourse.!!

There was only one thing that had ever reached Arnav's heart.

"Khushi" Nk whispered.

He saw Arnav jerk upwards and look at the door, maybe in the hope that she had come back.

"Khushi." Nk again said aloud.

"Don't." Arnav cried in an agonized whisper. "Don't say her name."

"Why Nannav! Why shouldn't I say Khushi ji's name?" Nk asked with sudden relief as he saw Arnav's eyes filled with anger.

This was more like the Nannav he knew.

"Because I don't deserve it damn it!!" Arnav raged.

"I don't even deserve to hear her name, let alone deserve her. Do you know how I feel Nk? How I feel knowing that I have wronged her?"

Arnav suddenly looked at Nk assesingly.

"You know, I always took you as an irritating, idiotic bloke. Never really gave you a second thought. And then you came for Aakash's wedding. And Khushi took to you. You became such close friends in such short time. I started feeling uncomfortable." Arnav said with a faraway look in his eyes.

"It took me some time to realize why I wanted to rip your insides with my bare hands every time you went near her.

Jealousy." Arnav's voice still held a tiniest hint of wonder at the word.

"I was never familiar with the emotion, and I didn't like it. I seriously couldn't understand what did she see in you. But it isn't such a mystery now, as to why you are such great friends."

"You know her better than me. You know my wife better than me" Arnav scoffed with self disgust.

"I guess she is better off without me" Arnav said with sudden despair in his eyes.

"What the...!!!" Arnav looked up in shock as Nk shouted at him.

"You are going to give up on her Arnav?" Nk bellowed at him.

"After all that she has done, everything she has gone through, all the pain she took on for you and your family?"

" She deserves to be fought for damn it. She deserves not to be given up on. If it was me she loved, I would have fought for her or died trying" Nk continued, ignoring the murderous look that Arnav threw his way for even thinking of such a blashphemy.

"Look Arnav, give her the hearts and the roses this time. Give her what you deprived her of the first time around. I have seen you ruthlessly pursuing deal after deal. And this?

This is your life. Your one chance at happiness. Aren't you even going to fight for it? I agree, she may not forgive you. Hell! She may not even want to look at your face."

"But think of the alternative. What if she agrees? What if she decides to give you a second chance? Think of you life then. It will have Khushi in it."

Nk mentally air punched as he watched determination, and may be a tiny beat of hope come back into Arnav's eyes.

Arnav looked at Nk and nodded once. He would do whatever it took to convince Khushi of his love for her.

"Nannav!!!" Nk threw himself in his arms and Arnav almost stumbled from the force.

With a roll of his eyes, Arnav disentangled Nk from him.

"So let's get started." Nk said with excitement in his eyes.

Okay that was the fourth part. I would just like to say that i wont update anymore until i get sufficient amount of comments. I really need to know if the story is going anywhere or if it is just crap and am wasting my time.

so please take out some time and do tell me what you think of it..or well, this was my last chapter.!!

And yeah..hope you enjoy this part.!

Love..Richa.!