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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Calling this brilliant would be an understatement.

Ridz, this was beyond brilliant! I loved it.

The way Arnav gave Khushi her space and time to think over their relationship, the way he realized how he had hurt her, the way he let her go without complains even though he was hurting terribly deep within, the way he kept following her around, the way Khushi knew that he was following her, the way she gave their relationship another chance...gave her husband another chance, the way Arnav gave himself another chance. I loved it all.

Thanks for the PM.

Manal <3

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@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

fantastic :D

u reallly r a gud writter :)

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

"Do you know what I realized today? When I saw the kid promising you that he would protect you, the only question that went through my mind, is what would I have done if someone did to di, what I did to you." he choked on his words.🤗🤗

Both miserable without each other the ending was way too beautiful

CV's read this & take note 😍

Sting song 🥳every breath u take is just awesome - good taste in music u have

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Jeevanti

@terribletwist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

It is a nice piece of writing. Plz don't mind if everyone does not leave with a comment, I don't know about others but at times the reply page is so slow to open on my computer that by the time I write a comment, the connection has already broken away; hence the no comment situation.😳 Take care and keep writing.

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

What would I have done if someone did to di, what I did to you." he choked on his words.

I would've killed him.

*claps*

Amazing..!!

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

this was an awesome piece! I suppose nothing like this will ever happen on the show but one can dream right? Thanks for the PM!!

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

That was beautifully written ridzzi
I esp like that Arnav gave a chance to Khushi to make a new life without him unlike what they showed in the show
And the last part stole my heart that was so so beautiful
Great work cheers to new beginnings

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Venilla

@Shivanee31

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

That was so cute. I really enjoyed reading. It was so beautifully written.

Thanks for the PM.

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paircube

@paircube

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

A mature way of handling their relation.
Arnav realising how much he has hurt and disrespected khushi is what everyone here wants right now. But seriously I don't know when that will happen or whether that will even happen. Khushi has forgiven him but that does not mean he take her for granted.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Well written, loved it.. A new start..

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