ArHi TS: One Day *Reposted*

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

wow! Wonderful story .. Loved it ..

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

loved the story and loved how Muskaan is a combo of both of them... 😊

I didn't enjoy the last part as much as I have enjoyed your other work though.. maybe because the ending the expected, but I thought probably the dialogues could have been better

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

This was superb 👏

Reading first part I thought arnav was going to meet Khushi first time but he met his daughter reflection of Khushi. Muskaan was the blend of arnav and Khushi. She recognized his father at one look and she was confirmed when arnav answered her all questions correctly.😃

Lovely

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

This was such an amazing TS di!!!!!!!! Loved Loved Loveddd it!

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smilejans

@smilejans

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

A Big Thanks for re-posting all OS, else I would be missed the wonderfull stories.

Well, this OS was amazing. Muskaan inherited both good characters from their parents. Soooper!!!

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Just read this ff

Love it

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Thanks for reposting otherwise I would have missed out reading such a sublime TS.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

Just fabulous...I had tears in my eyes...

Very well written...

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

I'm a little sad that they wasted 16 years, years they could have spent together just because of their lack of communication. Just because of some misunderstanding.
Muskaan is exactly Khushi's copy with some nuances of Arnav like her ability to hide her feelings and the genetic diabetes.
Khushi lied to him twice. First she left him and then lied that Muskaan is not his daughter.
But I loved it when she completed "Singh Raizada". This is so her. This speaks of the right she feels on him.
But still I'm little sad over the time lost and happy that at least now they will be together.😊