ArHi TS: One Day *Reposted* - Page 36

so finally i read it...nd yes it was good..fab job

Read the first part. Very interesting.

Loved the second part. But have many questions. Hope the last part clears that out.

Loved the last part. Really sweet ending.

No words to describe. .This left me in happy tears. . .

oh...nice TS...i jst lov it

Res
srry for cmmenting late..i was bz wid my projects nd all other things...m really srry
but frm now onwards i will b a regular commenter nd cmment on each of ur updates
i hope u hve forgiven me di
plse srry srry srry
i was just going thru my unread PMs nd i saw i dint read a few of ur stuffs..so im just reading dem nd commening on all
plse do chck dem
plse forgive me zehra di luv u!!!!!

Oops srry ..mein itna blabber kar rahi thi i forgot tto cmment on the TS. 😆
the strting was a lil sad ... Nd i was wondering thats who's grave was it..i literally thot k it was khushi's grave nd she is dead
i was damn scred just by the thot of it
den the ending of d 1st part was really sweet it bought a smile to my face
muskaan i wonder y all SS nd FF writers luv this name
😆 the extra ordinary best writer ..my zehra di even chose dis name
lol
i luved the first part
PART 2
dat was damn scary
khushi married 2 sumone else
unbelivable
i was like i wish yeh jhoot ho
thnk god he visited lucknow
bdw who's grave was it :P did i miss sumthing
or m i dum to understand sumthig
DO reply
😛 luved it

PART 3
yayyy''' so after all khushi ka jhoot pakda gaya
bdw i shud hve tld dis erlier arnav grey hair..
Hew still luked hot 🤣
aww d best part was jalebi one the moment see turned her face seeing the inviting
delicious jalebis
...aww arnav ..luved d way he hugged her
yup as u know dat i can imagine each nd every scene
its just becoz of d way u write
ur simly d best writer
zehra di hugs
luv ya