ArHi TS: One Day *Reposted*

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sree1993

@sree1993

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

HAPPY ENDING

loved your work completely yaar

you are an amazing writer😃👏👍🏼

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priyankaa

@priyankaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

wow..what a sweet n nice ending... 😊

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

Ohhh very nice!! I love how you can write such a variety of things! Loved this one 😳

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Because of my exams i missed this wonderful piece of work!

Thank god you PMed me! :)

It was just beautiful! Father daughter relationship is always a special one! It was absolutely beautiful zehra! Sorry for the late comments. Had exams :(

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sanaroxx

@sanaroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

May be I am the last person to comment on this TS ! SOrry for not being with you in the first of this TS !!!

I am left speechless ... Seriosly Zehra you always drive me speechless still I leave lengthy comments ... I wonder how ?!

If to tell how much I loved this then it would be a never ending one !!!

In the first Part ... Muskaan .. lovely name .. Khushi - Happiness .. Muskaan - Smile ... Awesome ...!!! Loved all the chit chats with Muskaan - Arnav ... how he responded to her ... cutest that was !

In the second Part - What NOT to Love !!! Each and evry bit was lively and I got tears too ... Muskaan not Arnav's daughter shocked me ... I knew there was something fishy and when came to Part 3 ...

Sorry I have nothing to comment !!! Muskaan diabetic ... and has got both qualities of Papa and Mom !!! Awesome awesome awesome awesomeesssttt ... Part 3 Fantasticcc !!!

Thanks for the PM Zehra ... !!! How I wish to ask for another Part of this :( but sadly ... :(((( !!!

My greedy mind.. sorry !!! Loved it sooo very very much !!!

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I dont want Khushi to leave Arnav like that for the sake of his and Di's happiness !!! But this is the true Khushi who is ready to sacrifice anything for her loved ones !!!
Lovely ...

Edited by sanaroxx - 13 years ago

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sweetnoori

@sweetnoori

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

hi dear u r such agreattt writter no words reallly such amzing os,,,it beautiful lovely,,,dear,,
Dear sorry when u pm me i cannnt leave here comment bcoz of net problem but dear really honestly its greattt story if os is greattt sooo its write u sooo it means u superb greattt,,,thnks for such a lovely os,,,

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

U made me cry n laugh at the same time!!!

I almost squealed with happiness when Muskaan said she has diabetes

God!!!

Yayyy!

I loved this TS

Thanks for the PM aapi 😃

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varshamaharaj

@varshamaharaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

yay!!!!happy ending😊well nt literally and ending i hope!!!do we get to see the story were she enters shantivaan???what happens after that??loved to hear more!!!

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

OMG!!!!!!!!😲😲

dedicated 2 meee yayyy!!! :)🥳

thank you sooo much😛😃😛😃😛😃😛😃😛😃

it was a beautiful ending⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

loveddd ittt👏👏👏👏

sorry for the late comment 😔

kal hospital mein busy thi so cudn't read any update earlier😔