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Preeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

Chapter 13:
Arjun ! i cannot understand men like that at all...i really pity Indira and Lila.
Glad Khushi talked to Arnav about the jewelery ...Suraj sounds scary!

Chapter 14:
See! How nicely he treated his wife, whats with men like Arjun?

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kvgmatri

@kvgmatri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#482

Hi Kalyaani! Just found this FF today and have been hooked...reading all the chapters in one go :) This is what I like about discovering FF's later😉

You write so beautifully! The story is really different, well paced and love the way the relationship between A&K has developed.
And really nice to see this spirited Khushi.

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#483

loved ur ff...

i read all partss theyr nicee...

plzz pm me when u update😃

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#484

awesome .read it in a go.

it reminds me of the film rajneethi..

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#485

I have been reading the FF bit by bit for the last week and I have come to really enjoy it. I love the tension - sexual or otherwise. The characters are so well planned and the family does remind me of a political family and Arnav and Khushi's relationship seems like from one of those Harlequin romances.

Wonderful Story 😊

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#486

Loved this part.. I don't know why but i was happy that Khusi didn't tie Rakhi to Arjun. I mean Khusi is a girl who loves the tradition and believe in it but Arjun just for the sake of it allow anjali to tie.
Loved that Krishna and Arnav both regarded Indira as a sister.. And Arnav cares for her thought he's not comfortable showing it on the face. But Indira understand this. The saree scene was really nice.
So it looks like Arnav is not close to his brother but more to Khusi's brother.
Arnav n Khusi's moment was nice. Why it's always someone or the other ended up seeing them kissing. 😆
Hope to see Suraj in that party and i would love to see more of him in this story...

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Anika

@kalo_megh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#487

lovely new chapter...the raksha bandhan part and then the indira and khushi part!! very lovely!! 😊

<3 Barun <3

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#488

Hahaha! Arnav cannot keep his hands off her, can he? Khushi using sex to threaten him was hilarious. And both of them exude sexiness when they are together. :D

How vile is Arjun? Using Lila, someone who is Khushi's age as a wh**e and then treating Khushi with respect and love. The hypocrisy is downright disgusting. And I feel for Indira. Typical subcontinental wife who has to compromise with her dog of a husband for the sake of her children. :/

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#489

Yes you updated!

I love the way your portrayed Khushi and her mother - in - law's conversation, the confusion Khushi has within her and the fact she doesn't know what she wants yet.

But I have an inkling thinking that Khushi might want a baby, but Arnav he wants Khushi all to himself. I found that so cute, their relationship is steady at the moment I don't want anything destroying it please.

Also the fact about surprises was scary, is there more to Khushi?

The way she found comfort in Arnav was nice to see

Well I loved it hope to see you updating soon

Edited by Aveiro - 13 years ago