Raizada and Sons - Thread 1 - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was pleasant.
I love convivial domestic scenes.
I love saree descriptions.
Navy-red-gold Yum! Tell Indira that Arnavji promised that one to me.

I also appreciate from a writerly eye how you reveal character by showing how each member treats/responds to the raakhi ritual.

Maya

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow luv it
Updt soon
Thanks for pm
thebubblespop12 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update!! Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...
happy tat tings r gng well between kushi n arnav...
shes keepin him on his toes...
tat was fun...
tanx 4 d pm...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow I loved the whole atmosphere...the rakshan bandhan scene,the gifts ,saree selection ..
Arnav n Khushi..their chemistry is just sensual...
Love the way Arnav indirectly gifts Indira sarees..a sweet thought..
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Posted: 13 years ago
arnav-khushi's relation is sooo cute.. i enjoyed their bantering.. the way arnav can't keep his hands off her is sooo.. i don't know what to say.. but loved it..

i feel pity for indira but she has knows what she is going to get from the relationships around her and she has accepted the facts accordingly..
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh taht was cute,... and naughty...

Thanks you
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Posted: 13 years ago
awe some update..yar love it ..awe atleast arjun take care of indira and love arhi kiss scene awe some update buddy love it..continue soon and thankx for pm
love
maria
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆😆😆Removing dirt from eyes🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. That aced all. ARHI are so passionate. I felt bad for Indira as she had to give up all her dreams. I hope arjun gets a hard blow to realize his pathetic behaviour and suraj will leave no leaf in acheiving.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love the place you have brought Arnav and Khushi in their relationship...understanding of each other yet fiercely individual.
The family interaction is revealing of the characters and their relationships. And beware of children they have big ears and eyes hearing and seeing things they are not supposed to and then singing about them to the world...they keep the proceedings interesting 😆

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