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angelicdove

@angelicdove

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

the update was just amazing!!!👏you had expressed both AR pain so beautifully,the pain of loosing a child!!!!!!!😭

ridhima's words were harsh but it was not her fault,she lost her baby and was not in her right state of mind but i just loved the way armaan handled her,inspite of being broken himself he is trying so hard to sheer her up,my heart went out for both of them!!!!!😭

i just loved the last scene!!!!

the way ridhima told him that she wanted her baby back!!!!

was she talking about another baby??😕

well guess would have to wait to find the answers to our questions

plzzz update soon

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Aayushi

@..Phoenix..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: MrMrsChiping.

thank you soo much for your detailed comment:)
when some one give you detailed coment it actually felt realy great that yes some one is really analysing you work:)

thankx again;)
maria:)

i kknow dear.. i kno when we update we need appereciatio .. from the reader.. i to want bg commetns from my readers then why won't i give that tooo hhahaha...

continue super soon yaar

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

awww

this was a sad part mariaaa

so feel bad for arsh

beti ko khona choti baat tou nhi.. shilpa needs armaans attention now

i hope they get back to normal nowww

nd the length of this part was goodd

keep up the good work jeee

Edited by teenorchid - 11 years ago

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

That was emotional...hope they get their happiness back
awesome ... beautiful update
waiting for the next part

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...Sooo sad...poor ArSh...Armaan's flashbacks got me teary...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

ohh so sad,
hope to see shilpa and armaan s baby...
great work
the emotions just perfect

thanks for pm

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

AR Part 12 *Engulfing the new Happiness*

"Aweee,awee" These voice hit her hairs when she was standing at the reception waiting for her appointment .She looked at her watch again it still 30 minutes for her appointment.

Finally after year of despair and pain she is may be going to have her share of happiness it has been long since she last try to be happy.She had not tell arman yet of her appointment .She wants confirmation,then she will go and tell him.In the past year she has seen a changed arman.A arman who was always high tempered and total manly.Never hearing her or caring about her for long seven years.But now she is getting love,like the women need it.He took care of her every thing.He was beside her in rough time when both were going through same pain.She let a contented sigh and now may be they would get their angel back.

Her trail of thoughts broken by another wail of a baby.She moves towards the direction of that side.Reaching at the door she read "Children Ward"(only appointed doctor allowed). So this is restriction area.She was about to move back when again herd muffled cries of babies.A small smile played on her face listening to those voices.She looked around finding no one around she quietly entered into the ward.

*****************************************************

Her heart goes out to see the scene.Tears of serene feelings engulf her.Watching so many babies around her.Tears flows down her eyes.Here she is craving for one baby,only one.But here there are so many babies.She was about to touch the babies but it was written on the board (dont touch the infant without proper precaution).She doesnt know about the kind of precautions so she just stand their and watch the babies different complexion .The scene was so serene ,so..cant be explained.Seeing the scene riddhima felt like this is life.The babies with thumb into their mouth.Awe and she saw a baby who just open her/his mouth and was like sucking.Oh!baby might be hungry,she thought.

She just kept standing their wacthing babies and seeing their actions.Her heart filled with the unexplainable .out of the world.She looked upwards as if thanking and praising the Allah for creating such life.

*This scene is the most beautiful scene of any hospital.I myself experienced this and awe you will see different babies.awe*

**********************

She just starting to watch every baby when she saw the incharge doctor entering into the ward.

"Mam,this ward is not for common people.Plz out!"The incharge said is a rude way.

But riddhima was feeling out of the worl.She just smiled at warden and move out.

After she left Warden smiles at her.She knew how she felt.She had seen many people like her standing here watching the babies..

She walking on the passage of hospital unawared of her surrounding.She sat on the bench .Tears just flew out her eyes as she kept remebring the babies.

"So finally we meet again Mrs Mallik" Her happiness broke by a shrill voice.

To be continued.

I want to ask question I am ending this ff in two updates more.next update will be up Susan.If i draged it more i have to seprate AR/ArSh and that will be to ektaish..!:P

Dont worry if you guy s dont love ending i know how to proceeds.
Sorry for boring update but i was draged with the baby thing.If i show the susan part here the goodness of the part might have destroyed..
plz give me sugestion too..so that i can understand what i have to do through your comments..!

Love&Regards,
Maria:)

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

ArSh Part 12 *Engulfing the new Happiness*

"Aweee,awee" These voice hit her hairs when she was standing at the reception waiting for her appointment .She looked at her watch again it still 30 minutes for her appointment.

Finally after year of despair and pain she is may be going to have her share of happiness it has been long since she last try to be happy.She had not tell arman yet of her appointment .She wants confirmation,then she will go and tell him.In the past year she has seen a changed arman.A arman who was always high tempered and total manly.Never hearing her or caring about her for long seven years.But now she is getting love,like the women need it.He took care of her every thing.He was beside her in rough time when both were going through same pain.She let a contented sigh and now may be they would get their angel back.

Her trail of thoughts broken by another wail of a baby.She moves towards the direction of that side.Reaching at the door she read "Children Ward"(only appointed doctor allowed). So this is restriction area.She was about to move back when again herd muffled cries of babies.A small smile played on her face listening to those voices.She looked around finding no one around she quietly entered into the ward.

*****************************************************

Her heart goes out to see the scene.Tears of serene feelings engulf her.Watching so many babies around her.Tears flows down her eyes.Here she is craving for one baby,only one.But here there are so many babies.She was about to touch the babies but it was written on the board (dont touch the infant without proper precaution).She doesnt know about the kind of precautions so she just stand their and watch the babies different complexion .The scene was so serene ,so..cant be explained.Seeing the scene Shilpa felt like this is life.The babies with thumb into their mouth.Awe and she saw a baby who just open her/his mouth and was like sucking.Oh!baby might be hungry,she thought.

She just kept standing their watching babies and seeing their actions.Her heart filled with the unexplainable .out of the world.She looked upwards as if thanking and praising the Allah for creating such life.

*This scene is the most beautiful scene of any hospital.I myself experienced this and awe you will see different babies.awe*

**********************

She just starting to watch every baby when she saw the incharge doctor entering into the ward.

"Mam,this ward is not for common people.Plz out!"The incharge said is a rude way.

But Shilpa was feeling out of the world.She just smiled at warden and move out.

After she left Warden smiles at her.She knew how she felt.She had seen many people like her standing here watching the babies..

She walking on the passage of hospital unaware of her surrounding.She sat on the bench .Tears just flew out her eyes as she kept remebring the babies.

"So finally we meet again Mrs Mallik" Her happiness broke by a shrill voice.

To be continued.

I want to ask question I am ending this ff in two updates more.next update will be up Susan.If i draged it more i have to seprate AR/ArSh and that will be to ektaish..!:P

Dont worry if you guy s dont love ending i know how to proceeds.
Sorry for boring update but i was draged with the baby thing.If i show the susan part here the goodness of the part might have destroyed..
plz give me suggestion too..so that i can understand what i have to do through your comments..!

Love&Regards,
Maria:)