AR/ArShFF|WhereDidWegoWrong|Part13.PG45||Complete||

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello guys,how r you all huh??..Ok I am here with a small idea..I dont know whether you guys will like it or not but here are we again...!..This for miss93😳


Where did we really go wrong...!

Prologue
AR/ArSh

"This shouldn't have happened"A man say sighingly..
Yeah it shouldn't have but now ,it's all finish you have different life and I had different"A girl of around 30 Says while getting up and wearing her black cote and glasses back.She took a sigh and saw:"I guess it's the time for me to go now"
"HMM" This is all could a guy say...!



They both went on different destination but with same thought why couldn't they get along..they had many beautiful memories together but actually they had,where did they actually went wrong...!..




Should I continue or not???
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maria!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 7 The beautiful Phase
Part 8 pg 30(not hyperlinked)
Part 9 pg 33
(not hyperlinked)
Part 10 The Decisions
Part 11
Part 12*Engulfing the new Happiness*
Precap Part 13
*Chapter have been hyper-linked*
Edited by MrMrsChiping. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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definitely you should continue it.
great concept!!!!!!
waiting for the first chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1
AR version
It was a bright morning but a bit cloudy..A car came to halt and stand in front of an office .A guy came out of the car,he was good looking ,well toned body..A guy for which many girls could die...He straight went into office and bang at the cabin of "MISS GUPTA SINGH RATHORD"..He came inside angrily and shut the door soo tightly that the whole office rattle but the girl sitting on the chair just look at him and turn her gaze.This make the his blood boil,he angrily went to her and caught her shoulder tightly making her stand on her feet..and say in range"WHAT THE HELL DID YOU THINK OF YOUR SELF ,IT HAS BEEN DAMN 2 WEEKS I AM WAITING FOR YOU AT OUR HOME BUT YOU DON'T EVEN DARE TO INFORM ME ABOUT YOUR WHERE ABOUT RIDDHIMA".He said it and wait for her to speak or give him some explanation but not again she is silent this is what she doing from past 2 years...he leave her shoulders knowing she will not speaks unless she wants.Riddhima smirk and look at him"Done with your speech, First it was never OUR home it was yours,now yours and will always yours and second thing what did you just said i didn't come home from past 2 weeks,some one has a weak memory MR.Mallik to make you remember you yourself ask me to leave you alone"
Arman look at her with anger,guilt,pain,frustration in his eyes and say:"Yeah I told you to leave me alone for sometime but not leave my house"
Riddhima:"So,what did you want me to do,live in your good for nothing house wait for you till 2 am,ignore important meetings..and at the end of day got what Riddhima i am busy can't come to home,you have your dinner,what should i have do live in your house like a decoration piece"
Arman:"Look
Riddhima,STOP TELLING ME WHAT YOU ARE DOING FOR ME OR NOT!..I don't have time,I was busy.."
Riddhima"Yeah busy but when your this business go when you are having dinner or I say date with Susan"
Silence prevailed in the room,both of them don't speak a word for some time then after few minutes arman spoke:"What i done was not only mine fault yours too but I want you to come back home,not for me but for our daughter,she needs us"
Both didn;t speak anything for a while then
Riddhima spoke finally:"I am coming back home ,not for you but for my daughter arman,you can may leave now,I have some important meetings"
Arman kept looking at her retreating figure...as the flashes of him and her beautiful moment came in front of his eyes...!
***************************************
In the evening arman slowly open the door of his room presuming that
Riddhima might be sleeping but as he enter the room ,he saw room in the same condition as it was from last two weeks.He banged the door in anger and went down to go to riddhima house ..As he was going outside the house he heard her calling him..
Riddhima:"Arman.! there is no need to bother my parents i am back in your home".Saying this she was about to go when arman held her wrist and jerk her closer.her back was leaning against his chest...Arman remove her hairs from one shoulder"Miss you so much..finally after 2 long weeks you back"he kissed her crook of neck..Riddhima smiles sarcastically and say"So you miss me huh??Where is your Susan huh"
These words pricked arman's heart and boiled his anger..there was a pregnant silence in the room..Arman close his eyes and held more tightly Riddhima from her waist..Tears were trickling down her eyes..Arman brought his lips closer to her ears and whisper"Lets get marry
Riddhima..before things got out of her hands plz..!"
Riddhima closes her eyes hearing those words again...


Sorry for my mistakes leave your precious comment
love
maria:)


^miss93 that was your answer of the question..why it was miss gupta not mrs mallik...!



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1
ArSh version
It was a bright morning but a bit cloudy..A car came to halt and stand in front of an office .A guy came out of the car,he was good looking ,well toned body..A guy for which many girls could die...He straight went into office and bang at the cabin of "MISS GUPTA SINGH RATHORD"..He came inside angrily and shut the door soo tightly that the whole office rattle but the girl sitting on the chair just look at him and turn her gaze.This make the his blood boil,he angrily went to her and caught her shoulder tightly making her stand on her feet..and say in range"WHAT THE HELL DID YOU THINK OF YOUR SELF ,IT HAS BEEN DAMN 2 WEEKS I AM WAITING FOR YOU AT OUR HOME BUT YOU DON'T EVEN DARE TO INFORM ME ABOUT YOUR WHERE ABOUT SHILPA".He said it and wait for her to speak or give him some explanation but not again she is silent this is what she doing from past 2 years...he leave her shoulders knowing she will not speaks unless she wants.Shilpa smirk and look at him"Done with your speech, First it was never OUR home it was yours,now yours and will always yours and second thing what did you just said i didn't come home from past 2 weeks,some one has a weak memory MR.Mallik to make you remember you yourself ask me to leave you alone"
Arman look at her with anger,guilt,pain,frustration in his eyes and say:"Yeah I told you to leave me alone for sometime but not leave my house"
Shilpa :"So,what did you want me to do,live in your good for nothing house wait for you till 2 am,ignore important meetings..and at the end of day got what Shilpa i am busy can't come to home,you have your dinner,what should i have do live in your house like a decoration piece"
Arman:"Look
Shilpa ,STOP TELLING ME WHAT YOU ARE DOING FOR ME OR NOT!..I don't have time,I was busy.."
Shilpa "Yeah busy but when your this business go when you are having dinner or I say date with Susan"
Silence prevailed in the room,both of them don't speak a word for some time then after few minutes arman spoke:"What i done was not only mine fault yours too but I want you to come back home,not for me but for our daughter,she needs us"
Both didn;t speak anything for a while then
Shilpa spoke finally:"I am coming back home ,not for you but for my daughter arman,you can may leave now,I have some important meetings"
Arman kept looking at her retreating figure...as the flashes of him and her beautiful moment came in front of his eyes...!
***************************************
In the evening arman slowly open the door of his room presuming that
Shilpa might be sleeping but as he enter the room ,he saw room in the same condition as it was from last two weeks.He banged the door in anger and went down to go to Shilpa house ..As he was going outside the house he heard her calling him..
Shilpa :"Arman.! there is no need to bother my parents i am back in your home".Saying this she was about to go when arman held her wrist and jerk her closer.her back was leaning against his chest...Arman remove her hairs from one shoulder"Miss you so much..finally after 2 long weeks you back"he kissed her crook of neck..Shilpa smiles sarcastically and say"So you miss me huh??Where is your Susan huh"
These words pricked arman's heart and boiled his anger..there was a pregnant silence in the room..Arman close his eyes and held more tightly
Shilpa from her waist..Tears were trickling down her eyes..Arman brought his lips closer to her ears and whisper"Lets get marry Shilpa ..before things got out of her hands plz..!"
Shilpa closes her eyes hearing those words again...


Sorry for my mistakes leave your precious comment
love
maria:)


^miss93 that was your answer of the question..why it was miss gupta not mrs mallik...!


Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maria is very nice dear..i a so happy that u r back!! congrats girl
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept ..please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part!!!!
what???arman's having affair with susan and blaming shilpa for it.
wow!they have a little angle girl.
waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii maria
welcome bck
congrats on da new ff
interesting start
so armaan n shilpa arn't married
but have a daughter
was armaan cheating shilpa with susan
so many questions
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is beautiful..Thank u for making an arsh version...please continue soon..

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