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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krazy4kash

Hey
Jst started readiny ur ff

Seeks really interesting
If u could pm me nxt time u update

Luv

Kj




welcome back dear:)
sure will pm you again:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MrMrsChiping.



hum properly bt kr sakta hai actually tum se bt krni thi..agr net prob na ho to pm mai bt kra???


yeah sureee
fb account hai tmhara??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!
Thanks for the pm
Looking forward the read
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey awsome update n plxx dont stop
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!
ariha left them😭😭😭
both AR will be so broken,specially armaan
glad to know about armaan's POV
now i really hope that their relation will get strong now
plzzz kill this susan😡she is the root of all evils😡
will love to see armaan supporting ridzy now just as she had always did
plzzz don't abondon ur ff
it's really great
sorry for the late comment,but i did commented as soon as i read the part
waiting for another part and susan's departure😃
update soon
and thank you for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update...awesome.. and plzzz do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
ab mein kya bolun yaar...
armaan and ridhima lost their daughter... and armaan was so much dependent on his child it the only thinng he wanted in his life after geting his love aab vo bhi...

and mothers can never let go of their child,... toh ridhima ka ariha ka saara saman sambhalna toh natural hain...


ab armaan have realise the pain of ridhima... aab armaan ridhima ko sambhalaega ... i mm waiting for next part ,,,,,,


do update siooon plz

luved it
aayushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...loved it...
poor armaan and shipla they lost their daughter 😭
waiting for next part...
update soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 11 The Pain


"You are the reason my daughter went away from me you are!
" She yelled at him.

He stands there still watching her.He knows that she was in not right state of her mind but still her words felt like a sword which is penetrating into his soul with every invasion its pain increases.
His anger increasing breathing become enraged but still he calm himself because he know her pain her despair he know ,because just like her he had also lost their baby.

Calming his breath he hole her and say"Riddhima Ariha is no more.She died"

Riddhima looked at her with such a rage that his soul shuttered"What you just said my daughter died". Moving extremely close to her she slapped him ,slapped him so hard that her fingerprints left the mark of their burtility on his skin.Tears flows down his eyes .Her slapped evoke the feelings that he fee like hitting her but controlling his anger he again move to her and say "Riddhiima sweat heart listen.Ariha is no more .She left us.She is finally free of the pain"



******
"She is finally free of her pain"These words rang like the good song in her ears. Finally her daughter her princes is free of the pain.
Finally her face soften.She looked into his eyes and whisper"Arman our daughter left us.But she will not be in pain any more right.She will not shout in pain again right na"



*******
Finally he took a sigh and move closer to her.Hugging her tightly .He hide his face completely into the crook of her neck.He so wanted to this ,after the death of ariha.He was tired of handling the pain of ariha's death alone.He hugged her and both the parents cried for their little angel.



****************************


Moving the key into the whole he opens the door and enter into the house .As usual the quietness of the house ,leave the the very strange feeling in his heart like a void.




"Papa you holme" A small beautiful angel in her pink frock runs towards him and pull her hands towards him and told him to pick her.


He move down to pick her but suddenly she vanishes.
Tear flows down his eyes without any hindrance.He closed his eyes .Removing the tears he moves towards their room.




On his way he saw the door to his angel room open.He hears the voices


"Ariha.Tch come here dear and eat this.Your father will be back any moment he will yell at me"

"Good papa willl angry at you.He revenge you fol yeing at me")good papa will take revenge from you for yelling at me"

He chuckles listening those words.He opens the door fully .And saw the room like a dull place which once shine with the beautiful angel. The tears which he removed earlier again come to his eyes.He looked at the room trying to remember each and every memory of her.The pain become too much for him to bear.He was about to move out of the room when he saw Riddhima sitting on the floor with that pink doll in her hands.Her eyes as usual distant.
Her lips swollen,nose red due to crying.
He quickly removes his tears.and go to her.




****************************************




After arman left for office.She started to clean the house .But her steps stop at this particular room where her flower bloom only for few years.Again she felt her breath stops.It has been months ariha left them but still the pain is there.Still her memories haunted her.

She move closer to her bed and saw the pink doll lying thier.
It was ariha's first doll.And she never left her till her last breath.Riddhima sat on floor and took that dool in her hands as the memories of her angle came back.

********************************


Arman sat by her side.this was her usual routine and he cant see her like this.She speaks less ,eat less with in few months she loses her weight too much.Even now she doesn't fell his presence.
Her psychiatrist has already warn him about her metal condition.Now he has to do something.Something to bring her back.

He put his hand on her shoulder.
Riddhima turn back stare at his face with her expressionless eyes.Arman smile at her and asked what are you doing Riddhima.

Her trance broke and she looked around "I..Uh.."

She saw the clock and was shock to see the time it is 7 30 pm.She has been sitting here since morning.


Arman knows seeing her expression what she is thinking.
"So again you spend your whole day playing with doll.And now again we have to go out for dinner.You lazy women .cant you just cook for your husband daily". He said in a cheerful voice.


She looked at him with sad eyes and says"I..Am..I am sorry.I didn't realize about time.Just giv.."

Arman smile at her ,pecking her lips lightly he says"Nahh i am too hungry to wait for the dinner to pray.Just change your clothes we are going out for dinner"

She just nods and went to change.Arman saw her retreating back.Its the time to think about doctor suggestion before it turns too late.




*********************************



After coming from dinner ,Riddhima just went to change her clothes and after changing layed down on the bed.

Arman too changed and join her in the bed.
When Riddhima feel him lying beside her.She just faced him and hugged tightly.


A slight happiness arose inside him as he felt her hugging him it has been ages since she hugged him.Arman hugged her back and caressed her hairs.Whe he felt her kissing on her chest and then moving up till his neck to her cheeks and then finally looking up .First pecking his lip lightly and then staring into his eyes.
Alone tear escape out of his eyes.Finally she is loving him after so many months of pain.
He hugged her.

She kissed his cheeks again whisper slightly"I want my baby back arman"



Ignore the mistakes:)

Love Maria:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 11 The Pain(ARSH)


"You are the reason my daughter went away from me you are!
" She yelled at him.

He stands there still watching her.He knows that she was in not right state of her mind but still her words felt like a sword which is penetrating into his soul with every invasion its pain increases.
His anger increasing breathing become enraged but still he calm himself because he know her pain her despair he know ,because just like her he had also lost their baby.

Calming his breath he hole her and say"Shilpa Ariha is no more.She died"

Shilpa looked at her with such a rage that his soul shuttered"What you just said my daughter died". Moving extremely close to her she slapped him ,slapped him so hard that her fingerprints left the mark of their burtility on his skin.Tears flows down his eyes .Her slapped evoke the feelings that he fee like hitting her but controlling his anger he again move to her and say "
Shilpa sweat heart listen.Ariha is no more .She left us.She is finally free of the pain"



******
"She is finally free of her pain"These words rang like the good song in her ears. Finally her daughter her princes is free of the pain.
Finally her face soften.She looked into his eyes and whisper"Arman our daughter left us.But she will not be in pain any more right.She will not shout in pain again right na"



*******
Finally he took a sigh and move closer to her.Hugging her tightly .He hide his face completely into the crook of her neck.He so wanted to this ,after the death of ariha.He was tired of handling the pain of ariha's death alone.He hugged her and both the parents cried for their little angel.



****************************


Moving the key into the whole he opens the door and enter into the house .As usual the quietness of the house ,leave the the very strange feeling in his heart like a void.




"Papa you holme" A small beautiful angel in her pink frock runs towards him and pull her hands towards him and told him to pick her.


He move down to pick her but suddenly she vanishes.
Tear flows down his eyes without any hindrance.He closed his eyes .Removing the tears he moves towards their room.




On his way he saw the door to his angel room open.He hears the voices


"Ariha.Tch come here dear and eat this.Your father will be back any moment he will yell at me"

"Good papa willl angry at you.He revenge you fol yeing at me")good papa will take revenge from you for yelling at me"

He chuckles listening those words.He opens the door fully .And saw the room like a dull place which once shine with the beautiful angel. The tears which he removed earlier again come to his eyes.He looked at the room trying to remember each and every memory of her.The pain become too much for him to bear.He was about to move out of the room when he saw
Shilpa sitting on the floor with that pink doll in her hands.Her eyes as usual distant.

Her lips swollen,nose red due to crying.
He quickly removes his tears.and go to her.




****************************************




After arman left for office.She started to clean the house .But her steps stop at this particular room where her flower bloom only for few years.Again she felt her breath stops.It has been months ariha left them but still the pain is there.Still her memories haunted her.

She move closer to her bed and saw the pink doll lying thier.
It was ariha's first doll.And she never left her till her last breath.
Shilpa sat on floor and took that dool in her hands as the memories of her angle came back.


********************************


Arman sat by her side.this was her usual routine and he cant see her like this.She speaks less ,eat less with in few months she loses her weight too much.Even now she doesn't fell his presence.
Her psychiatrist has already warn him about her metal condition.Now he has to do something.Something to bring her back.

He put his hand on her shoulder.

Shilpa turn back stare at his face with her expressionless eyes.Arman smile at her and asked what are you doing

Shilpa .


Her trance broke and she looked around "I..Uh.."

She saw the clock and was shock to see the time it is 7 30 pm.She has been sitting here since morning.


Arman knows seeing her expression what she is thinking.
"So again you spend your whole day playing with doll.And now again we have to go out for dinner.You lazy women .cant you just cook for your husband daily". He said in a cheerful voice.


She looked at him with sad eyes and says"I..Am..I am sorry.I didn't realize about time.Just giv.."

Arman smile at her ,pecking her lips lightly he says"Nahh i am too hungry to wait for the dinner to pray.Just change your clothes we are going out for dinner"

She just nods and went to change.Arman saw her retreating back.Its the time to think about doctor suggestion before it turns too late.




*********************************



After coming from dinner ,shilpa just went to change her clothes and after changing layed down on the bed.

Arman too changed and join her in the bed.
When
Shilpa feel him lying beside her.She just faced him and hugged tightly.



A slight happiness arose inside him as he felt her hugging him it has been ages since she hugged him.Arman hugged her back and caressed her hairs.Whe he felt her kissing on her chest and then moving up till his neck to her cheeks and then finally looking up .First pecking his lip lightly and then staring into his eyes.
Alone tear escape out of his eyes.Finally she is loving him after so many months of pain.
He hugged her.

She kissed his cheeks again whisper slightly"I want my baby back arman"



Ignore the mistakes:)

Love Maria:)

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