Two Hearts-One Heartbeat ~A ManVeer SS~ Note on Pg50

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Moonlight_Ansh

@Moonlight_Ansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

thanks for writing it.awesome...loved it. cont soon😊

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

sorry dear i am in a bit hurry so didn't read what u said but read ur update... and this part below i was crying after reading this itna ky is ky bad kuch nahin par pai or ten minutes gay...lolll..but seriously mera bara chota sa dil hai..main bht roti hn...and the way u wrote it its simply beautiful...u made cry that's not gud haan...i feel so attached as if i am in her place i can feel her pain...and i loveddd this update...plz plz update soon...so i can cry more!!!lolll no seriously update soon...ohhh...a hug for u for writing this awesome update...🤗

She stood up slowly, her eyes longing, her face expectant...as if expecting something...hoping. Hope. That was all she was left with. She wasn't complaining...nor was her faith faltering. It remained strong; the beach gave her strength...willed her to stand strong. And she did. This beach, where they had bumped into each other, reminded her that they were destined for each other...they were destined to be together. And while her breaths continued, his couldn't have stopped.
Her hope remained strong, and so did her faith in his promise...a promise that was all she was living for...that whatever happened, no one will come between them...nothing will come between.
Remembering...his deep voice reverberating in her ears, her face lit up, and slowly, a smile made its presence across her lips. With her faith renewed and strengthened...she closed her eyes and, for the last time, before pulling up mask of pleasantness over her face and re-erecting the walls strength that she had built around herself...she let her heart cry out to him once again,tears escaping her eyes and as she sighed, she hoped that this time, her call would reach him...

You're Princess waits...She loves you more each passing second and knows you'll come back to her. No one believes her, they say she lives a dream...but she doesn't care. Because they don't know what she does. One day, You'll comeback and throw a pebble at her and take her back in you're arms. She's waiting...
She's waits and loves you Halkat-Vede...
And till her last breath, she'll wait if necessary...each day, she opens her eyes and hopes for you're return..and knows, one day, you will come back...
As this breeze touches my face, i know it will touch yours too..and tell you how much I miss you. They will let you know how much I love you Uday...how much I love you...

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Tuli

@Tuli.Luvs.Uday

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

SERIOUSLY!!! 171 views and only 11 likes??Not fair!!! come on guys!! this story is very well written..the description is really nice, dont u think it deserves more likes???

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Oyeshee amazing prologoue😃 It was very well written⭐️ Ekdum jhakas tha😎 Haila patient no 101 is UV na? I know😉 Arre yaar update soon na😍 Title toh... hmmm you can name it ' I know you'll live for me' or ' You're my heartbeat '. If you don't like them mat lena😆 Bas jaldi jaldi update karna OK😉

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oyshee

@..oishu..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

@mahi, abbey tu kuch bolne waali hain ya nahi??? kabse tere "res." ko kuch aur mein change hone ke liye wait karr rahi hoon kaminee!!! Bol toh sahi, accha laga ya bura laga ya BOHOT bura lagaa??? Kuch toh bol!!!

@Jehan, awww thats tooo sweet yaar...u all make me feel super special :):) love u guys!! but plzz, do read all of it if u get time ;)

@princess_T thanks yaar...thanks a LOT for liking it!!! and yeah, ur guess is right ;)...nice tittle suggestions, hope to get some more. Dont worry, ill update soon :):) either tomorrow,or the day after if i get enough likes :D
love u all and ur support :):):)

Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago

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Tuli

@Tuli.Luvs.Uday

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

JUST DROPPED BY 2 ASK, WHEN WILL U UPDATE? and when will u update you're FF?

honestly, im dying to read both the updates!!!

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oyshee

@..oishu..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

@Tuli.Lus.Uday either tomorrow, or the day after tomorrow ill update the SS...and im working on HTMH, will update soon :):):)

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

That was awesome!! Plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:D

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Inkpen4877

@Inkpen4877

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

This was beautiful and a fantastic start- I can't wait to see where it goes

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

OMG Oyshee!!!

What a beautiful start! Really, I LOVED it! Just the way you wrote Manyata's feelings...so creative of you to use the bodyguards btw 😆

and the ending part 😲 wonder what happened to UV!

Alright please continue this soon!

About a title...umm. I dont know why but I feel like a good name for thsi SS would be...Breathless.

Okay dont knwo where I came up with such a radnom name from 😕 and hopefully you will find somethign suitable soon 😊

Alright update soon!

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