Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29

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Ammm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

nice update...

thanx 4 da pm

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priyah_reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Awesome update :)

So ASR finally did come to the Mehendi ceremony :) will he see the "A" in her hands ??? If so, what will he assume ???

Loved it !!!

Can't wait for more :)

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aeyshaalim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Wow a new thread nd with that a dhamakadar update
Congrrates

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

I feel like a those eager kids I get excited when I see parts A-F its like I did something to deserve so many parts!

He Came! HE CAME! He cant stop thinking about her and she cant either omg! Fangirl moment!

Love this STORY!

CONGRATULATIONS ON THE NEW THREAD!

Edited by Crazy_1001 - 13 years ago

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tanurocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

congrtz on ur new thread...

wonderful update ...loved it. their confusions, both of them are in a battle with their own emotions. awesome...

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Nice update. Im glad he came

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suran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Congratz on the new thread dear... thnx alooot 4 da update... ❤️

hmmm glad ASR made it on time.. 4 a moment i thought it wz samar.. nt dat i dnt lyk da character bt he flirts 2 much dat 2 wid khushi.. he's gonna get it if he continuez as ASRz thr 😉

anyways Luvd it as always n do update soon😍.. i knw itz 2 greedy 2 ask u 2 update soon bt wat cn i do i'm so adicted 4 ur updatz...😳

gr8 wrk dear

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Prasanna_dhanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

What do I say about this one KC, Awesome...

The self talk for both Arnav and Khushi was beautifully depicted, the confusion, the helplessness, the inner struggle between he mind and the heart.. so well written.

The highlight was Part F and the very filmy masaledar entry of Arnav and Khushi's mehendi imprints and the dhamakedar dialogue " what would you like to eat"... wow, it had me smiling ear to ear...

great update and thanks for making my weekend :)

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Gosh! That was awesome! ASR's soliloquoy was so entertaining, the way his thoughts kept moving from one angle to another back to square one.
Who came to the house? Am still confused, was it her?
Their phone convo when they both kept quite and were comforted was so... Serene.
Ah this Samar is being friendly with khushi, hehe hope he tries in front of ASR too, that will be fun. Loved the last part! Hayye, what do you want to eat? And all girls are going to be so j of khushi. Thoroughly enjoyed the update.