Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29

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smarty94

@smarty94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

res.

*EDIT*

GOD!! they both r the biggest confused souls EVER! i really pity ASR sometyms, disadvantages of being a business-man, his mind goes on over-drive when thinking, especially when its related to HER! *PPpfFF* he really needs some lessons to understand that he is FALLING IN LOVE! confused atma!😆 and as far as khushi is concerned well she has always been a confused soul, so it useless evn mentioning!😆 she really needs to know it FULL NAME now! it wud help her figuring out her feelings fr him.😊

although SAMAR is being chipku, bt i lyk him. seems lyk a sweet guy😊

HE CAME???😲 HE LITERALLY CAME??? well that was expected, he was already comtemplating on the idea of going or not! bt stl HE CAME!!!!!!😲

wOah! she imprinted her mehndi hands on his shirt😲 i wonder how he FINALLY decided to bestow his *much-awaited* presence upon the function😆 i hope he REALISED something😕

i am doing a happy dance ryt now, that u FINALLY FINALLY UPDATED! uuufff! now i can sleep in peace. i hope u get *carried-away* AGAIN, that too soOn, so that v can a huUUge SOoOper-MEGA UPDATE next tym😆 sorry fr being hasty😳

and congratulations on the new thread😃

take care and update soOn, and this tym really soOn, please😃

Edited by smarty94 - 13 years ago

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Awww loved it
The inner conflits to understand what They feel
U r awesome this is si Amazing to see How They think

And How They try to understand whats wrong
Loved the end what do u want to eat awww
and whos. The chick at asr house

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

super awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

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Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

great update

thanks for pm

cont. soon

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Congratulations on thread 3. 🤗

I had a blast reading your entire update. A super thank you from me. 🤗

I love the inner monologues they both have. 👍🏼

That is one cliffhanger you leave us with. Not only did he show up, he got branded by her. 😆 On the fandom loved white shirt. 🤣

He is might feed her publicly? 😲 How long will we have to wait until the next update? 😭

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Arshibest

@Arshibest

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Awww he came
So sweet

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jen_x

@jen_x

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Aww, poor ASR, he loves her... N Khushi is confused why he was acting weird...

Thanks you

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Sindhu

@dhulanya

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

oh my gos i'm screaming...

u make me do d things tat i dont do even in my dreams...

but really i loved to b lik tat...

really i started to talk with myself...

always in some thoughts...

mostly in absent minded...

i didnt think abt my future husband etc etc but nw i hv list qualities for him...

always thnkng abt him lik how he looks?, wat he is dng? and all thoughts abt him circlng around me...

i just dont knw my mst of d thoughts filld with fate mate even in my classes...

whn evr i login if i just searchng for ur pm...

especialy whn i'm frustrated with smthng r sm1...

i searchng peace wit ur ff...

sry sry i'm searching nahi i found peace whn i feel lik lik yellng at sm1 r smthng...

i dnt knw y but i feel really cool wit ur ff...

its simply superb...

i just loved it always...

really no words to xpress u knw...

he came for her oh god i screamed wit full happiness while reading last line so sweet...

how cute thy r omg cant control myself frm jumpng wit excitmnt...

actually aftr part d i thought d updt is completed bcz sm1 commntd thr na but aftr tat thr r 2parts i feel relive thn but wats use in tat tat 2 parts to finished in nxt 5 min wat to do u knw wat hw sad i feel...

sry for lat comment my classes started so i'm in hostel i can nly use lap at weekends sry for tat...

really lov to read more my frnd c is new to if i suggested her to read ur ff...

c loves it & but c is silent reader but i hop c will start to comment aftr c finish readng all parts...

big hug for u & ur cutey🤗...

these r for her❤️...

my hearty wishes for ur cutey to hv such a sweet mother❤️...

love ur story & writing style...❤️

love to read more...❤️

love u & ur cutey...❤️

always loved it ... ❤️

Edited by dhulanya - 13 years ago

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cute_arshi

@cute_arshi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Very nice update

Finally ASR came

How much he try he can't live without khushi;-)))

Waiting for the next update

Thank for the pm

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

awesome update loved it loved asr inner turmoil khushi is filling up all the dead spaces bring color and laughter and joy awesome update loved it hope he sees the a thanks for the pm