Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29 - Page 35

loveed each and every parrttt...

thnx 4 pm😃

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well KC i had reserved it for my 2501 post. I wanted to start my IF-DAZZLER post by this. i hope you are not angry on me for that. Sorry...

Res for maha comments as usual.

Part A

awe i am sure ASr must have felt bad (did i say ASR now thats a new thing i always call him arnav, well i guess you have made sure i call him what you call him in this FF. anyways getting back to my comment...He must have felt back when she stressed on he is not my boyfriend (well i could clearly think sanaya's expression...sanaya's expression mind it not khushi's and i hope you are understanding what i am trying to say. dont want to elaborate here as you might kick me out for this controversial comment, but i said what i felt) He is your boyfried khushi he is a boy and he is your friend then why deny it? In fact he is more than a boyfriend to you dear.

Samar: Is this the same ASR from your college? All of Priya's friends were drooling over him?

Khushi: Shut up. Yes, that's him.

lolz i can smell something is burning...khushi

Part B

Lol that phone thing was really sweet haan! lovely. that was so real. Lol Cant believe samar said leave her for me and asr did not react. Well I think there is still time to make him react. So today ASR needed help from khushi? How sweet is that.

Awe arnav said she is here with me to the girl I am sure that made her heart swell up. "Princess" hmm nice progress prince charming. Already addressing your princess as princess. That's cute.

Part C

That girl is NOT my friend. Hmm asr stressing on NOT. Intersesting. Awe khushi like gloomy more how sweet is that. ASR should call her both you know when they are conversing generally he can call her glomy and when he is kind of mushy mushy he can call her princess and when angry or upset then khushi. And so want khushi to figure this out. That would be so much fun.

ASR do you really want her to rip your shirt haan? Sochlo before its too late to control.

Khushi darling why are you so jealous dear? He is just a friend to you right? Then why are you not liking when she is talking to your friend? Kya baat hai darling? Is something cooking? And yeh lo ASR to aur ek banda hai usne ghee dal diya na by saying priya is different. Till now Khushi was different for him and now he addressed her friend as different. Hmm miss j is boiling inside but acting cool outside. KC you better don't forget these. I want you to bring it up sometime later in front of ASR. Khushi should blurt these puffs of feelings kabhi na kabhi. Keep that in mind.

"Jab tumhari narzon ke samne tumhara "A" hai to ussey haat mein kya dhoond rahi ho? The letter is already written in your fate no need to find it in your fateline in your hand. He is right beside you. Just open your heart an embrase the hidden feeling.

Part D

Firstly thanks for using the banner.

I love the wy asr comforts her. He is so caring KC. I absolutely love his character. I can feel how emotional khushi is and the way he comforted her I bet any damn girl would have melted and hugged him back.

Part E

Kuch ristein aise hotey hai ki kuch bina kahe hi sab samaj mein aa jati hai. When you know the person so well, you don't need her to say before you actually end up doing what she wants.

Loved this part. Another part close to my heart in this FF.

OMG KC while reading this part I was in lose of words. Trust me it again touched my heart. I lost my dad when I was very young about 2 years and after that my mom took the whole responsibility. I am her only daughter. I have been through a lot of tough times in life but still I see things positively. I make negetive things positive. Don't think I am bragging about myself, I am just writing my heart out. Somewhere I am able to relate myself with this khushi of yours. I know exactly why she remains happy no matter what. How she keeps others happy. I can see my reflection.

Part F

Well the eye cleaning part was lovely again I liked how asr said that he wont hurt her. He better no KC.

Khushi dear tumko jitna mendi lagana hai lagao yaar. Hai na tumhara Tsumani to help you out. I am sure he will gladly take all your sweet nakhras.

"Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho. Kya gam hai itna chupa rahe ho." That's khushi.

Part G

OMG he hugged her. Awe I loved it so much KC. I wish he never lets her go from his embrace. She needs him. He needs her. They both need each other yet they are far from each each still they are close enough. How irony.

Yes khushi you have him (not still) forever. And I am sure you will find him beside you whenever you want him wherever you want him and however you want him. He truly takes you as his responsibility but he doesnot realize it.

Part H/I

Oh asr that's a new thing we saw in you today. Rain dance and you insisting khushi to dance. Wow quite a change I must say. Khushi do you realize the change you are binging into him? Why don't you spend a little more time to analyse arnav? I mean you should yaar. I know you treat him as your "just friend" but still. Don't close your eyes for god sake.

I loved the situation. I loved arnav's romantic side. I loved th dance and once again KC its my all time favourite song. How you do this yaar? KC whats your zodiac sign? Just asking. I mean we are so damn compatible as far as emotions are concerned.

Overall lot of progress in one update. Loved it. Waiting more for dinner thing and way back home.

first of all i really love his all that PRINCESS thing..LOL i was too giggling, thinking who must be more surprised by this, he or khushi..😆

then his poor shirt, ROFL.! that was so funny followed by his *speechless* reaction..! LOL seems like she was too-determined to spoil his shirt.! by the way if m not mistaken he was wearing a white shirt na..?? aww how i love him in white 😳

after that i really love his style how he typed all that msg and pleaded her to escape him from his crazy fans.! some STYLE he has got huh.? 😉

then comes our miss snotty...how he side-tracked her by not even being rude to her..that was so gentlemen of him..😛

then my poor baby don't even knew that she was feeling jealous aww..! and must say, the way you wrote all her feelings that she was going through that time, wen he was talking with priya was highly remarkable. you know i was also able to feel her feelings that time.!

then comes my hero's turn. *blush* how he dragged her from that event, took care of her understood her each n every emotion without even uttering a word.!...aww that was so caring of him. and yeah i really have to give you the credit for writing about khushi's parents so beautifully.! i almost had tears in my eyes while reading that part.. it was fab. great work there.! 👏

and then came the most beautiful part of the update...that how he danced with her with all that celion dion talk.! i was soo giggling there, that my mom was like what she doing there..? LOL fallen miserably for him now...*blush-blush* no going back now.! and the last part was simply sensual. it really gave me goosebumps reading how he admired her.! yeah i agree it was just a plain statement but i really ticked me deep down. 😳

just to let you know m writing from hell as m already dead after reading your much-awaited update so avoid my mistakes.! and sorry for this long comment but i too got carried away...:D

hey one more, request do continue writing like this... as i really LOVE this FF .it's my favourite..!

so that's it for now !

continue soon and do take care.! 😊

arnav 1st time asks for khushi helpn dat to safe him from his fans😉

anyone who finds arnav n khushi together would say dat they r gf n bf

khushi past was quiet pain

specially it was very emotional dat she sings to feel her parents

oh the rain scene i love it

the name princess is nice i hope she accepts it

n give new name to arnav also

thanks for the pm