Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29

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ananya123

@ananya123

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

So I haven't read the entire FF... but I'm getting there, I promise I am.

The romance is cute. You are literary a mastermind and you tie everything together so well in your stories.

You are an amazing story-teller and one author everyone has to check out, if they haven't already.

I am intrigued to see where this story goes...

Edited by ananya123 - 13 years ago

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amritafan

@amritafan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

i was missing gloomy nd tsunami so much.thank u for such a wonderful update but m really scared.i hope khushi realises her feelings for him before it is too late.

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Sam

@huntinchild

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Brilliant update!!! Nice scene in the rain. Thx for the PM. Can't wait to read more 😃

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ARSHIfan001

@ARSHIfan001

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

I'll probably die out of excitement!!!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Reserved

Sorry for now editing till now!!! A bit busy..!!!! Will be back with a comment soon! Sorry...

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I guess I need some kind of a mahurat to unres my comment! *Sigh... But the good thing about unreserving late - I got to read the chapter twice! Yaaayyy!!!!

Well - before I say anything else today - I just wanted to quote the most beautiful lines from the lonnnggg loonnnggg looonnnggg chapter! And I have a question here - how do you write so much at one go?!!!! I absolutely lurrrvvveee your chappies!

Anyway - the lines I loved -

Some rain is happy rain. Some rain is sad rain. Some rain is comfort rain. Some rain is friendly rain. Some rain is warning. Some rain is calming. And some rain is just simply bad rain.

Awesome! It was innocent, sweet and meaningful... 👏

And so Arnav's Princess was happie the entire chapter. It was such a light and relaxing thing to read this! Also, Princess kind of makes Khushi looks spoilt - which she is apparently! I mean, ASR is spoiling her too much for her own good... Ruining his shirt for example! And making him get drenched in the rain and then listen to her blabber... The list goes on!

I loved the jealousy part... At least they will realize that what they share is something more than just some random friendship! Good old jealousy - who said it was a heartless bitch?! It isn't... Go Jealousy! Do your job!

She just stood there all alone, she looked at her mehndi to find the A in it. But she wasn't able to. She looked and looked but she still couldn't find it. She was getting frustrated now. The frustration turned into irritation. In another few minutes, that irritation turned into tears. Why can't I find it? What is wrong with me? She looked harder this time with her blurry eyes. Her tears made her more frustrated, she quickly wiped them using her arm and continued looking for that A.

Awww... Please make her realize that her 'A' is with her alll along the function! Please please please... No crying, ASR's Princess... No no no!

I can't tell you how much I loved that whole singing-and-dancing-and-driving-and-getting-wet-in-the-rain part...! Loveeeddd it!

Amazing chapter dear! Waiting for more... And I'm horribly sorry for unreserving this late!

Edited by -.Pearl.- - 13 years ago

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

resss

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i don't know how many post are their to unres on your ff... but i will do this one right now...

i was half an hour late for my work... because i was reading the update and here again in office i am commenting on your ff... well i owe this before you kill me...

do you know that i love you a lot...?? if not then let me say this--- i love you di... i love you sooo very much for writing this story... i get so happy with every update that i can't tell you...

for once i don't think about about khushi's pain...i don't think about her miseries... i don't think about her past...i don't care for her tears...i don't try to feel her pain...i don't think how bad she used to feel when she miss her parents... i don't think about her financial condition... i seriously don't think about anything..

though this one is not the real SHRUTI.. i swear...i usually get senti when i see people crying forget seeing them.. i can even read it,... but here i don't know what come over me..

may be because i know one day arnav will take away all her pains... he will remove all the miseries of her life...he make her future as bright and colourful as he can...one day he won't let her even a single tear... he will be with her as her family... *shaking my head*

i am just glad that khushi has someone like arnav in her life... i love khushi... but i love arnav more fo being the person he is for khushi..

when i read yours updates i just get into some other world... a dream world... where life is like a fairy tale...

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It was a pleasure to read the updates arnav is such a darling... I truly madly deeply and crazily love your arnav... I wish I can meet someone in real...life looks so beautiful when such people are around you... J

It was an awesome update... I loved every-single-bit-of-it... I truly mean it... i am so scared that what will happen to me when you will end this story...omg..its like a nightmare... but I am eagerly waiting for the day when khushi will know this that asr actually stands for arnav singh raizada

Its look like I am commenting for first time... but I seriously can't comment only over few parts because I loved everything... thank you di...

Edited by Shruti21 - 13 years ago