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Geeta singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Loved it

awesome parts

do continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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Sammara

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 3 will b on soom

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Tanvi Dandime

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Posted: 13 years ago

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waiting for the update!!!!!!!!😊😊

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Sammara

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 3
Guys this is part 3 of my ff. Please enjoy,comment n like

Locker room..
Ammy: Ab mein kya karoonga. Mudjhse itni bari galti kaise hua. Aur vo bhi shaadi se pehle.
Nikki: Tum ne jaanbujhke ye sab to nahi kiya na To bas Ridz ko yahi samjaawon
Nurse: Dr armaan, apko riddhima Gupta ko discharge kar na hoga. Armaan goes. With the nurse.

Patient room...
Ridzi; Armaan tum kaha tai mene tumhara intezar kitna kya bata hai. Ab reports mein kya likaha. Bataw na.
Ammy stroking Riddhimas face: vo basket tum... Vo tumhe. Haan tumhe fever hua hai
Ridzi: armman see mene kaha ta na. Challo mujhe ghar chor do.tum discharge papers sign kar don.
Ammy signs the papers.
Ammy: challo mein ghari mein ghar chor deta hoon
Ammy holds her as she walks.
Ridzi: Armaan mein chal sakti hoon.ab challo na jaldi.

Gupta house
Ammy:here tumhara ghar aa gaya. Ab mera godnight kiss please
Ridz:oh ok. If u. Say so
Ammy: Really
Ridzi: yeah
Ammy closes his eyes and ridzi runs inside the house
Ammy: oh come on this isnt fair na basket.
Bye Next day- Sanjeevani
Riddhima goes to her locker
Riddhima: hi guys. Ap sab itna quiet kyu hai. Ky a hua, aur di ap mujhse moon kyun pher, liya
Anji: Ab itni innocent mat bano. Hum jaane chuka hai. Just magine mom aur dad ko bata chalenga to kya hoga.
Ridzi: di app yeh kyun keh rahe hai. Maine kiya he kya hain.
Anji: As if you dont know Ridzi: Sachme di mujhe nahi bata
Anji: watever. Challo guys lets go
Everyone leaves except armaan
Ridzi: Armaan mene aisa kya kiya ke di mujse naraz hai.
Ammy hugs her: maybe usska mood karab hai.
Ridzi:Nahi Armaan. Vo bohot ghusa lag rahee ti
Ammy: anyway, ye bhulo anyway ajj tum ko lunch time your brother is coming to meet u. Ridzi nods and goes,leaving Armaan in worry
Ammy: Ab sab ridzi aur mere saat bhol nahi rahe he.

Lunch time...
Ridzi: adi bhai aap ageya
Adi: vo armaan ne kaha ke tumhe fever ta. Ab kya mere behen teek hai.
Ridzi: ha bhai. Bilkul
Adi: To itni dhuki kyun lagrahee hon.
Ridzi: vo anji di mujse naraz hai.
Adi : oh teek hai main chalta hun

Canteen ...
Adi:Anjali. Mujhe tumse baat karni hai
Anji: je bro. Ek minute
Adi: Tum log Riddhima se baat kyun nahi kar rahe hon.
Anji: Bhai bata hai uss ne kya kya?
Adi:kya?
Anji:vo pregnant hai.
Adi:what.oh mmy god.
Mujhe armaan se baat karni hogi
Locker room...
Adi: Armaan mujhe abhi bata chala ridzi ki pregnancy ke bara mein.
Ammy":vo aditya mujhe nahi bata kaise hua.
Adi: agar tum mere behen ko achi tari ke se treat nahi kar rahe ho, to tumhare khair nahee. Samajgaye.
Ammy.: Je. App fikr mat karo mein riddhima se bohot pyar kartehon.

General ward...
Ridzi feeks dizzy again, armaan catches her.
Ammy: challo ghar chalte hain.tum hare tabyat teek nahi hai.
Armaan takes her home
Ammy:Darwaza to locked hai tumhare pas keys hai kya.
Riddhima. Ye lon
Armaan picks riddzi up and puts her on the sofa.
Ridzi:armaan kya hua, itni gumsum kyun beta hu. Main sab jaante hu ab. Tum worry mat karo
Ammy: To riddhima tum aise condition mein kaam pe kyun aiye. Tumhe rest kar na chayye.
Riddhima: Armaan im fine now.
Ammy: yaha beto main abhi tumhara liya fruits lata hoon
Ammy returns and feeds riddhima with his hands.
Ammy: ab mein tumhara kayal rakhiinga.
Ridzi:Teek hai baba.
Ammy: ab mein tumhe kabhi nahin akela choronga. Aur jald se jald shaadi kar ni hogi. Teek hai
Ridzi: Armaan, itni jaldi.
Ammy: haan, challo tumhe mein bedroom mein drop off karde te hoon. Tumhe ye halat mein araam chahye na.
Ridzis bedroom...

Ridzi: armaan mujhe change kar na hai
Ammy: toh karo na mei kaha rok rahe ho tumhe. Ridzi:Armaan... (she blushes) baharr jawon please.
Ammy: kyun . Mein to yahi rahoonga. Tumhe jo karna hai karo
Ridzi: Bahar now
Ammy:Teek hai. He comes back after
Ammy: yeh lon bed mein sonjawon now.
He leaves

..Sanjeevani library ...
Ammy: pregnancy book... How to be a good dad. Thats it thesea two books. Ill borrw these
. Locker room...
Ridzi:Armaan tum aur books. Tum teek to ho na.
Ammy: han vo mere patient ke liye. Vo bhi pregnant hai
*ammy thinking: mein basket ko dikhana chata hun je mei. Ktna acha dad banuga. So ussa books nahi dikha sakta*
Ammy: im so happy tumhe sach bata hai aur phir bhi mujhse baat kar rahe ho
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Ridzi: iss me kya bari baat hai. Ab mujhe jaana hai canteen.
Ammy: ek min
He kisses her on her cheek
Ammy: I love u.
Ridzi; Me 2

...Canteen..
Ridzi : waiter mujhe kuch tikha don na please.
Ammy comes in when ridzi is about to eat
Ammy: riddhima tum pagal ho gayi ho.
Ammy:Tum ye nahi kaa sakti hun.
Ridzi: kyun nahi. Mujhe to yahi kahna hai
Ammy: Riddhima for god sake TUM PREGNANT HO
. Riddhima:KYA
Ammy: Tumne kaha ta ke tumhe bata hai
Ridzi: mujhe nahi bata ta. Mein to fever ke bara me baat kar rahe ti
Ammy: yeh lon tumhara reports. Please mujhhe kabhi mat chorna main mar jawoonga
Ridzi: hahaha. Oh god.heehehehe
Atul: tum teek to ho
Ridzi: armaan jab tumne yeh para ta toh upar page pe surname dekho chaudrey aur me to gupta hun. Ye mere patient ki hai. Par I cant believe all of u guyz thought id do this.

Promo Kya ridzi sab ko maaf karengiArmaan kya karenga?

Guys how was this part. I hope u liked it
Ill ud part 4 soon..
So please like and comment please...
Love u all
Sammara
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Edited by Sammaraxx - 13 years ago

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teenorchid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

awww...thank God ridz nt pregnant... Nyc part. Waiting to read more

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Asma Khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

This was hillarious.
Poor Armaan was so worried for Ridz and she was not pregnant.
Plz update the next part soonest.

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Lolzzz

Love the part

Do continue soon

hanks for the PM

Take care

Geet

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soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awsum updates luv da concept
Plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x

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Sammara

@Sammaraxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

HEY GUYS THX FOR ALL UR COMMENTS,THIS IS PART 4,, PLS ENJOY,COMMENT N LIKE

Sanjeevani canteen...
Ridzi:par I cant believe ke app sab ko laga main aisa kar sakti hu.
Anji:sorry ridzi, hum samaj nahi paaye
Ridzi breaks anji off
Ridzi: to kya di. Aap kabhi bi mujhe samaj nahi payee hai. Aur app sab kaise dost hon, ke apni dost par shak karta hu.
Atul: ridzi but..
Ridzi: no buts atul, tum logon ne Armaan ko kitna pareshan kiya hoga.
Nikki: lekin ridzi jab tum teek nahi tee to tumhare symptoms vaise match kar rahe te
Ridzi; come on guys, hum sab doctors hain, mujhe allergy hui ti aur dehydration bi.
Ammy: Basket, im really sorry, mujhe laga ki..
Ridzi: Nahi armaan. Tumhare galti nahi hai. Mein actually khush hu ke agar main pregnant hoti to tum mujhe kitna acha tareeka se dayan rakte.
Ridzi walks out

Corner cafe...
. Ammy: I thought you would leave me.
Ridzi: Armaan main aise kabhi nahi karti sach me.
Ammy: teek hai now no more sadness sirf khushi. Par basket tum ne mera sapna tor diya, main bohot look forward kar raha ta
Ridzi mischieviously: Oh really, Dr badmash
Ammy: yah. Agar tum chaho to we can still .
Ridzi:.. Armaan...
Ammy: oyye hoyye. Tum sharmili bohot ho.
Mein sirf joke kar raha ta.
Ridzi: challo, romance katam kar lo, ghar jana hai

Ammy's house... ...
It is raining out side and ridzi gets wet along with armaan
Ridzi: Armaan tum mujhe tumhare ghar kyun len aaya.
Ammy: challo na. Dekho tumhare mom dad puri raat ghar pe nahi hai aur anji night shift pein hai.
Ridzi: teek hai par ek ghante main mujhe ghar chor yaana Ok. Im all wet.
Ammy: actually last time se yeh chor diya ta tumhara salwar suit. Ye lon change kar lon.
Ridzi changes. Armaan enters. He sees riddhima cant tie her ribbon at the back of her dress. He walks upto her and moves his hand upto her back and ties it. She feels a shudder through her.

Ridzi: Armaan... Ab to ghar chor do na.
Ammy: kyun dar lag raha hai.
Ridzi: nahi vo mujhe neend araheti. So iss liya. Ab challo na.
Ammy drops ridzi off to her house

Sanjeevani- next day ...
The gang except from ammy n ridzi: please forgive us ridzi Hum se bhul ho gayi
Ridzi: guys, ive thought about it and koi bat nahi mene tum sab ko maaf kar diya hai.

Sanjeevani general ward ...
Ridzi: Armaan ek naya patient aayi hai. Dr keerti nai kaha kei tum uska check up kar le na. Usse haath mein tora sa lag gayi hai. To uska dressing kar len na.
Ammy: ok boss Ammy to the patient
Ammy: Hi sonia. Havent seen you in ages kaise ho.
Sonya: mein teek hu ammy. Tumhaare yaad bohot aaye ta college ke baad.
Ammy; I know ya. Kaam me busy.
He does her dressing on her hand.
Ammy: Challo main tumhe baad me baat kar ta hu.
Ridzi had been watching from afar.

Emergency exit...
Riddhima pulls Armaan in...
Ridzi: Armaan vo larki kon ti jis ke saath tum has rahe te?
Ammy mischieviously: vo mere girlfriend hain duh
Ridzi: Kya
Armaan: sniffs: hmmm jalan
Ridzi: main nahi jal rahe. Vo kon hai
Ammy: Tum jal rahi ho, iss liya to puch rahi ho.. Dont wory vo meri dost ti college main
Ridzi: Pakka
Ammy: Ha baba, pakka... Vaisa tum itni jal ti kyun ho?
Ridzi: kyun... Kyun..kyun ki voh tumhare saath chipakrahi ti
Ammy: vo to main sirf tumhare saath karta hu.
Ridzi: Armaan
Ammy: Riddhima
Riddhima: Armaan
Anji: riddhima
Ammy: Basket yeh to mere lyn ti..
Anji: ahem... Ahem... Maine bola
Ammy: oh. To anji tum ne kaha.
Anji: Tum dono ka romance kabhi katam nahi hota kya?
Ammy: Nahi. Now jau. Mujhe romance puri to kar ne don
Anji: im sorry, ridz go ghar aana hai. . So bye.. Wait me jaate hun tum ridz go bye kehdo mein bahar wait karti hun.
Ammy: basket. I love u.
He kisses her on the cheek.
Ridzi: But I really hate u. Jokin I love u too.

Gupta house...
Riddhima: hi papa. Kaise hai app.
Shashank: Beta, main to acha hoon. App ka din kaise gaya
Riddhima: bohot good gaya
Shashank: beta, main soch raha ta ke kyun nahi tum Goa wali sanjeevani main jee au.
Ridzi: papa vaha pe sanjeevani hai.
Shashank: han beta, iss desh mei to bohot hai. To..mene tumhara form bhar diya hai to abb kal tum jawongee.
Ridzi: ofcourse papa. Teek hai. Mujhe ko bhi problem nahi hai jaane mein.

Ridzi's bedroom...
She rings ammy...

Ridzi:hi armaan. maine iss liye phone kiya kyunki kal main goa vali sanjeevani,main jaa rahee hu. so papa ne tickets book kardi hain. tum mujhe chor ne awoongai na..

Ammy: Kya tum goa wali sanjeevani main jaara he hon aur vo bhi teen din ke liya. Abb main kya karonga akele.
Riddhima: Dont worry, mein teen deen main wapas aajawongee aur vaha par phone bhi karoongee.
Ammy: Phir be. Bilkul akele.
Riddzi: ill be fine. Ab mein rakti hoon bye

Airport...
Armaan drops ridzi off
Ridzi: mein phone karoongee aur msg bi.
Armaan: hmmm
Ridzi: apna khayal rakna
Armaan: hmmn
Ridzi: yeh hmmmn hmmn kya laga rakha hai. Bholo na. Jab tum aisa chehra karti hon na to bilkul ek bacha ke tara dekh te hon.
Armaan: I love u u know
Ridzi: I know. Ab mujhe jana chahye
Ammy kisses her on her head
Ridzi & Ammy: BYE. Love u... :(

Promo ...Ridzi akele kya karengi goa main Ammy kaise rahenga akele Dekhye part 5 mein of DMG,AR pyar forever

Kaise ta guys. Acha ta. Aaj tora sa smooth storyline ta. Anyway app sab soch rahen hoga ke ridzi aur ammy alag kya karengi ur story kitni boring hogi But dont worry part 5 best hai kyunki bhot bara shok lagna vala hai. So bata kar ne ke iye read part 5 which update soon hoga. Thank u for ur comments everyone.
So pls comment and like so I can pm u.
Sammara
Xxx

Edited by Sammaraxx - 13 years ago