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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thx for commenting sweet desire, soni4eva
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PART 7

Hey guys. Sorry late ud ta.Thx for all ur comments.
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Beach...
Ammy:Riddhima I told u taxi main jayengai to time pe ponchenge.
Ridzi:Acha tum sahi tai. Kush ..
Ammy:Haan, bohot khush pehle baare main aur tum bahar gaye hai. Ajj koi mujhe tumhare saath romance karne se nahi rok sakta.
Ridzi:Armaan challo na hum sand pe behte hai vaha deck chairs pe.

They are walking past the sea when a gang of boys walk past and whistle at Riddhima. Armaan gets angry.
Ammy: AYYY TUM LOG. Who do you think ur whistling at
GUY: That hot girl there. Usku kena hamare saath aajaye ...
Ammy: You know wht vo meri girlfriend hain. So agar tum ne ab kuch kaha to your dead.
They start laughing and armaan goes over and punches and kicks them until they run off.



Ridzi: Armaan tum ne yeh sab kyun kiya.
Ammy:Kyunki vo log tumhe kitni gandi nazar se tumhe dekhrahe tai Ab tum yeh vo cardigan pehn lo.
Ridzi:Teek hai baba.

Ammy and ridzi go sit at a deck chair.
Ammy : ab I really want to get married basket.
Ridzi: I know,main bhi. Pan uske liya papa se baat karni hogi
Ammy: Ya I know. Aur sasurji to..
Ridzi: Armaan, papa ke baare main kuch bhura mat kaho ok.
Ammy: Ok ok. I lovecu so much riddhima
Ridzi: Itna pyar kartai ho to mujhe baho main lain lo.
Ammy:Oh ok. Agar tum chaho to teek hai .
He comes on her deck chair and pulls her to him.



Ammy: Ab to hum tori dere saath time spend kar aakte hain. Im so happy.
Viren: Hey guys wassup.
Ammy: Pehle basket ke ghar walai beech mai ata tai ab yeh viren
Viren: Soz armaan tum ne kuch kaha
Ammy: Nahi kuch nahi.
Ridzi:Tum yaha...
Viren: Well main aise hi aaraha ta beach pe jogging ke liye par phir I saw u and thought id come over.
Ammy: Oh very nice of u. (in a sarcastic tone). Yeh to mera saara romance plans karab kar denga.
Viren:So ridzi hum main, armaan aur tumhare liye ice cream le ayya?
Ridzi:,haan sure. Armaan main abgi aayi.
Ammy: yaar yeh riddhima meri saath time spend kar nai aayi yah usse ke saat.

They return.with the ice creams
Ridzi: Ye lon armaan
Viren: so guys sap sab ka plaond kya hai aaj ke liye?
Ammy:Actually I was going to take ridzi out for a date
Viren:oh can I come,
Ammy:Sorry no date pe sirf 2 people hota hai. Dso sorry... Challo ab hum challe riddhima.
Ridzi:Urm teek hai. By v
Viren: bye, enjoy.

In taxi
Ammy:Basket tum usse ke saat gayi ti kyun. U should have taken me
Ridzi:its ok. Aur tumhae aadat hai, tum jalte bohot hu
Ammy:Haan, mujhe jalan ho rahi hai. Next time usse to main ek lesson dunga.
Ridzi:Armaan tum aisa kuch nahi karongai.
Ammy:Wait and watch. Anyway challo hum.hotel jaate hai change karne ke liye then will go on a date.

At restaurant...
Ammy:,Ajj tum bohot achi lag rahi ho
Ridzi blushes:thanks
Ammy:Oyye hoyye... 2 years ho gaya hai iss rationship main aur tum abhi bhi blush kar ti ho.
Ridzi:Armaan
Ammy:Riddhima main agar tum se kuch maangu to kya tum mijhe dungi.
Ridzi:Pehle bhlo.
Ammy:Nahi first promise
Ridzi:fine main promise karti hu. Khush mere sheru
Ammy:To give me a kisss
Ridzi:What, armaan sab ke saamne.
Ammy:Yaha na di hai, na atul.no one. So please
Ridzi:Armaan kal raat mene diya ta na. Ab aisa kyun
Ammy:,Kal raat to mene tumhe diyata. Ab tumhara turn... Kal main aur aaj main bohot faraq hai
Ridzi:,Fine but not herw, hotel main
Ammy:Alryt

They eat the pizza


HOTEL Room...
Ammy: whoaa, im tired.
Ridzi:awww,
Ammy: Ab kiss
Ridxi: Armaan tun issi ke baare main soch ta rehte ho kya...
Ammy:Ha hamesha

Ammy puts ridzi on the bed and they kiss

Ammy:im so happy ke tum maan gaye ti kiss,ke liye . Ab lests go to sleep soniyo
Ridzi: let me go and get change.

Ammy:main aawoo madat chahye to.
Ridzi: Armaan main change karne jaarahee hu no u cant come

Ridzi comes out and they both fall asleep


Armaan wakes up to find ridzi not there or in the room

Ammy:Tum kaha ho.ridddhima
He goes to the reception ...
Ammy: Excuse me kya aapna Dr ridhima gupta anywhere?
Receptionist: Jee haa, vo ek admi ke saath cafe breakfast kar ni gayi hain
Ammy:Oh ok. Thank u

Ammy goes to find riddhima but is there with viren laughing and joking.

PROMO...
Ab armaan kya karenga
Kya AR ka reationship toot jayenga.

Stay tuned and read more

Sorry guys for the late update. Hope u liked part 7.
Agar koi comments ya questions ho pls write in comment box I will reply to them.
Pictures kaise tai.
Hope u lyked it.
Please comment and press like
Ill ud part 8 soon
Length ok ta na

Love u
SAMMARA
xxx. :-D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni4eva

Awsum updates luvd dem x

ill ud soon
pls comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for reading and commenting
ill ud part 8 soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luvd da update plzz cont soon x
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Originally posted by: soni4eva

Luvd da update plzz cont soon x


Thx.. Hope u liked the pics.. I will ud soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww... Nyc part..loved it... Ufff ths v na. Y he comes everywhere
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it
Awesome part
Thanks for the PM

Geet

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Originally posted by: teenorchid

awww... Nyc part..loved it... Ufff ths v na. Y he comes everywhere

haha
ye v bhi na...
lol...
ill ud soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DMG, AR PYAR FOREVER...

PART 8


Cafe in hotel
Ammy sees ridzi and viren together having cofee and laughing and talking
He gets angry and storms off to his room...
Ammy to himself:Hamesha aisa ho ta ha... Koi hamare beech ajata hain. Riddhima mere saath aisa kyun nahi baat karti. Aur vo viren vo to ussa isa dekhraha ta.


Ridzi:Hey .. Good morning. Tum jaag gayye?.
Ammy:Haan tum gayi kaha ti?
Ridzi: vo... na.. Vo receptionist ko bata rahee ti kain hum aaj leave kar rahe hain.
Ammy:Oh... To tum vo cafe main nahi ti.. USS VIREN KE SAATH.
Ridzi:Haan main vaha gayeti aur haan main viren ki saath ti. Tum ghussa kyun hora he ho sheru
Ammy:khud se pooncho. Tum ne jhoot kyun bhola
Ridzi: Kyunki main jaanti hu ke tu aise react karongai.
Ammy:I dont understand anymore... I just dont. Tum chahti kya ho... Aur I jus dont know ke main yaha kyun aaya. Tumhe to koi faraq nahi parta kai main hu ya na.
Ridzi:Armaan tum aise kyun bol rahe ho.
Ammy:Kyunki tumhd pata hain ke main tumse bohot pyar karta hu. Fir bhi tum viren ke saath sab kuch karti hu.
Ridzi:Vo sirf mera dost hain. Tum mujhpe shak kar rahe ho fir se.
Ammy: Nahi main tumpe shak nahi kar raha hu.
Ridzi: To yeh shak nahi hai to kya hai armaan.
Ammy: main jaanta hu ke tum merw saath kabhi nahi cheat kar sakti.
Ridzi: Tooo
Ammy: to mujhe aaj bhi uss viren pe trust nahu hain. Dar lagta hain ke vo hum dono ko alag na karde.
Ridzi: U know what Armaan, tum mujhe jeena hi nahi deta ho.
Ammy: What do u mean by that huh?
Ridzi: Yahin ke main tumhare saamne ek larka se baat bhi nahi kar sakti. Itnai overprotective kyun ho?
Ammy: kyunki...

Knock on door...

Receptionist:Sir, maam aap ka aeroplane time jaa raha hain.
Ridzi :Haan hum aaraha hai

In the aeroplane...
Ammy goez to sit next to ridzi but viren stops him

Viren: Sorry yaar. Vo yeh meri seat hain
Ammy: Ok ryt.
Ridzi feels a bit bad
Viren:Hey so we meet again. Kya hua,
Ridzi: Kuch nahi. Bas tired hu.
Viren: ridzi kua yeh tumhara pendant hain vo hum jub cafe main tain tab yeh ghir gaya ta.
Ridzi: Haan yeh mera hi hain. U do not know ke miss ko kitna doonde rahi ti.
Viren: main pehnado.
Ridzi: Urmm... Ok....
He moves ridhzi's hair and clips the pendant.
Ridzi: Thanks.
Armaan had been watchin this happen and was very angry.

Ammy looked at ridzi and she was tryin to say sorry but he stopped looking n turned his face away...

Gupta residence
A knock on door. .

Anji: Guys I think ridzj is back
She opens door
Anji: Hi ridzi, I missed u so much
Ridzi: I missed u so much too di
Shanky: AB tum behno ka hogaya hai kya mujhe bhi apni beti se milne don
Ridzi: Papa, I missed u so much
Shanky: Jhoot
Padma: Haan armaan ta na.
Naani: to armaan beta bi hotel main room mangaya ta kya..
Ridzi... Haan vo uss ka akela room ta aur mera bhi. Dad , mom, main bohot takhi hui hu so main room.main tora araam karnai jati hu. Ok.
Padma: Teek hain beta.

Ridz goez to her room still thinkin why armaan was still angry at her.
Just coz she neva spent much time with him there.

Anji: Hey ridzi to batawo kaisa ta goa.
Ridzi: Bohot acha ta di. Sab paperwork project ke liya khatam hogaya.
Anji: huh.. Main uss ke baare main nahi baat karahi. Main to.tumhare aur armaan ki lovestory ke baare main puch rahee hu.
Ridzi: haa. Di hum nai bohot maza ki , beach pe etc. Di im tired mujhe sona hain.
Anji: alryt.
Ridzi goes to bed still unhappy and sad.

Malik residance
Ammy: I think maybe I was too hard on her. Ab to vo viren kebab main haddi to nahi banega. Hes out the way man.
Kal main basket ke saath saare problem solve karloonga. Yea.
Ab sau jawoo ammy. Kal jaldi jaag na hain. Pyar ke liya to kuch bhi... Love u basket


Sanjeevani...
armaan comez out from locker room. He sees ridzi and is about to go up to her but then sees viren talkin to riddhima while walking

Armaan to himself: yeh yaha kya karaha hain. Phir se riddhima ke peecha peecha aagaya. God...
Anji, atul, rahul,muskaan and nikki go up to viren and ridzi.
Nikki: hey ridzi how r u aur goa kaisa raha?
Ridzi: bohot acha. Anyway guys main tum sab ko.kisi se milwana chahati hu. This is viren.. Mera naya dost.
Armaan watches from afar aur bohot ghusa hoja ta hain. Aur vo vaha se chala jaa ta hain.

Everyone says hi to viren except nikki.

Muskaan: tumhara bf to yahi ta ridzi, ab kaha gaya? Bohot ghusa lag raha ta.
Rahul whispers: jalan ho rahi hongi. Ill go talk to him later.
Muskaan: Haan yahi karna.
Ridzi and ammy are both still sad..😭. Ridzi.is confused ke ammy aise kar kyun raha hain. And ammy ko nahi bata ke ridzi kyun virsn ke saath guum ti hain aur chahti kya hain...

Promo:
Nikki ne kyun viren ko hi nahi bhola
Kya raaz hain
Kya hoga AR ka relationship ko.
Kya Ar ka pyar hamesha forever hoga.😆


Hey guys...
Hope u liked part 8 of my ff
pls read, comment and press like
Next part is better than this...
ill ud soon
thx😛

love u all
SAMMARA 😊

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