AR FF: DMG,AR Pyar Forever Part 21 ud pg 52 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc part...wat no shocks plz.only good news
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great part😊😊
loved it❤️
waiting for ur next update😃
and thanks for the PM:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thx guys for ur comment... Ill ud soon
Dont worry next part wil b better
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy u enjoyed and liked this part
Thx for all ur comments
Next part will b better than this
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😛PART 5

Ridzi in aeroplane...
Ridzi:Armaan mere bina kitna lonely feel kar raha hoga. Iss aeropane mein kitna tand lag raha hai, Dont worry armaan main jald vapas aajawongee
A guy: excuse me kya ya seat number 26A hai?
Ridzi: Haan ji kyun any problem hai?
Guy: Nahi vo app kai Pass mere seat hai.
Ridzi: Oh. Sorry. App behm. Sakte hai.


Guy: Thanks, so mera naam hai viren
Ridzi: Nice to know im riddhima.
Guy: Bohot acha naam hai. Aur app kitni koobsurat hai.
Ridzi: agar app ne mere saath line maar ne ki koshish ki na to apke kher nahee
Viren: Oh ok.
Hostess: excuse me, aap ko chai, coffee etc. Chahye.
Viren: Wait a minute riddhima tum chai wali type lakti ho.
Ridzi: Jee nahee, mujhe coffe chahye. Black coffee, 2 sugars and very little milk.
Viren: good, acha hai ke tum coffee pee ti ho. Tumhe bata hai kiss type of people chai pee ta hai?
Ridzi: mera mom pee ti hai.
Viren: ...haan, mai yahi kehna wala ta... Awkward. Il call u ridzi, u can call me V.

Goa airport

Viren: so ridzi, hum phir milenga right. Number chahye.
Ridzi: Hum nahi milengee ok. Aur mujhe tumhara number nahi chahye. Aur ek akri baat tum bohot flirty ho. Bohot bura hai
They leave in seperate ways.

Hotel...
Ridzi: Excuse me... Receptionist...
Receptionist: yes how may I help?
Ridzi: vo, mera room number 14 hain. Kya aap mujhe dikha sakti hai.
Receptionsist: Sure.. Ye admi aap ko vaha layjayengaa.
Ridzi: ok. Thanks


Hotel room... GOA..
Ridzi puts her suitcases on the carpet. And sits down on the bed.
Ridzi to herself: Oh god. Im so tired. Ek minute maine to armaanko phone bhi nahi kara. Vo mera bohot chinta kar raha hoga. Abhi karti hu.
Riddhima dials ammy's number in the phone
Ring ring. ..
Ammy: Hello, Riddhima, tum kaise hu. Teek se ponch to gayi ho na. Tumne it ni late kyun phone kara?????
Ridzi:haan baba, me teek hu, achai se poch bhi gaye aur taxi main tora waqt laga ta, to iss liye late phone kar rahee hu.
Ammy: Acha to tum mujhe miss kar rahee ho kya. Ridzi: Ofcourse not, main to bohot maza kar rahee hu mere doosre boyfriend ke saath
Ammy: Acha. Agar main usse mila tovuske taange tor doonga.
Ridzi: Ab itna hero mat bano
Ammy and ridz laugh.
Ammy: Main tumse bohot pyar aur miss kar ta hu.
Ridzi: main bhi
Ammy: so please give me a kiss now.
Ridzi: Abhi, phone pe. R u mad
Ammy: yes im mad about u.
Ridzi: nahi armaan
Ammy: Oh. Mere basket phone pe kitni sharmati hai.
Ridzi: ab phone rako mujhe kal jald utna hai, saneevani goa project ke barre main
Ammy: ok. Bye I love u
Ridzi: I love u too. Bye...
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Next day- after sanjeevani goa meeting.
Back at hotel.
Ridzi walks past lobby and then stops.
Ridzi: Tum... TUM YAHA . Mujhe stalk kar rahe ho kya.
Viren: Kash, but mujhe nahi bata ta ke tum isse hotel main rehrahi ho.
Ridzi: Haan ton.
Viren: To hum saath main goa ghum ne jaate.
Ridxi: Oh hello. Main to tumhe jaanti bi nahi hun.. Aur tumhe lagta hai main tumhare saath jawoongee..
Viren: Fine... Lets be friends. Ab friends dinner to kar sakte hain. Promise main kuch try nahi karoonga tumhare saath.
Ridzi: Teek hai. Pan agar tum ne kuch kiya
Viren: To tum... Tum mujhe maar na. Okay


They go to an italian cafe.

Viren: Ridzi, tum kya order karongee?
Ridzi: Urrrmmm... ITALIAN NOODLES AND STIR FRY.
Viren: ok... Waiter italian noodlems and stir fry, actually double it. Main bhi yahi kawoonga.
Ridzi: To tum kar tai kya hon?
Viren: Well main ek phone business own karta hu
Ridzi: tum ek business man ke tara nahi dekte ho. Viren: To tum kya karti ho?
Ridzi:main doctor hu sanjeevani main
Viren: tum to model ke jaise dekte ho.

Just then riddhima's phone rings..

Ridzi: Hi armaan
Ammy: im missin u. Tum kaise ho
Ridzi: Achi hu

Viren interupts: oh riddhimas boyfriend. Oooh

Ammy: vo larka ki awaaz kaha se aaye.
Riddhima: mera dost hai. Ab badma eing karoongee ok. Abhi tori si busy hu...
Ammy: ok to say I love u
Riddhima. Nahi baad main. Bye

She hangs up.

Viren: challo khana aagaya hai. Khana shuro karo
They start eatiing
Viren: so vo larka kaun ta phone pe.
Ridzi: its non of your business. Anyway vo mera dost hain.
They finish and head back to the hotel.

Hotel
Ridzi: main mera room main jaa rahee hu. Maybe ill see u again. Lunch was nice.
Viren: ok. See u

Ridzi enters the hotel room
Ridzi:yeh letter kya hai?
She opens it.

Dear basket
"Mei jaanta hu tun mujhe bohot miss kar rahee ho par yad rak na ki , yeh chandni raat do joodai ki nahi, do pyar karne waloon ki milen hai.
Kash mein tumhe bata sakta ki main tumse kitna pyar kar ta hoon riddhima,...subah ka pehla khayal tumhara hota hai... Aur raat ka akhri bhi... Tum ho to sab kuch hai... Tum nahi ho to kuch bhi nahi..
I love you riddhima.
Tumhara armaan

Riddhima read the letter and felt tears in her eyes. She whispered I love u armaan



Ridzi opened the hotel room door and found a path of red petals from the door onwards. Vaha ek notice ta jis pe likha ta " riddhima follow". Riddhima ne path ko follow kiya aur uska upar petals pheka jaa raha ta. She smiled. Ridzi agga challiv until vo hotel ki ballroom mein ponchi.

A voice: Ek larki hai mere zindagi mein jis ke bigar mera man nahi lagta. Uss ke begar nahi ji sakta aur usse zayada mere liya koi nahi hai. Mera pyar hai, zindagi hai aur dill bhi. Riddhima ke liya to mein meri jaan bi deh sakta hu.
I love u riddhima.

The man turned around showing his face.
Yes it was armaan
Ridzi: Armaan
She ran up to the stage and hugged him.
Ridzi: Armaan... Tum yaha kya kar rahe. Goa mein
Ammy: vo baad mein samjawoonga. Vaise mera dhamaka surprise kaisa laga
Ridzi held armaans hand: Bohot acha.
Ammy: riddhima agar koi dekliya to.
Ridzi: oh sorry.
Ammy: Nahi, its ok.
He puts her hand on his hand

Promo:
Armaan kaise aaya goa.
Aur goa mein hoga kya un dono pyar karna waloon mein. :)


Guys acha laga part 5.. Length good ta. Part 6more interesting hoga jyunki armaan iss main zyada hoga. So please read karna bohot acha hoga.
Aur comment bhi karna.
Like bhi karna
THX
Sammara
xxx
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😛 😛PART 6
Pls enjoy, comment and like.😊

Ballroom...
Armaan held Riddhimas hand.
Armaan: So hum dance kare.
Ridzi: Ofcourse. Challou

Then they danced for a long time to their own salsa music, they were too busy dancing to their hearts content ke unne pata bi nahi hua ke sab une dekhraheha. Aur jab yeh dekha to riddhima bohot sharmana lagi especially jab sab applaude kar rahe ta.
Ammy: Tum abhi bhi pehle ki tara dance karti ho.
Ridzi:yea I know.
Ammy: Oyye hoyye!!!Aur aaj bhi sharmati ho..
Challo ab kuch kahte hai

They went to a vacant table and sat down opposie each other.
Ridzi:To armaan mujhe yeh nahi samaj aaraha ke tum yaha pe kaisa aaye
Ammy:Come on basket, its simple main plane se aaya
Ridzi: Armaan mazak ban karo. Tumhare tara nautanki pehle kabhi nahi dekha
Ammy:Iknow. Lekin tum ne to aise pucha ta. To jawaab main aisa hi dunga na.
Ridzi: are, main yeh kehrahi ti ke sanjeevani main kya keh kar aaye.
Ammy: Well, Tumhe yaad hai jab sasurji nai tumhe kaha ki tumhe goa jaana hai. To phir baad main mujhe phone aaya Dr shashank se. Vo kehraha ta ki mere bi zaroorat hogi project main. To main aagaya.
Ridzi: Tum ne mujhe phone kyun nahi kara ke tum yaha pe agaye ho.
Ammy stroked her face: To main tumhe suprise kaise karta.
Ridzi:Aww your so sweet.
Ammy: You left out handsome
Ridzi: Ab itna over mat bano. Acha hotel main room book kiya ke nahi.
Ammy: Oh no. Mujhe bata ta ki main kuch bhulgaya ta. Kya main tumhara room share kar sakta hi pls basket???
Ridzi: Urmm... Ok but no funny business.
Ammy: Main aur funny. U got the wrong guy. Im jokin.

They sit and chat for what seemed ages. Until viren came along
Viren: Oh to yeh hain ridzi ka boyfriend.
Ammy: Haan koi shakh.
Viren: No
Ammy: Yeh kaun hai?
Ridzi: Yeh hain mera naya dost viren
Viren: Thats right hum plane main mila ta, phir hotel main aur phir we went out for dinner.Am I right
Ridzi: Vo lunch ta.
Ammy:Lag raha ha tum mera bighar bohot maza kar rahee ti.
Ridzi: V go please
Viren: ok. Fyn
Ridzi: Ofcourse not, I missed u so much.
Ammy: Ooohhh. To mujhe bohot miss kiya na to ab jau uss viren ki saath aur saath main mujhe miss karo.
Ridzi:Armaan aisa kyun kar rahe ho?
Ammy: Im sorry par jab koi tumhe aisa dekhta hai na to mujge bilkul acha nahi lagta.
Ridzi: Aur jab tum mera saath itna possecive hota ho na to mujhe bohot acha lagta hai.
Ammy: Ab room main challa.
Ridzi: Ok, challo.


In the room...
Ridzi: maiabhi change kar ke aati hu.
Ammy: Ok. Ill wait.

Armaan sits and takes his top off leaving him in his vest due to the garmi weather.
Riddhima comes out of the bathroom, she is wearing a white long night gown. She bends down to the table to pick her magazine up when she reveals a bit of her back. Armaan yeh dekhta hai aur uska aankhe nahi hata sakta. Vo aage jaate hain still facing riddhimas back and strokes his finger on her back. Ridzi shudders


Ammy:Tum jab itni khoobsurat dekhti hon na to main tumhe dekhta reh jaata hu. Why do u do this to me???
Ridzi:armaan
Ammy:Shussh. Ab kuch mat kehna.

Phir armaan usse uska pass kinch ta hai still riddhimas back towards him. He then gently put his hand around her waist. Ammy moves her hair out of her neck and kisses it slowly. She shivers.
Ammy: aaj to mujhe kiss kar ne do?

He takes her to the wall. Vo itna pass kara rehta hai kai unne dono kai saason aur darkhan sunai dehti hai. Armaan aage bar ta until their lips touch and they share a blissfull kiss.
Armaan starts to get carried away until riddhima armaan ko rokti hain.

Ridzi:Armaan stop. Hum abhi yeh sab nahi kar sakta.
Ammy: im really sorry riddhima acha hua ke tumne mujhe rok liya..
Ridzi: Its ok, atleast ab to tumhe tumhara kiss to mil gaya.
Ammy: vo to hain. Tumhe nahi bata ke main uske liya kitna intezaar karta ta.
Ridzi: I wish hum dono yahi par rehsakte apni poori zindagi.
Ammy:Dekhna shaadi ke baad...
Ridzi:Tum dekhna...
Ammy:Teek hai, hum dono dekhenge.
They laugh


Ridzi: Armaan tum kaha sleep karonge.
Ammy:Yahi.. Zameen matlab floor pe. Tum mere chinta mat karo tum bed main sonjau.
Riddhima is about to fall asleep
Ridzi: Par, armaan tum floorpe nahi sleep kar sakte kitna hard hai.
Ammy goes up to riddhima and holds her face
Ammy:kya tum mujpe trust kar ti ho???
Ridzi: Haan ofcourse. Aise kyun puch rahe ho???
Ammy: Kya main yeh bed main sleep kar sakta hu. I promise ke main ek side pe sleep karoonga aur tum doosre side pe.
Ridzi: .. Urmm... Ok.
They fall asleep slowly

Next day...
They awake and ridzi finds her head on armaans shoulder and their hands holding together.
Ridzi: Oh im sorry Armaan
Armaan: Its ok. Anyway main soch raha ta ki hum kyun na ajj goa beach tour kare.
Ridzi:Very good idea Armaan. Main abhi bathroon main tyaar ho jaati hu.
Ammy: Main bhi aata hu. Kya hain na hum dono saath main tyaar ho jayenga na to jaldi beach ponch jayenge...
Ridzi: In your dreams...,

Ridzi comes out of the bathroom wearing a nice floral summer dress. Armaan cant help staring at her.
Ammy:Whoaaa. Riddhima tum bohot khubsoorat dekhraheeho inn kapro main.
Ridzi:Thanks aur tumhara top itna bi bura nahi hai.
Ammy: thanks ab challo beach jata hai.



Promo..
Beach pe kya hoga.
GOA Mein aur kya kya hoga.

Stay tuned and keep watching

Guys i hope u enjoyed part 6
Keep reading
Please comment and like so i can pm u
Thanks
Sammara
xxx
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Edited by Sammaraxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice parts. Lvd em... Armaan is there..yaaayyy. Cont sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update!!!
oh thank god riddhima is not pregnant.
I just don't believe how everybody could think of her like this.
above all her own sister anjali thought that her sister is a character less girl.
who has no shame in making realionship before marriage.
I personally think, riddhima should not forgive them so easily.
i just finished all the parts.
loved all parts.
arman got jealous to see riddhima with viren.
please continue soon!!!!!!!!!
Edited by fri42911 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thx so much for ur comments :
Fri42911,teeborchid, crazy4KASH_AR,SASYA.
Ill ud soob for part 7...
Pls keep readin 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey dear
Love both the chapters
Too good
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

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