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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww the flashback was sooo cute!! <3
Loved how Arnav understood that she wanted to say thank you- hey thats a start of them understanding each other! :D

Awesome update!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww with each update im loving raja so much.. he is such a cute dog... loved the first meet of khushi and raja.. so cuteee...😛 woww arnav and khushi joined hands together and worked in garden for a day... he started admiring her 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a wonderful update 😊
Loved every bit of it

The fb was fab and I loved the way you had made Khushi express her self in this chapter

The color red seems to be quiet significant in this story... or is it just my silly thought...

It's great to see Arnav understanding Khushi so well and it's only there 3rd friendly meeting, things are certainly brewing up between the two.

The scene Arnav admiring Khushi was so beautiful it created a lovely picture in my mind 😳

As always Raja steals the show like a superstar 😆 that dog is certainly one in a million alright 😛

So the famous phrase from Arnav came to life in this chapter 'What the...' 😆
Loved the simple way you brought it into the story adding humor to it 👏

This is the 1st time Arnav admired Khushi in the story right... 😃


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Woah...wat a story yaar...loved it totally...and was more interested to read more...

So atlast I have read...al the ten parts in a go...that too in just two hours...what to do...have to finish things been so busy...

Anyways...the first thought came to my mind was why does khushal and arnav are so indiffereny towards their servants...thats really a bad one...
I am a boy and so obviously I am not that much fond of arnav here and moreover I love khushi just like arnav does...dont get angry on me for this...but I cant do anything just to be fond of khushi here...and so I request you to dont give anymore heartbreaks for khushi...

And I cant understand why arnav is against marraige in every FF...there will be no solid reason behind that thought...but atlast he will agree to marry...whats the matter of having that thought when u will marry atlast...and he says like he was firm about it...

What made khushal has to think about providing shelter to madhu when knows about her relarionship with muskaan...here I am having a huge doubt on kushal's character...I am finding it a grey character...

And what happened in the woods with khushi to be frightened so much...and was feeling very bad for khushi's sadness...why she didnt want to speak to anyone...and why cant she tell wat happened in the woods...u made me read this FF and I am addicted to it now...Seee how many questions are going on in my mind...npt to mention with my work tension also but its really an amazing FF...entirely different from Price of Freedom...

And I am a pure fan of arhi...and cant bear lavanya coming between...but lets see how it will be...whats about their relation...? I dont wany read much about personal life...when I do I will feel bad for khushi...that before her arnav having relationship...

they have started their journey with the freindship and will find love soon...

And I have forgotten about Raja...Ohhh...he is so cute and adorable yaar...u know actually there is a movie inTelugu language Im from andhra pradesh...the movie is Anandam means khushi...in thst movie same as in ur story...there will be a dog...for heroine...she will hang ou with that dog...that one is her best friend...o e day dog will be caught by municipal authorities...then comes hero and saves the dog...and freindship continus to love...its an old movie probably came in 2000...
ur story just reminded me of it...but its different...

Oh and yeah...he thought that that khushi whistled for him...that was funny...how could he expect it from khushi...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

Phew read all the parts finally :)
Mindblowing updates ! Khushi not talking is the biggest example of real relationship which usually involves a girl or a guy who can't speak ! But they can understand each other and that what you need and understanding between eachother. Khushi past is really sad and hard to forget as well. Can't believe her parents died in a fire. But the friendship bond between arnav and khushi= awesome. Why does khushal hates khushi so much. *zips lips*
Awe I just love raja .. He is so cute and and mindblowing ( right now I have no words to describe him) awww thank you
your a one awesome writer ! And I must say that I loved your work , keep it up and I really appreciate your hard work <3thank you sososososo much :')
thanks for the pm and do continue soon


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Originally posted by: orchidpurple

Hi Zara...

Some how I mised reading your FFs on IF...
Read it in one go...from the start thank you so much!

It is a beautiful story...little emotional...but loved it...
Few lines I loved from all the updates... thanks very much for them. I'm proud of my work. 😳

"I knew there was a reason why "Mad" is present in your name"

" "If a person can't even help another person's struggles with at least a comforting smile, then the former person is actually the one with struggles.""'very true philosophy'

An invisible force that made him feel like Ma wasn't proud of him at all in that moment. And neither was he.

"It just brought tears to my eyes'realizing how much he loves is mom and adores her'

""Abhi always joked before you were born that you would love Muskaan more than him becuase you'd be just like him."awww'that was cute..

" I'm sorry too...for misjudging you.

Hope you forgive me, like I have forgiven you. Start anew?

I'm Khushi Kumari Gupta. But you can call me Khushi"'that message was cute'

One suspense is out about Arnav's parents death'What about Khushi's parents'did some one burn them in the house'any relation to Raizada's being involved'. *zipped lips*😆

"He shook his head at himself for even thinking that wolf-whistle was for him...Arnav chuckled at this weird day passed before carrying on back home"'.that was funny for Arnav to think the wolf whistle was for him'


Thx for the PM... welcome


Waiting for Arhi to get close, Anjali's entry...Khushi to speak...and many more suspense which I am sure you will have in the course of this FF... Anjili actually doesnt lay a huge role in my ff and arrives only at the end.😆


OP


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Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

The like button has developed some kind of animosity with me, it just aint working.
Loved the fb, so cute!! I love the way you write abt Raja and Khushi, their bond is so special.
Just imagine my grin on that wolf-whistle that Arnav thought was for him, rofl! Awesome touch.
Perhaps Buaji should rest another day, I mean Khushi has perfect help;) BTW wasn't Arnav supposed to send Aman? yep i wonder why he didn't😆

thanks for your comment


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Originally posted by: arhi101

😲Arnav helped Khushi with the gardening. OMG that was so cute of him.


Loved the whole first meeting of Raja and Khushi, especially how Raja kept following her despite her telling him to go home. Luckily she was able to keep him. Love their friendship. It was too cute. thanks. raja is like a guardian angel for khushi. you'll see how in the future.

WOW Arnav will never allow khushi to fall out of his arms. They are always open for her to fall into😍 Loved the expressions on Khushi's face when arnav offered to help. But then she allowed since they were friends😉 Loved how Arnav was admiring khushi while she was planting flowers.☺️ Gosh he makes me blush just by imagining his gaze on khushi😆 lol. arnav's gaze is sure something😳

Thank god Kushal didn't see this. He wouldn't have been too happy knowing that arnav was gardening with Khushi. I wonder y he doesn't like them much. *zipped lips*


There are so many stuff that is yet to be revealed. Waiting with bated breath to find out how the fall in love. However I hope arnav doesn't brush khushi off once he realises his feelings.we shall see.

Continue very soon
thanx for the pm welcome


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Originally posted by: chocolover98

Eee...this was sooo cuuute x

Arnav helped Khushi with the garden work...What the...! :O
Lol...amazing update dear. :)
I kept smiling like an idiot while reading the whole part..lmao! aww glad you were😃

Arnav's getting sweeter and sweeter day by day..*according to the story yeaah!* :p
Omg..Raja's such a clever dog. He senses that Arnav kinda likes Khushi.
Hahaha..lol
Thanks for the amaazing update :) welcome!
P.s. Thaaanks for the PM.
Will be waiting for the next!
I just think that somehow Arnav maybe the reason Khushi getting her void back! Just an assumption yeaaah! ;) we shall see.


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Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

awesome amazing n brilliant update as always loved it

i enjoy reading today update u dont know how good it feels to read ur update while eating ice-cream cake *i think im heaven* lol😆
devayani n khushi loved that scene devayani understand khushi so much n her concern for her like a mother figure n also her concern for madhu she so different from her husband wonder how their together or did they drift apart as time went by n fairy is a prefect description for khushi i think devayani will be their for them when they need her in the future thanks for liking the characters😳
khushi flashback khushi had found raja when she was 11 years old n searching for lost birthday gift n found raja n she use to go to the forest to meet raja?? loved how she went in search for a gift n found herself her best friend n the picture was so cute n then khushi kinda faint n arnav caught her n our sweetheart raja worrying also n arnav concern for khushi n arnav offering help tp khushi hmm he didnt call aman to help her but came himself or was aman unavailable n khushi thoughts friend help friend n accept his helpyep Anrva doesn't know what he's doing and khushi is just going along with the flow😆
arnav khushi n raja arnav staring at khushi taking in her details admiring her beauty n when khushi turn to him he nearly loss balance couldnt help but laugh arnav singh raizada was embarassed wow n then he smirk hearing a giggle from her n arnav notcing her thoughts omg and the wolf whistle couldnt help but laugh arnav thought it was for him omg too funny hehe could imagine his faceSilly ASR😆 Who can't help look at khushi's beauty.
n thanks for rewriting the sentence" Lavanya meant a lot to Arnav, but then Arnav would chuckle thinking about how to explain to the world that their relationship was literally as everyone saw it, but not what they thought. " it make sense now thank you welcome
awesome update loved it always n cant wait to read more thanks for the pm


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Originally posted by: -NishaSobti-

Lovely!!!!!!!!!!! *SUPER HAPPY* So glad!

Btw yeah getting to her senses now xP

Loved the picture where Raja was sleeping on the red shoes and Loved the Flashback like loads! thanks!

Loved the way how ArShi worked as a team,
ROFL, the wolf whistle,, man hoiw did you get that idea, was really really AWESOMEE! thanks so much for liking my idea.😳

Loved dadi's carrying nature.
THANK GOD no Dada. 😆LOL!
Btw what OS would you like?Happy? Or Sad? aww you really don't have to dedicate one of your OS's to me. it's your work so what ever you write will be brilliant. 😳
Please do let me know by PMing me or anyway! 😛

Take care! Love you!
And yes could you teach me how to attach pictures to posts, PLEASEEE.😳 there are 2 ways. One, you simply copy and paste the photo. or two, instead of copying you click copy URL link, then when making a new post click the little box with the mountins and sun in it. it's beside the emoticon button. then paste the URL link into the http: box and then click ok. hope that makes sense, lol. if you still dont get it, pm me and i'll take you through it step by step😊


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Originally posted by: Dt_goodgirl

i totally loved this update.

it was friggin awesome.
the raja scenes are so damn cute.i love writing them too.😃
the flashbacks scenes made me Awww.
they were so awesome and i definitely have to tell you that i laughed like crazy during that wolf whistle.🤣 lol silly asr
dadi looks cool but i don't like dada😛
and why am i not surprised that Arnav likes gardening 😆lol
but hands down the best thing i liked in the update would have to be the way Arnav understood her without any word exchange i mean isn't that what any girl would want 😳😳😳
That was like my favorite part in the whole update😆 thanks
It was just beautifully written😊 you don't even need me to tell you how good you are😊
all i can say for sure is to keep the awesome work up😊 thanks for the support
Thanks a bunch for the pmz that you sent😊


and i guess i blabbered all over again but only a handful of ffs make me do that and yours is one of them😊 thank you so much for the long comment. means alot to me. 😳

Bye,
Diksha 😳


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Originally posted by: sparklystarstud

can Raja get any cuter...lolz yes😆


and Arnav helped her with gardening...
im DEAD!!! LOL revive yourself woman!😆
it was cheesy wen he was looking at her mesmerized and lost his footing...heheee
so he is the first to have started harbouring the feeling...
waiting to see khushi's feelings in ur words... that will take some time😉

and Dadi should have been there to see this... wat if Dadaji had seen... wud have been rocking nah... waiting to see dadaji's expression wen he comes to know of this more than friendship relationship...will be interesting

and Arnav understood her gratitude perfectly... WOW
zara... cant wait for the next one :)

~~~ sam


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Originally posted by: shraddska

Oh that gif of Khushi hugging Arnav that you gifted was fab... thanks for it...😃 welcome


Now for the update...

A day with Arnav Singh Raizada in a garden... what a day... yay! fun in the sun😆

Khushi is Khushi... wants to do everything herself...
even though buaji is not well she is all set to do the work all by herself...
Love her spirit... Khushi is just khushi😆

But the million dollar question is... why is Mr. Raizada concerned about her so much?😆 yes whywhywhy😆
Mr. Raizada, Aman would have perfectly helped her... Why the sudden grace???😉

Oh the pic you gave of Raja sleeping on the shoe is so cute loved it...
Raja-Khushi first meet was really adorable... thank you
the instant connection between the two was so sweet...
So what I decipher is that she kept him secretly in the woods and used to visit him there often... right? yep.more about that in future flashbacks.

Oh Arnav's always there to catch when Khushi is falling...🤣not always. aman was there once too.😆
He's so concerned and Raja too...
Seiously if Raja would have been human Arnav or any one else would have had tough competition wooing Khushi...😉definatly
Khushi's hesitation for accepting Arnav's help was quite understandable... yep
Hope she doesnt have to regret her friends help friends theory...

Awww so nice of Arnav to help her... 😳
but all the while I was reading it, I was hell scared of what would happen if Kushal saw Arnav helping Khushi... His face would have been a priceless sight...😆LOL everyone is saying this😆
So Arnavji is losing his balance adoring Khushi huh? Interesting...😳
But what's more interesting is he heard a sound from her...
Wonder what it symbolises... Is there a secret about Khushi that we dont know yet???😛

So it's the other way round here is it... Arnav understands what Khushi has to say without her actually speaking...Heart to heart conversations... 😍 every thing has a way.
Mr. Raizada, girls from decent families dont wolf-whistle after guys no matter how hot☺️ they are...🤣Sooo true😆
OMG how could he even think that...🤣 And Arnav going pink... now that's something I'd love to see...🤣silly asr!!!😆

Beautiful update... Kind of a gardening date... loved it...thank you


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Originally posted by: MsCeylon

That was a wonderful update 😊

Loved every bit of it

The fb was fab and I loved the way you had made Khushi express her self in this chapter thank you muchly

The color red seems to be quiet significant in this story... or is it just my silly thought... nothing significant, unless you relate it to arnav's fav colour which is red😆

It's great to see Arnav understanding Khushi so well and it's only there 3rd friendly meeting, things are certainly brewing up between the two. the pot is bubbling

The scene Arnav admiring Khushi was so beautiful it created a lovely picture in my mind 😳 awww thank you.

As always Raja steals the show like a superstar 😆 that dog is certainly one in a million alright 😛definatly.

So the famous phrase from Arnav came to life in this chapter 'What the...' 😆
Loved the simple way you brought it into the story adding humor to it 👏yay thanks

This is the 1st time Arnav admired Khushi in the story right... 😃



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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm BACKK ; D 🤗 Ohh God I Laughed SO Much Of Khushi's Antics. Could Imagine Her Adorable Expressions While She Was Telling Deviyaani About Her Bua Jee :) Awww, Arnav Heard It Too; UFFF Khushi Wanted To Work Alone; She's Such A Sweetheart Hon . She Is Really A Fairy Naa 😍

Awww, The First Meeting Of Raja & Khushi Was SO Sweet & The Pic Is Very ADORABLE =) Could Not Stop Awwing At Them 😳 How Did Khushi Keep Raja As A Secret ?! & She Named Him Raja, WHYYY ?! Can't Wait For More Flashbacks . The Most Shocking Thing Is That It Seems Khushal Also Likes Raja . Was Raja His Pet ?! 😲

OmfgggOMGGG; ArHi Scenes Were SOOO Adorable :) Ahem Seems Like Someone Is Attracted To Khushi ; P 😍 Haha, That's SO Cuteee & Khushi Giggled Making Sound ?! ; O Is That Ordinary That She Makes Sound While Laughing ?! 🤔

The Best Thing About This Update Is That Khushal Didn't Know About Arnav Helping Out Khushi Awww, Arnav Is Understanding Her SO Much Knowing That She Wanted To Thank Him For The Help :) I'm Wondering Is Khushal Will Get Suspicious After All Arnav Wasn't At Home Or If He Saw Them Trying To Find Deviyani & Arnav . Will Arnav Tell That He Was Helping Khushi ?! ; O HAHA, Arnav Thought She Was Whistling At Him . UPDATEEE SOOON 😳
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Originally posted by: nareshSV

Woah...wat a story yaar...loved it totally...and was more interested to read more...thank you!

So atlast I have read...al the ten parts in a go...that too in just two hours...what to do...have to finish things been so busy...thanks so much for reading and now comment.

Anyways...the first thought came to my mind was why does khushal and arnav are so indiffereny towards their servants...thats really a bad one...Arnav isnt that bad, but kushal has his reasons...
I am a boy and so obviously I am not that much fond of arnav here and moreover I love khushi just like arnav does...dont get angry on me for this...but I cant do anything just to be fond of khushi here...and so I request you to dont give anymore heartbreaks for khushi...a story is a story so i can't give promises but i can promise a brighter end of the tunnel.

And I cant understand why arnav is against marraige in every FF...there will be no solid reason behind that thought...but atlast he will agree to marry...whats the matter of having that thought when u will marry atlast...and he says like he was firm about it... in my ff Arnav doesn't want to get married cuz he always used to think his mum would pick out a bride but without her he feels incomplete. it's not that he's against the concept of marriage. hope that makes sense.

What made khushal has to think about providing shelter to madhu when knows about her relarionship with muskaan...here I am having a huge doubt on kushal's character...I am finding it a grey character...kushal is a deep character.

And what happened in the woods with khushi to be frightened so much...and was feeling very bad for khushi's sadness...why she didnt want to speak to anyone...and why cant she tell wat happened in the woods...u made me read this FF and I am addicted to it now...Seee how many questions are going on in my mind...npt to mention with my work tension also but its really an amazing FF...entirely different from Price of Freedom...thanks for reading price of freedom.glad your addictedto my new ff, lol. The questions are understandable. i liketo see what readers are thinking.😃

And I am a pure fan of arhi...and cant bear lavanya coming between...but lets see how it will be...whats about their relation...? I dont wany read much about personal life...when I do I will feel bad for khushi...that before her arnav having relationship...dont lose heart. its not all that it seems.

they have started their journey with the freindship and will find love soon...
And I have forgotten about Raja...Ohhh...he is so cute and adorable yaar...u know actually there is a movie inTelugu language Im from andhra pradesh...the movie is Anandam means khushi...in thst movie same as in ur story...there will be a dog...for heroine...she will hang ou with that dog...that one is her best friend...o e day dog will be caught by municipal authorities...then comes hero and saves the dog...and freindship continus to love...its an old movie probably came in 2000...
ur story just reminded me of it...but its different... haven't heard of that film but thanks for liking😃

Oh and yeah...he thought that that khushi whistled for him...that was funny...how could he expect it from khushi...


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Originally posted by: -Tintin.

I'm BACKK ; D 🤗 Ohh God I Laughed SO Much Of Khushi's Antics. Could Imagine Her Adorable Expressions While She Was Telling Deviyaani About Her Bua Jee :) Awww, Arnav Heard It Too; UFFF Khushi Wanted To Work Alone; She's Such A Sweetheart Hon . She Is Really A Fairy Naa 😍 yep definatly.😳


Awww, The First Meeting Of Raja & Khushi Was SO Sweet & The Pic Is Very ADORABLE =) Could Not Stop Awwing At Them 😳 How Did Khushi Keep Raja As A Secret ?! & She Named Him Raja, WHYYY ?! Can't Wait For More Flashbacks . The Most Shocking Thing Is That It Seems Khushal Also Likes Raja . Was Raja His Pet ?! 😲 raja wasn't kushal's pet. Kushal just feels a beautiful and obediant dog like raja should be his pet, not a young girls.

OmfgggOMGGG; ArHi Scenes Were SOOO Adorable :) Ahem Seems Like Someone Is Attracted To Khushi ; P 😍 Haha, That's SO Cuteee & Khushi Giggled Making Sound ?! ; O Is That Ordinary That She Makes Sound While Laughing ?! 🤔If you notice khushi giggles silently so you dont actually hear anything (she doesnt speak or make any sounds, like giggle, laugh, gasp, anything.), but with arnav's incident she has accidently giggled a bit out loud which is a small step to recovery.

The Best Thing About This Update Is That Khushal Didn't Know About Arnav Helping Out Khushi Awww, Arnav Is Understanding Her SO Much Knowing That She Wanted To Thank Him For The Help :) I'm Wondering Is Khushal Will Get Suspicious After All Arnav Wasn't At Home Or If He Saw Them Trying To Find Deviyani & Arnav . Will Arnav Tell That He Was Helping Khushi ?! ; O HAHA, Arnav Thought She Was Whistling At Him . UPDATEEE SOOON 😳 will do in a moment.


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