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SANDY

@.Sandy.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

Res

*edited*
chapter ten
Me last one yehhh...sorry i hold my ears and do sit upz for 100 time for not reading on time.
Back to update.
Well well well
that was lovely
how Arnav saved her and.helped her.
Yet dadi asked him to ask aman but still he helped.
Loved the bonding between Arnav khushi annd raja.

Aww he thought tbat whistle was for him lol.
Dnt worry someday she will whistle for u too. Lol.
Sorry once again its Ramadan nd more over i have some serious personal problem.going on.

Chapter 11
Well update was sweet one.
Zara sweet name u wrote bal.sweet its balu shahi basically. Bal sweet in urdu/hindi mean hairs sweet lol. Just joking sweet name is baloo shashi and its amazing in taste.
Awww she did all this just thanks Arnav.
Loved it how he smiled at her and acknowledge her presence.
Its great dadi hate lavanaya.

Why khushl so khadoos????

Edited by sandy1 - 13 years ago

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#732

simply amazin dear...

she dint knw y she was very happy...

i lyk dis arnav,...

wonder wat will happn wen lavanya enters d screen...

awsum n amazin update...

tanx 4 d pm...

update soon

Edited by kamalapushpa - 13 years ago

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mannat27

@mannat27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

SIMPLY AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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_Tabs_

@Tabsfully

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

Awesome, yet yes a bit short of an update...

loved the last line

she couldn't explain why her heart was grinning brighter than the smile on her face.

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

Res-
Sorry for the late editing, had some prblem with the net*

Loved the Update, absolutely Brilliant👏
Khushi brought Sweets for everybody& I think it was actually for Arnav & to cover it up, she brought for evry1😃
Ahhh! Grrr! This Khushal Dude😡😡
Aww! Arnav babuwa is jealus!! I smelt like something is burning* sniff* sniff*😆
He is in loveee😉
Wow! He went to her house to give back the empty pot!! I liked Khushi's smile😃
That was a cute scene! I had a grin on my face reading it⭐️⭐️
That was a sweettt & cute Update😍
made a huge smile on my face😃
Thnx for the PM😃

Edited by coronapsyche - 13 years ago

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

res.

*EDIT*

had no idea u'd be updating warna wudve commented earlier😕

i was scowling the whole tym DADAJI was being mentioned! KHADOOS!!! huhh!!😒

aaawww poor AMAN he had to lift boxes that weighed abt elephants mass😆 poor fellow😛

he twitched (kinda) seeing AMAN wink at her😲 itni jaldi??😲 chalo good fr me, lemme do a happy dancei am hoping to see a burning with jealousy typa ASR with the next few updates, iss hi baat pe lemme do one more happy dance😆

woOw! that was so very sweet of him (AGAIN) to personally come to her house just to return the tiffin (although i am guessing other motives here or maybe i am over-analyzing🤔)

take care and update soOn buddy😃

Edited by smarty94 - 13 years ago

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Aww...thAt was such a sweet update:)
His khushi's so adorable'!!!
Amazing work! Loved it!:D

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

Aww this was such a sweet update!! You truly are a great writer the way you display the characters..it's throughly beautiful.. 😃 Especially Kushal and Khushi..

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diyawaqas

@diyawaqas

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

i loved it😊

well arnav is so sweeet😃he noticed aman's wink😉 jealous😆hmmm!😆

khushi didn't even know why she was happy😛 she is so sweet😊 just to thank him for helping her in gardening she made jalebis and sweets for every one😊

kushal is rude😡

amazing and awesome update dear👏 keep it up👍🏼

thanks for pm and update soon😊

Edited by diyawaqas - 13 years ago

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#740

Sooo adorable!!

khushi is such a happy go lucky person...and it always leaves the sad gloom effect on me thinkin how traumatic her life had been and that she cant speak

whats up with dada ji 😕

dadi sooo cute...and aman too...love aman khushi raja friendship...this also shows khushi is soo lonely..finding friend in an animal...totally understand it!!

arnav beta..u r already jealous of aman 😆😆

love the mini interactions of greetings between arnav khushi!!

awww she made speciall jalebis to thank him...AWww😳

Amazing update!!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏