Arshi FF~Vines With Thorns~ Thread 1 - Page 25

OH MY GOD!! my poor khushi cant speak😭 hope its temporary trauma not permanent one... she is putting all her thoughts into that dairy as she cant voice them... so sad... i like arnav in this.. he is good..glad to know that he is feeling guilty that he shouted at khushi without her fault and now after coming to know that she cant speak im hoping he apologize to her 😳

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

AWESOME AMAZING UPDATE LOVED IT

WHAT??? KHUSHI CANT SPEAK OR IS SHE JUST TRAUMATIZED BY HER PAST? KHUSHI MYSTERY IS KILLING ME JUST REALIZES KHUSHI DIDNT SPEAK A SINGLE DIALOGUE YET ALL SHE DID WAS WROTE IN HER DAIRY

WAT KUSHAL PROBLEM ACTING LIKE THOSE RICH SNOB I KNOW HER HATE KHUSHI DONT KNOW THE REASON YET BUT DOES HE HATE ARNAV MOM ALSO IF HE DOES MAYBE BECAUSE ARNAV MOM IS DOWN TO EARTH HELPING OTHER N DONT CARE IF THEIR WORKERS N HE A RICH SNOB JUST THINKING WAY AHEAD

CANT WAIT FOR ARNAV TO APOLOGIZE N WONDER HOW HE GONNA DO IT

CONTINUE SOON THANKS FOR THE PM

Originally posted by: -NishaSobti-

Getting quotes for the second time means your happy with my comments and this time I got a gift as well! xD thanks I loved the gift! welcome!

Coming to the update now,

Kushal is an ideal dada that Arnav looks upto but wish he wasn't that mean towards Khuhsi and her Bua, I'm sure there is a reason but still. your on the right tracks.

Devyani still the sweetest of all, loved the quote she quoted of her DIL. thanks for mentioning this. not alot did.😃

Aman always in trouble, lol, wish Dada wasn't so harsh on him. its usual but again theres a reason.

Khushi was absolutely terrified of Arnav this time. definatly. you'll see how much in the coming updates.

Raja you were the hero of the update I must say, clever dog! :D yes love my raja.😃

And coming to ARNAV as usual how ever you portray him, all of us sit and just dream and drool, wish he gets to know the reason soon. lol😆

And yes missy you cut us off so abruptly! :(

Anyways I loved it woman!

You're the BEST!

Love you! thank you so very veyr much.

Interesting.

Originally posted by: pmohini1

U TRULY ARE A FAN FICTION GODDESS!!!! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITINGS!!!!

YOU SERIUSLY ARE A REALLY GOOD WRITER AND THIS STORY IS GOING PLACES MY DEAR! 😉

AND GUESS WHAT!!!!!

^HE APPROVES THIS COMMENT AND YOUR STORY TRACK!

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE OF YOUR MAGIC GIRL!

Hey,

Originally posted by: shraddska

Hey,

First of all really sorry for the late comment... But I got your PM and was a bit busy... no its ok. Thanks for commenting!😳

And then I realised that you write really long updates...😆 I do!? the seem short to me😆

I mean thats real good but I could read it only one at a time due to time constraint... thank you.😳

But every update of yours left me thinking about it... for a long time... hahahaha thats good. 😆

You do have a great style of writing... Very detailed...trying this new style.😳

Ok now the characters too are very interesting... I mean if SP reads your story, I'm sure they'll make a soap opera of it... LOL nice joke😆

Kushal as a strict Dada is a bit annoying at times but yes, it reflects in his character that his grey hair are a result of a hard life and experience... yep! right on but there is more to him that meets the eye for now.😆

Devyani is the perfect mother, exact opposite of her husband, Kind generous and loving... yep.

Khushi's character hasnt been developed yet so can't say much except that her inability to speak was a shock... and yes her bond with raja is real sweet . Thanks for not jumping to conclusions about khushi. its so true that her character isn't out in the open yet.

And Arnav is Arnav... always speaks before thinking and ends up cursing himself... His relationship with Lavanya doesnt seem to be a serious one but Kushal seems to approve of it...ummhmm.😊

Would love to read how this story unfolds and moves ahead... thank you very much

Shradds...

P.S. : Sorry I forgot to mention about Madhumati... She is really sweet and most importantly bearable in your Story... Her loving Nature touches the heart...she's like buaji in the show but with more thought.

The 1980 Flashback in the 1st chapter was really unique and interesting... thank you😳

Also Arnav feeling an instant pull towards Madhu was something very feel good...😊 thanks for spotting