ArHi FF: Diamonds & Pearls NOTE on pg.49[7/1]

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neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

hey nyc concept!!! continue soon nd pm me!!!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

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Oh wowww! Akash works well as Khushi's brother! Their traits match more unlike with Arnav! 😛! And Payal is Khushi's bhabhi... That's great! I loved the bond these three shared! Awww... that was very-berry cute!

And then - enter Mr Arnav Singh Raizada! Whoa - what style this man has! Arrogance personified... Hotness personified... Everything personified...! Hayye - did you have to put him in white? And the mention about rippling muscles? *Scccrreeccchhh - dead!

Wait a sec - Khushi is immediately attracted to him... Oh yeah, who wouldn't?! But this one is gonna be super interesting... Their first meeting was had a totally different aura to it! Was sexily interesting...

Loved it! I'm intrigued to know what happens next...

Updating soonish!

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Babes ur bak!! Mwau! If mm was out f d box this ones is outa universe!! Man ur thoughts are really gifted!! Heheh :D
thanks a ton hun!

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sharme

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic
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Oh wowww! Akash works well as Khushi's brother! Their traits match more unlike with Arnav! 😛! And Payal is Khushi's bhabhi... That's great! I loved the bond these three shared! Awww... that was very-berry cute!

And then - enter Mr Arnav Singh Raizada! Whoa - what style this man has! Arrogance personified... Hotness personified... Everything personified...! Hayye - did you have to put him in white? And the mention about rippling muscles? *Scccrreeccchhh - dead!

Wait a sec - Khushi is immediately attracted to him... Oh yeah, who wouldn't?! But this one is gonna be super interesting... Their first meeting was had a totally different aura to it! Was sexily interesting...

Loved it! I'm intrigued to know what happens next...

Updating soonish!

im happpiiieee...

yes... i though Aakash n khushi had a better bonding as siblings than Payal n khushi... thats why changed the dynamics here... and it worked out well... he hee

and i had to put that guy in WHITE... it works the best magic on the female population...lolz

yeah... Khushi's immediately attracted to him coz she's been away from the males for 3 yrs... i mentioned it nah...

had to create this... afterall its gonna be a bit of M&B in style...he heee

yes i'll update both the ff's regularly... PROMISE

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

first chapter is nice but need to read prologue first..that ff was yours actually there is the same ff on AR as well i thought reading it later but that yours wait let me check prologue than i can understand what you wrote di

and thank you soo much fr dedicating it to m and mathy:D
love you and mathy as well...

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awe some prologue di love it
i dont know what novel you inspire from but it is awe some
love you
mara

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Woooww

I loved bith the phone conversations

The family talk was soo sweet and endearing

And the boss-secretary talk was just right...

So she had a remote work relationshio till date and now she is face to face with the devil himself !!! Wooow

By the way...why did the devil decide to attend now when he hasnt done it before??? Because of the berlin incident or because of a certain secretary...i ges will have to wait till decide to satisfy our overly hyper mind into going in overdrive ( what the hell did i just write)😲

Keep writing

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gangsu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

wow nce. vaitin egerly 4 next update

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

awesome story.. just read the prologue and chapter 1. Very very interesting.. they are meeting for the first time.. hahaha.. this is gonna be fun.. i am already in love with this story too..

you are champ babes.. good work..

arnav is drool worthy for sure and your description of him made him extra drool worthy :)