ArHi FF: Diamonds & Pearls NOTE on pg.49[7/1] - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

eee...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luvd it...i luvd it...

n all d more i luvd ur writing skills...di u hv such amazing writing skills...!!!!😃

akash as khushi's bro is a very nice touch...

n cuming to d important n interesting part khushi cuming face to face wid arnav d hottie...

hahaha...i laughed aloud...khushi's feelings...it will b really interesting to know wat happens next in d lives of d arrogant man n doomed lady...😆😆

n i was soo happy to read dat it is inspired from mills n boons..😳

i luvd to d core d lines u wrote in d beginning...u really play magic wid ur words...!!!!

n a big 🤗for dedicating dis to me n doc...

we both luv u as our dii...⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Nice story. Wanna see how you developed it ... wanna know arnav's reaction on seeing khushi too.
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
m expecting update of this story...

sorry MM... for ditching you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
and yes u din liked my res post yesterday...
us bichare ki koi value nai hai kya... uuhhhuuu...

poor guy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Shruti21

i'm so sorry sunshine that i'm so late...

(it was formality..i din meant it...LOL)

i loved the relationship of the trio aakash,payal and khushi...
that was such a cute family phone talk...

she looks like she swallowed a baby whale..
omg i was laughing so hard over it...

and the lil prince aadhi.. wow.. he reminded me of the child you talked about few days back...

and chui mui..!! seriously sharme... you actually used it... awww..
i was so super happy...😆

payal...she is such a darling.. she shower all motherly love and concern over khushi..

and arnav... pheww... he so just like the show..yet looks different... hehehe...
haved confused opinion about him...uuhhuuhh..

what the if he had to check all the arrangements himself then why to bother the staff...??

He was the last thing she needed, but the first thing she wanted now. So much for keeping strictly away from the male population for the past 3 years...

And at that instant Khushi knew she was doomed....


i just the way you write.. SIMPLE lines with a DEEPER meaning...👏


awesome awesome awesome update...

3 cheers for you girl...
i'm waiting for next part...


hiyaaa... i knew u didnt actually mean that Sorry...
but as long as u read and drop in comments whenevr ur time permits...im happy with that melz...

yeah... i had to give Khushi a happy family in the background..welll...atleast until i reveal her entire past...

Aadhi was truly inspired by NORA...she visits us every single day now at office... such a cutipie...
we're having alot of fun now with her around...
and yes... i call her chui mui and so gave the same name to Aadhi too...

Payal sounded better as Khushi's Bhabi with Aakash being the bro...
it sort of connected well with the stroyline...

and ASR...welll... he's a perfectionist... so he had to attend this event himself to make sure everything is in place after the Berlin incident i mentioned...

wow... 3 cheers to myself... IM SOOO HAPPIIEEE...
love ya melodyyy

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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
heyyy...nice FF...looking forward to it...
could you PM me when you update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
update quick!!! that was awesome!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX

first chapter is nice but need to read prologue first..that ff was yours actually there is the same ff on AR as well i thought reading it later but that yours wait let me check prologue than i can understand what you wrote di

and thank you soo much fr dedicating it to m and mathy:D
love you and mathy as well...

Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX

awe some prologue di love it
i dont know what novel you inspire from but it is awe some
love you
mara

Originally posted by: ..nisaluvrk..

eee...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luvd it...i luvd it...

n all d more i luvd ur writing skills...di u hv such amazing writing skills...!!!!😃

akash as khushi's bro is a very nice touch...

n cuming to d important n interesting part khushi cuming face to face wid arnav d hottie...

hahaha...i laughed aloud...khushi's feelings...it will b really interesting to know wat happens next in d lives of d arrogant man n doomed lady...😆😆

n i was soo happy to read dat it is inspired from mills n boons..😳

i luvd to d core d lines u wrote in d beginning...u really play magic wid ur words...!!!!

n a big 🤗for dedicating dis to me n doc...

we both luv u as our dii...⭐️

im sooo happy u loved it my little swthrts...

@ Maria
thanx for loving it chottiii...
its inspired from Mills&Boon storylines...not exactly from it though...
and i had to do something special for u girls nah... thats y i wrote this for u luv...

@Mannu
thanx hon... and yes... i thought aakash n khushi made a gr8 bro sis duo...
wow... dont we all expect to know wat happens in their lives... u'll just have to wait for a while till i reveal everyhting...
im happiieee that u loved my writing style...

and i love you both as well...😃

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

not now dear... by later tonight...
im writing the chapter now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
I think Ive read the M&B book :) and quite honestly Im liking your version a lot better.

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